Luo Xiaohei's War Notes: After Traveling Through Time, I Just Want to Lie Down

I am really very satisfied with the final choice of the heroine. I was worried about her choice when I saw that the heroine was hesitating. But her final choice made me feel that her personality charm has directly increased and her character image has become fuller. She is a very determined heroine. Although when she accepted an apprentice, I was afraid that she would stay because of her apprentice, but the result was really good. Thank you to the author and the heroine.

This is the first book written by Luo Xiaohei. It has some minor bugs, but it's still acceptable. It just feels like the pace is too fast, maybe you write too much about human life, and you are not quite used to the life of goblins [laughs]. The pace of this life plot is too fast for a fairy. At first glance, it doesn't seem to fit Luo Xiaohei's style. After thinking about it carefully, it is probably based on the style of a big movie. In fact, you can intersperse some daily life before Qingli Gathering Spirits. The current plot points are a bit too full, one thing follows another, and there is no breath. That way, the viewing experience will not be so tiring. I tasted it more carefully. After all, it is the author's setting. After reading the introduction, I thought I could accept it, but it didn't feel like Chi Nian. Chi Nian is the kind of person who is a bit arrogant (but it may be a deviation in my understanding). Its first impression of human beings must be bad, and it will not change over time. Changed too much, unless you realize your feelings so quickly after getting along for a long, long time, emmmmm, it's not like him anymore, and there is no lightness like Luo Xiaohei (the feelings look light on the surface, but after careful taste, you find that they are getting stronger and stronger). This lightness is gone, and there is something weird about it.

I personally like this book very much From the beginning when the protagonist feels alienated when he arrives in the new world, he gradually communicates with and becomes familiar with the new world. From resistance to acceptance, everything is natural, plain and strong, and can affect people's emotions. The last few chapters almost made me cry to death and it was so easy to get into. On one side is my hometown, with family, friends, and partners who have lived together through life and death, etc.; On the other side, I also have very good friends, teammates who fight side by side, and even apprentices who teach me carefully. Even if I know my answer, I will feel very reluctant to leave (no matter which side I want to stay on) (The apprentice is so cute!! My heart melts when I see it) The description of the fighting scenes is also very exciting, and you can build wonderful pictures in your mind based on the words. Although there are some small places where the sentences are not smooth, but generally speaking, it has no impact. This is the fan work I have seen so far that I like Luo Xiaohei Zhanji very much, but it is too short and not enough to watch QAQ By the way, it might be better if there were more stories about the daily interactions between the protagonist and other characters, and the relationship would be more natural and smooth. Even so, I will cry even more when I see the separation plot.

It's good to watch, but the ending feels so melancholy. The heroine chose to leave. I respect the heroine's decision. After all, her family and friends are still there in the original world.

It's beautiful, the writing, the battle scenes, and the inner activities are all very delicate. It's eye-catching to see accidentally! (Speaking of which, why do I feel that Chi Nian has no chance at all) Whisper loudly [Thinking]

It's very beautiful [like] [like], please give it a boost, the author~ Don't stop updating! ! !

It's great to watch. The new world view is awesome and the characters are not OOC. Thank you to the author [Sending my heart]

You can take a look. There are many originals. He was dealt a blow at the very beginning. The heroine made some soy sauce and went home

Fortunately, I finally chose to go home.

Extra is in the short story, I can't find it anywhere [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Help!

It's great, but when will the extra episode come out?

After reading it, I felt a little sad, but I can understand the heroine. After all, the other side is her hometown, with her relatives and friends.

Congratulations on the ending. When will the extra chapter be released?

Finished telling a story. Very good too w

It was interesting at the beginning, but I felt there were some bugs later on, but overall it was pretty good.

It's pretty good, but the ending may be a little too quick. It could have been longer.

It's very interesting. I feel that although the story may develop quickly, the writing style feels like making wine in the morning. ˃ 𖥦 ˂

It's so beautiful and a very novel theme.

It's so beautiful. Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

It's beautiful, very special, has a good thinking angle, and uses your brain seriously.