What Are You Talking About? Let's Talk to My EGO.

B Your work is a newcomer in the field of Yueji. The integration of cards and EGO is just right. However, the shortcoming is that the connection with the plot and the emotional change of the characters are too sudden. The male and female protagonists seem to switch personalities at the beginning and later. Even if it is to speed up the development of the plot, you should know how to proceed step by step. Based on the comprehensive evaluation, I give you a B rating.

Okay, it's very good. It's a very good monthly novel. The progress of the plot is not slow, but there is a female protagonist and the changes in the emotional line are a bit sudden. The part where the Mo family head is campaigning feels a bit abrupt and problematic. All other aspects are excellent. In short, please work hard, author! [Sending Hearts]

The description is good, the foreshadowing is there, and it doesn't seem too abrupt. There are no particularly big shortcomings, and there are no particularly good advantages. But after all, the material selection is biased, and the writing is very good. The author remembers not to interrupt updates, and support it with five stars.

Personally, I think it's okay. Among them, I feel that I can write repentance into Still Liberation. Repentance and Still Liberation can be roughly written in appearance, which is divided into a cross on the top of the head, and the upper rail of the hand emits a pale light. There are two types of attacks when the mouth is opened, one is melee and returns to the gate to cause a range, the other is to cause dizziness when attacking, and the other will cast a white light when it causes damage, causing a lot of mental damage.

The plot is very good, the writing is great, and the fans' feelings are taken into consideration. I just mentioned something about the new plot in the group, and I was asked to add it to several posts. I was so touched.

A+, very good monthly fanfic

Despite the abstract title of his book, the writing is pretty good. It is one of the better ones among the monthly account novels I have read. I recommend them.

I propose that the author should update ten times a day. Who is in favor and who is against [shy]

A+, great needless to say. [Laugh]

Great book, looking forward to the follow-up

Such a beautiful book is free😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋

It's very good, but there are still too few readers. I suggest you take the initiative to recommend books in book circles. Oh Negai, if you can't see the end, Wadaxi [crying]

Good, very good, very good (start to say good)

It's good to watch, but there's little foreshadowing in the plot. Most of the content feels like it was written just as it came to mind. Overall, I'm willing to give it an A. It can be regarded as a masterpiece among monthly articles.

There are too few good monthly calculator books. I think this book can be given a good review.

Keep up the good work, author

Looking forward to three-in-one Bo Ming

Support the new book

Good-looking, love to watch, watch more

It's a very good book about monthly calculations.

Not bad, give me five stars to encourage you.

It looks pretty good, a bit typical but understandable

One of the few books about time travel with a moon counting system

, Good-looking, I think it is a better monthly planner

The author's writing style is good (≧∇≦*), I really like this kind of book, although the title is a bit tough 😁

Looks good on me! Return! Think! Look!

Super, super, super, super, super, super good-looking, not a bad book

Needless to say, A+, one of the few monthly articles that make me feel good.

It's still cool, you can watch it

Although I don't play games, I don't have any dyslexia, so overall it's good.