A Mortal Cultivating Immortality, I Have Six Equipment Slots

Very good idea! The protagonist can be more self-interested, and be careful not to conflict with friendship and wisdom! Also, the parentheses are not necessary! If you are afraid that readers will not understand the meaning and explain it in the text, it will destroy the fluency of reading! Finally, I want to tell you something interesting: Novels are a place of spiritual sustenance for people in reality who have too many concerns and cannot act arbitrarily. It is not really about practicing their own basic behavior in cultivating immortals. That would be too boring. What kind of friendship and relationship are not suitable for the system and the protagonist who is so crooked? Only extreme control and the supremacy of power are the only true solutions. Let the protagonist practice recklessly, fight for strength and even kill, flee thousands of miles, fight to rob, gather all living beings in the world, and gather the essence of all things into one body. The madness in reason is what a time-traveler with crooked melons does instead! [You taste carefully]

This is a really good book in Tomato. The logic is smooth and the language is smooth. Every character in Tomato is considered to be thoughtful. He can weigh the pros and cons of doing things, and he can be happy, angry, sad, and have normal values. Like the protagonist in other books, if the elders who are kind to him have a key that can improve his strength. Bao, the next thing I have to think about is that this elder is either dead or gone, or something happened and he took it away by force. With this article, he will immediately realize that this is a disrespectful idea, and he will not do something he shouldn't do. The article is very smooth to read. I just hope that the author can think normally and write it down, and not be influenced by others.

It's really good to read. I haven't read a fairy tale for a long time and stayed up all night. The setting is interesting, the writing is logical, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are complex and changeable, not so stereotyped, and good-looking. Moreover, what the author conveys, whether it is his own views on the cultivation of virtue, or the choice of warmth and coldness of human relationships, is very consistent. It suits my taste. This is really a good book worth reading carefully. 😄 Recommended. Now I am very anxious to see what the ending will be between Dao Liu and Xiao Zhang. I hope Lao Liu doesn't die. It will be interesting for the two to join hands and fight with each other after the Dao is completed. Moreover, Xiao Zhang should have some relationship with Hongjun. The plot is like this Sure enough, Tomato is seven points out of the book, don't lie to me

I came here after seeing the author saying that the rating* had dropped. In terms of writing, the author's writing is more gorgeous. Although it is not a return to nature, it does not make me feel flashy. In terms of plot settings, everything is intertwined. In my personal experience, there are no poisonous points such as the protagonist being weak as mentioned in the comment section. The beauty is only dormant when the forest wind destroys it. In terms of character design, the protagonist is flesh and blood and has the ability to grow. The latest pictures even have reflective plots, which is unexpected and reasonable. Keep writing, this book is very qualified, and the five stars are from my personal perspective, entirely because this book did not give me any bad reading experience, it is smooth and novel.

There are some shortcomings in the early stage, but the flaws are not concealed. This book is still good at the starting point. It is very good and creative. The story may be a little rubbish in the early stage, but this is a common problem in this kind of novel. But now it has entered a very good creative state. People who give low scores are a bit too much. This is a good book worth looking forward to. I hope it will get better and better in the future.

Judging from the name, it is an ordinary novel full of tomato style, but when you actually read it, you will find that the characters in the book are very delicately portrayed, and some supporting characters also have unique connotations. Moreover, this book does not have some vulgar plots. It is really a good online article and a clean stream among tomato fast food novels. Good-looking😍Good-looking😍

Bookworm. This book is indeed the best among the best on Tomato. The writing is online, the story is logical, and the narrative rhythm is relaxed and relaxed. Not enough to see. Not enough to see. After so many years, this is the first time I have taken the initiative to review a book on Tomato. I keep writing and writing [like] [like] I've been so exhausted from watching lately [pucker][poke][poke]

It's very interesting. To be honest, there have been so many cheat articles in the past few years that it's hard to get interested. This book could have been written more vividly with less cliché and perverted cheats. It's great.

It's okay, but some of the plots are a bit blunt, but it's okay on Tomato, better than most, you can watch it

I just saw the latest one. It has a very good description of the friendship between teachers. I haven't seen such a flesh-and-blood portrayal for a long time. This year I saw the first one of its kind on Tomato. I really like to see this kind of friendship between teachers and students without betrayal.

It's been a long time since I've read a novel, and this is the only time I've read it in the past few years. The characters and plot are well described, the tension is soothing, and the logic and IQ are online. It's not the kind of mindless novel. The only drawback is that the update is too slow, I hope the author doesn't finish it.

