Dragons: Oath of the Black Swan

I think we can have two female protagonists, Yi and Zero, and we can make one of the few Lu Yiwen [Love] films.

The author should probably write a double heroine. From the current point of view, Miss Secretary is still very suitable for Xiaolu. Xiaolu actually needs someone like Miss Secretary to love him and make him less miserable [crying]

After looking at the current plot development, Lu Mingfei's love story mainly focuses on Zero and Isabel, which is quite new. There are very few love scenes between Xiao Luzi and Isabel in the fanfiction. This is the first one I read. However, this book is a single female protagonist after all, and the main palace can only be Zero. Secretary Yi can write a side story or the author can try to write a Lu Yiwen in the future if he wants [top post]

It's well written, but I think it's better not to write about two female protagonists.

From the first chapter to the present, the psychological descriptions are quite delicate, which is considered acceptable among Tomato's Dragon Clan fandom, but there is one small flaw. Why does Lu Mingfei always sound timid when speaking with ellipses, as if he can't straighten up in front of Zero or Isabel? There are no other shortcomings.

I know it must be zero in the end, but it has always been slightly zero. The sweet and sour writing style in the middle is very similar to Jiangnan, and it feels very good to write a long narrative. The author is already slightly experienced, and it was both sad and secretly satisfying to read. It is recommended to read Yang Yang's book in one sitting, after all, the author's updates are few and slow. It's very similar to Jiangnan [Like] Not only the writing style, but also the plot processing, it's very similar to Jiangnan

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Was Lu Mingfei written too cowardly? Wasn't Lu Mingfei not so cowardly after returning from Japan?

Compared with other Dragon Clan fanfics, this one almost only uses the setting, and the rest are all private settings. The plot is also very different from the fourth and fifth novels, and the characters are also very different from the original works. It can be read as a new book, and it is okay as a Dragon Clan fanfic.

It looks good, but can I add a zero on the label?

I couldn't stop laughing after watching it in the middle of the night. My mother even got up and asked me why I was laughing. It was definitely among the top three fics I've read. It's so good-looking.

The writing is very good, and the writing style is very delicate. It reveals Lu Mingfei's "bad boy" character at all times. He is cowardly and incompetent but full of desire for warmth. It fits the image of the bad boy in the original work. I seriously suspect that he is a Jiangnan trumpet.

It's good to watch, but can you write more about Zero's plot? I read the comments and found out it's Lu Ling, so I came to watch it. Now that I've read it, Zero likes Lu unilaterally [crying], and there aren't many plots together.

Very nice! I've only read a few chapters and already I feel like this. The author's writing style makes me feel very comfortable, and I can definitely get the laughs. It feels like the more I read, the better it gets. But why is the rating so low? Are you trying to score points? This book should be the one I have read in Lu Ling's novel where he can sit at the same table with Shura Chang, his deskmate, and Tianjiang Qingmei.

That's right, this is the Lu Mingfei I'm familiar with

I read it carefully and found it quite interesting. I hope the author will continue to persevere. I rarely see fanfics that have completed Lu Zero, but it should be a single heroine, right? I don't like multiple heroines, if it were me I would run away

I think it's very good, but I'm a little regretful about Elizabeth.

It would be nice if Mingfei was stronger. It would be nice to keep Isabel.

Come on, author, hehehe, I want to see our Lu Ling

Okay, very nice

As long as there is zero, it must be supported

Is there any of Lu Yiwen's? I'd like to see it.

Working hard, when can we see Xiami resurrected? Didn't I remember that I left a cocoon?

It looks really good, but Zero is really too cold, especially the sentence "you don't deserve it". I hope it can taste sweet.

Very nice. Love it. Very nice.

Very good👌🏻worth watching

Good looking, love watching bro

It looks great. I really like it.

The writing is very good, it is a good book

It's like digging into a niche treasure. I feel that the author's writing has his own style. Needless to say, it's even more exciting to see that there are more than 200 chapters that I haven't read yet.

The writing is very good, and the youth's decline and uneasiness are well written.