Dragon Raja: Another Worldline

"Dragon Tribe" written by Jiang Nan is very literary and artistic, and the description of small things in life is very graphic, which makes it easy for readers to get involved. It is really not easy to write good fan fiction. The writing is good, and the emotional drama is okay. As long as it doesn't get too confusing at the end, it will definitely be a good book. Good luck, author.

It's good to read, although the emotional line feels a bit rushed, and I don't know how to describe a girl's youthful and budding thoughts, but since the author has never been in love, it's good to be able to write it like this. I look forward to the follow-up, come on! [Sending Hearts]

It's well written. I hope that Su Xiaoqiang and the others can have plots in the main plot later without having to write extras. I also hope that Teacher Nono Xiami can also be the heroine [Adore][Adore][Adore] I hope to collect all the nannies as a harem [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The writing is very good, and the viewing experience is great. I finished reading it in the middle of the night. It is reasonable and reasonable to have regrets in youth. …But in reality, no one has regrets, so don't fill it in the book, okay? [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Let Liu Miaomiao find a chance to stuff it in. There are so many descriptions, and she is just a plot tool. I didn't even dare to watch the extra episode, but I really jumped into it (I watched it later and found out why it was a bit sad). I really felt uncomfortable in the middle of the night. Don't be so cruel. The author's big hands can exert force, but there are a lot of airborne characters next door. Please, hakizuo [cry][cry]

Author, I know Liu Miaomiao will not be the heroine, but can you write an if line [crying] (preferably before Mingfei goes to Kassel), and write an ending where Mingfei does not go to Kassel and is with Liu Miaomiao. As long as you write it, I promise to reward you with a more exciting one [crying]

So far, it seems to be my favorite among the Dragon Clan fanfics I have seen on Tomato. One of the few in Tomato has a writing rhythm that can have a bit of a green-faced beast edge. The character of Concubine Ming written by the author is more like Long 4 and the other characters are also very close to the original book. The main thing is not to stud. In my humble opinion, what I watch when watching The Dragon is how the author with a youth syndrome depicts Lu Mingfei's youthful love. It's the kind of story where the stud protagonist has a full harem, which is tasteless. So far, there is not much content in the book. Liu Miaomiao's writing can be said a lot. The origin of Liu Duilu's emotions can only be said to be well written. I really liked the content of getting along with Lu and the emotional warming after that. After reading that kind of young girl's love, I compared it with Jiang Nan's portrayal of Liu Liaolao in the original book. It can be said that the author's Liu Miaomiao perfectly fits what Jiang Nan wrote and is more three-dimensional. And Lu Mingfei's choices after Liu Farewell also looked very bad. After reading this paragraph, I feel that this book is not popular in the dragon fandom circle only because it was published on Tomato. Finally, I saw that the update frequency of the latest findings has decreased. I can only say that I hope the author will work harder. I really like it. It doesn't matter if the peptide bond is slower, as long as I can finish it. I wish you good health and delicious food when you see this.

It's pretty good, but some of the descriptions may be too deliberate to learn the taste of Jiangnan, but they are too embellished. Secondly, I personally feel that senior brother is not saying that Lu Mingfei should not interact with ordinary people according to Jiangnan's writing. After all, Long Erlao Lu and Chen Wenwen are dining at the Caesar restaurant that senior brother found at Night Watch. Personally, I feel that Xiaotiannu and Liu can both take it seriously.

Now that I've read Miaomiao's turn, let's give it a five-star rating. Although the description at the beginning is a bit unfamiliar and detached, the feeling in the end has been handled very well. The content of this large chapter is still quite good - oh, but the regret of youth, Miaomiao is such a pity.

I can't say enough, brother, it's so beautiful, the writing is really good, and the plot is not boring. There's no need to rate it now, just five stars. I hope the author can give me more roles (if possible), come on, author!

I hope there will be Nono. Now that we have Nono, what about the Tsundere and the Tablet King [laughing]