The plot is compact, and the world view is very reasonable and complete when you look at it. It is a very thoughtful novel, which is different from a simple enjoyable novel! ! The only fantasy cultivation novel I have read so far has reached this level. Come on, author~

First of all, some good reviews and encouragement. Let me first talk about what I think are the advantages: 1. The writing style is capable and not childish. 2. The description of fighting scenes and environment is relatively detailed. Let's talk about the shortcomings in my opinion: 1. Xing Hao's hostility and difficulty can be written better in my opinion. There are two reasons why Xing Hao targets the protagonist expressed in the article: 1. He is narrow-minded and jealous of the protagonist who is the lucky one to get the Wuji Earth Lotus; 2. He wants to kill the protagonist and extract the spiritual root to get it himself. The first reason belongs to the character setting, and the second reason is actually a bit illogical, because the protagonist who obtains Wuji Tulian at this time is the result of the distribution of interests by the senior officials of the Xianmen. Even if the protagonist dies, Wuji Tulian will not be in the hands of Xing Hao or even Xing Hao's faction. 2. It feels like the pace is a bit fast. I saw some comments saying that the protagonist sacrificed his foundation to save people for a person with whom he had no friendship. Here is my rebuttal: 1. The cost of saving people from the perspective of the protagonist is about two months of wasted skills, and I don't know that it will damage the foundation. 2. It's not that there is no friendship, it's because the author's pace is fast and the supporting characters are not described enough, so there are no memory points. In fact, they lived and died together for a long time. 3. Moreover, my friend's life was in danger, and I didn't have time to think too much. Spending two months trying to save people only made the protagonist more flesh-and-blood. There are currently dozens of chapters, I hope the author can polish them more, and I will update them in the future [Please read carefully]

One thing to say, it is indeed very good, and there are a few points that I feel are remarkable. First, although Gold Finger is strong, it does not break the combat power and has a strong sense of presence. You can clearly feel the superiority and refreshment it brings. There is a sense of superiority that comes from the lack of information and the lack of information. Moreover, the protagonist makes good use of the golden finger. It is not like some characters who are given a very powerful golden finger, but it feels completely unexploited. It feels like a waste of resources and an insult to one's intelligence. The second is that the writing is pretty good. It is not like some books that have good ideas, but the writing is too naive and completely unreadable.

The early rhythm is very good, without cliché foreshadowing or routines. But it's really hard for me to accept the plot of completely losing my skills and rebuilding my skills. Although I know that I will become stronger and deeper in the end, I always feel like starting all over again. Alas, I look forward to the follow-up rhythm and don't be too slow to catch up with the realm as soon as possible.

Except for the illogical and illogical suppression of the protagonist, this book is quite good-looking, and is pretty good among traditional fairy tales. It may only have four and a half stars, but considering the average level of the entire Tomato book, five stars is not too much.

Comment briefly. This book mainly revolves around the five elements and the four major elements. The slow pace overall feels quite good. Especially the protagonist. The only possible drawback is that time feels like it's going faster and slower. Everything else is pretty good. Especially the rhythm becomes more and more fascinating the more you watch it. It seems to be a book about cultivating immortals, but in fact it is not a traditional book about cultivating immortals. Worth watching. [Praise]

The setting is quite good, but this is not a cool article. It is written more like a small character's journey of seeking truth. In fact, the protagonist can rise up even if he keeps a low profile and slowly develops. However, the plot conflict requires that good things come to the protagonist. The innocent protagonist does not know that the gift of fate comes with a price, and the smooth road turns into a bumpy road, but the growth rate increases sharply [sneaky laugh]

The writing is OK. Goldfinger arrived three years later. He spent the first three years struggling in the army. Goldfinger didn't show off everywhere after he arrived. Step by step, the villain's IQ is on the line, and the protagonist can live comfortably, it all depends on what the author will write in the future.

I'm so afraid that I'll feed myself on books to death… To put it briefly, the equipment bar is not an ordinary one that flows every second. The protagonist grows from a low martial artist to a fairy. The transition is very natural. Why do you say Xianxia? Because there is a bit of "righteousness" in the sect. There are conflicts of interest, and of course there will be fights. But most of the top management are restrained and stick to the bottom line... It is rare. There is a feeling that cultivating immortals requires cultivating one's mind. It's a very good basic plan. It's not overpowering at the moment. I hope the author can write better. I was very worried that changing the map would overwhelm or break the combat power system, but I found that the author was able to get it right. It feels satisfying and does not stress the combat power, but it does not become illogical and brainless~~~ You are awesome👍

