A Mortal Girl's Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Her Innate Charming Body

After thinking about it, I still give it five stars. There are some minor flaws, but since the author is a novice, I think the writing is okay in this case. Personally, I suggest that some places should be written in detail, so that the difference between immortals and mortals is not too prominent. This is caused by abbreviations. The author still needs to grasp the details of the plot. I haven't read too much yet, I'll add some comments after I do. (I don't think there's any problem if you change your marriage. After all, you've changed your gender. If you've changed your gender and you're still single, you might as well just start the story with a girl and be done with it.) Generally speaking, the author's writing is okay. This book is worth reading. There is still a lot of room for improvement in writing [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Overall it looks very good, the plot is very good, and is the male protagonist Ren Xunzhi? [Thinking][thinking][what] I can't even see the male protagonist for such a long time, so bad reviews [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

It's okay, but I can still feel the faint female smell [thoughts]

Four stars, it's a very traditional story about transformation and immortality. The biggest problem right now is that the plot is too idealistic. There is no psychological change of the heroine's first murder, and there is no more complex human nature... Under the jurisdiction of a corrupt official and treacherous minister, the lives and characters of the people are too idealistic. Therefore, four stars is the rating this book deserves.

I feel very good about this novel. Come on, I must stick to it.

Well written and beautiful

Very nice, cheers author

Looks good, I hope you stick with it

Very nice book

Come on, author, it's very interesting. The writing is very good, but I suggest that the author can write more waves. I feel that it is a bit bland when I read it now. I saw it before I entered the sect.

I feel good. Come on, author.

It's okay, it's chapter 30, there's nothing wrong with it so far

It's good-looking. The heroine's character has the pride and dignity of a man in her previous life, but also the charm and softness of a woman in this life.

It's a pretty good gender transition novel, but not many people have read it. Maybe it's a newly opened book. It's well written. I hope it won't stop updating. One chapter a day is fine.

Come on, author, you must keep updating. I will keep following the updates [sending my heart][sending my heart]

Take a look first, hope not to rush into the street

Then hurry up and let the hero appear

Not bad, you can take a look

It's okay, let's take a look first

Good looking, for me

Isn't this pretty?

One sentence is well written

I just read it as a normal fairy tale, and it was pretty well written.

The writing is quite good. The important thing is that it doesn't make the heroine feel weak. The change of mentality is also good. Come on!

This book is very beautiful! Highly recommended!

Although there are many classic scenes, the character portrayal is still quite good. [Exploration]

Good-looking, very good-looking. Men are strong and women are strong [laughing]