A Multiverse of Batmen from the Start: I Play the Dark Knight Returns Batman

The writing is very good, very good. The heroes are the heroes, and the villains are the villains, but the follow-up is not very good. After all, the heroes can only write those things, and the villains can only write those things. If you can write a long-term story without improving the power system and copying, that is already the level of a top author. Unfortunately, the level is obviously not up to it.

The Batman story is pretty good. I haven't rated it before, but I found out that it now has a score of 6.6. I feel it should actually be around 8. It looks better than Batman Wears a Spider. The inspiration for this book may be Chen Tao's Batman, but I think that book is too subversive. This one is more suitable for me.

I think "Batman" will always be a sane paranoid and madman. As long as you don't violate your own bottom line, you can use any means to achieve your just goals. I feel that the author has written a little bit of the Batman in my heart. The writing is great, come on author, as long as the core character of "Batman" identity does not collapse, I will keep reading it. [Blowing kiss]

There are no problems at the moment. It's pretty good. It's probably Tomato's best Batman fanfic. I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist.

I don't know what to say. After all, when I read DC fan fiction, I just want to see stories that change Gotham and make Gotham a better place.

I'm curious about the protagonist's fighting skills and what's his current position in the book? In the previous chapter, Bronze Tiger once said that the protagonist's fighting skills lacked a more personal touch. But I feel that in the original comics, the fighting skills of other heroes cannot have a more personal touch. However, I feel that in the original comics, the image of Batman himself as a bat is a reflection of his fighting style. Also curious? , When the protagonist reaches 100% of his first role as Batman, does he himself have fighting skills equal to Batman?

The writing is very good. I hope that I will play a different role as a multi-dimensional bat in the future [laughing]

Finally a normal Batman

I can give it good reviews, and it's considered a Tomato Gold Pick. The character design is good, and it doesn't go too far away from the original characters to satisfy self-obsession or force the plot to advance. The narration is also very good, and it can be considered a comfortable one in Tomato. The main reason is that there is not so much system intervention, and the characters and plot can be maintained at a good level, which is very good. I don't know if the characters will be destroyed later like other superhero fandoms.

The plot is probably quite interesting. It's just that the order of some events is different from the original work. But since it's said to be a parallel world, it doesn't matter so much. As long as this parallel world is written well [laughing] [laughing]