If a person from a well-known family is upright, let the protagonist fight from level 2 to level 3. There is also a technique all over the world, and everyone can fight across levels. There are also slightly more powerful people who all know what is the hidden meaning of the protagonist already reaching the second level, and what is the imprint of the Five Elements Cycle, which can directly reach the ninth level of the Purple Mansion in the body. Then doesn't the protagonist already have the Five Elements Cycle, so why can't he directly reach the ninth level of the Purple Mansion. You are truly a genius for coming up with this formation. Five first-level spiritual objects are just a five-year sect mission for an inner disciple. To be honest, as long as a slightly better direct disciple can use this formation casually. For people whose foundation is level 1 spiritual objects, what's the use of just setting the upper limit of their cultivation? For outstanding people, time is money, which can save half of the time. There is no need to say more about the value of breaking through the early realm. Some people are even just a few years away from breaking through to the big realm. The benefits to the sect from this big realm breakthrough are definitely higher than those who use first-level spiritual objects.

It's well written, the protagonist is a normal person, and the plot is reasonable and full of ups and downs. There are too many books that Tomato can read but they are buried. Those with high ratings are generally a scam, but those with around 7-8 are the best! I can't stand it anymore…

I almost missed a good book because of the reason (the early writing was similar to low martial arts and martial arts), and I was also delayed by the title of the book, but I couldn't give a good book title. Comments: In the early 20 chapters, I passed the mortal stage and started to cultivate immortality. The idea is very novel, "artificial spiritual roots". The realm of cultivation may have poisonous points and problems, but the problem is not big. There may be a system in the future. The practice system is "supernatural power, fruit status flow", "the fruit status is doubtful", but there is that sign. This book is a slow-burning book, so it is a bit overwhelming. The calculations in the early stage may be a bit frustrating, but after that, it becomes better and becomes more exciting as you read. This book combines Journey to the West, "early place names, and four continents". It also incorporates the "Apothesizing of Gods". The Jiang family lineage, Daqi Dynasty, I wonder if the descendants of Jiang Ziya have the "Apothesizing of Gods", which can temporarily canonize gods. Then there is the prehistoric period, where the protagonist belongs to the sect, Shangqing Taoism, Jiejiao, "Shangqing Lingbao Tianzun". Now that I see this, it really makes me happy, it's delicious.

Personally, I think the worldview of this book is reasonable, and I like it more. Perhaps you fellow Taoists are used to reading deceitful novels about cultivating immortals, and feel that cultivating immortals can only involve taking things by force, and that people who do not serve themselves will be punished by heaven and earth. But I think: whether in the world of cultivating immortals or in the real world, there are masters who serve the country and the people, heroes who sacrifice themselves for others, as well as insidious and cunning villains, and many ordinary but strong ordinary people. This is normal. If there are only selfish and selfish people in the world, the world will never develop. In the same way, if there were only heroes, the world would soon perish. Fellow Taoists, my personal opinions are welcome. Corrections are welcome!

The magical golden finger in the equipment slot allows the protagonist to shine thousands of years after the Legend of the Gods. Seeing that he wanted to inherit the unique skills of Zhu Xian's Four Swords and revive Jiejiao. The writing of this book is exquisite, the plot is reasonable, and there are basically no poisonous points. It is really a masterpiece of fairy tales. If I have to find fault, it would be the Dragon Ball obtained at the beginning of the chapter. The treasure of heaven and earth that the sect values ​​so much is quickly becoming popular, and high-level treasures are simply endless. The former sect strongman Zifu Realm soon became worse than a dog walking all over the place.

Five-star support, the author has good skills, but the score of this book is a bit ridiculously low. There are some problems in the portrayal of the protagonist's character. Sometimes he is easy to be good and sometimes he is evil. If the score continues to be like this, I suggest the author speed up the progress of the plot and start a new book. Tomato people are quite picky.

Chapter 137 is not bad. At present, I feel that there are only six golden finger equipment blocks, which is a bit low. Also, the mentality of the protagonist is really bad. The author often writes about all kinds of frights or fears. At first, I understood it. Later, I felt that the protagonist did not cultivate his mind. I hope the author will change it. After all, it has been so long, and his heart has grown. The other things are very well written, especially the various heaven and earth spiritual objects. The effect is really good.

This is an aboriginal with a golden finger, completely lacking the brains and imagination of a time-travelling person. He is still a good person. The Holy Mother has a master who feels like a backdrop unless he takes the initiative to find him.

It's a traditional novel about cultivating immortals, and then comes a cheat, but the author's writing skills are very good, and he doesn't rely entirely on this cheat, but the pace is a bit draggy, but it's okay, it's pretty good-looking, I like it a lot

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