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It can be seen that the author is indeed young, and his writing style is very green. Let me remind you that if you write this kind of story in the future, you can try not to start from the beginning of the story. The author has written it all in one stroke in the early stage, which is very streamlined. The beginning of the story can be written directly at the place that needs to be written in detail. For example, you can directly write about the recruit training camp at the beginning. When the protagonist says that he and Cao Yuan are inmates, drag out the protagonist's life experience and the reason for entering the fasting center. I like this work very much from the basic setting. The author is a great kid who dares to try. I also hope that the author can get better and better [Sending my heart]

Author, Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 Hun Xi Returns... Hun Xi When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally.

Overall, it's very interesting. The main character has no plot, no ambiguous plot, and the character is a bit fun. I like it very much. But I asked the author about the official version of the original work, and he said that it won't be split, so if you want to see the cb friendship, you can go.

So pretty, so pretty [smile][smile]

It's pretty good among Zhan Shen. From the comments section, it seems that the author is a junior high school student, but he has spent more time reading than a college student like me. This is the first time I've heard of all the jokes in the book, which is quite interesting. It can be seen that the author frequently uses Douyin~(„ಡωಡ„) Shuan Q

It looks good, the protagonist is entertaining, and the writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

It's interesting, very funny, and made me laugh so hard in bed late at night. I was also afraid of being discovered by my mother, so I suppressed it [pouted]

Well, yes, I probably burst out laughing when I was reading this book in bed and my parents found out and beat me up. Yes, yes (*＾ワ＾*) But one thing to say, the protagonist and others are really good, especially Lin Qiye, Shen Qingzhu, and An Qingyu°˖✧︎◝︎(⁰▿︎⁰)◜︎✧︎˖°

Very good. I think the author's writing style is great (at least better than my composition [crying]). There are some places where the sentences don't make sense, but overall it's very good. The setting of the protagonist and the later description are very good. I really like this kind of setting of fun people [laughing] Come on, author [laughing evilly]

To be honest, I quite like this book. Originally, this book had a score of 9.2, But now it only has a score of 7.2 Due to the author's delay. <(ºOº)><(ºOº)><(ºOº)>

Come on, great author. You can definitely write a double male protagonist, it already has that flavor. Although you are a straight man, it doesn't matter!

Very well written. Keep writing.

As long as there is no cp in the later stage, I will continue to read it. The author also writes the type of book that I like. The little things between the protagonist and Qiye and the others are also quite funny. O(≧▽≦)O

It's very beautiful, especially the male and female looks.

I really like the character of the protagonist Leziren! ! ! ! Awesome! ! ! Damn, you are like this (thumbs up), it's so beautiful and I love watching it! ! !

The character creation is really good, and the plot content is also very rich. The author will work hard to update it. [Shy]

Overall it's okay

Can the author find a female protagonist, Gao Xinxin or Chu Xue? These two are so awesome when watching [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

I like this plot

You will know after reading it

It's okay, but there are some typos that haven't been corrected.

It's very beautiful. This is the most beautiful God-killing fanfic I've ever seen. It's invincible.

I feel like I can finish Chapter 100

Not a double male lead, right? This is a very nice book

A very nice book

Well, it's quite interesting. I hope I can write more than 150 chapters.

Anchor I dressed cold in the morning although his sister's ice princess agent please. Or he could be Baili Fatty's bodyguard Gemini man

Update soon, all recent novels have been stopped, I can only say it again

It looks good, but it's hard to hold back laughter in the middle of the night.

Oh my god, the main character is purely fun, but I still like it, hehehe🤓