Star Iron************

All I can say is that it looks great, and I really like the setting. However, there are two problems. One is that the number of words is too few, and the other is whether the description of the heroine can be reduced. I feel that it looks awkward. I have read the Bengtie fanfic. Do you still not know what the heroine looks like? Overall it's pretty good, cheers to the author [blowing kisses] Why did it suddenly become popular? [What]

It is a very good book. It should be read by everyone who loves Star Iron. It was a bit embarrassing when I first read the introduction. It was a bit like the author's first time writing a book and he was so excited and excited about not knowing what to write. But when I clicked in and took a look, I found that the writing style is quite mature, the plot design is also very reasonable, the emotional description is also very delicate, and there is no poisonous point. Well, it is a good book.

As usual, five-star reviews encourage yourself. This book review is to explain the setting problem of why the train set can arrive in the first reincarnation. First of all, it is written in the game plot that Nanook was only born less than 4,000 years ago, but the re-creation and eternal return in the scepter have been calculated more than 60 million times. The calculation of the scepter must have been after the birth of Nanook. Assuming that one reincarnation takes 4,000 years, the 60 million reincarnations can be concluded that the difference in time flow rate inside and outside the scepter is more than 150 million times. Therefore, the protagonist changes the ultimate protocol to make the calculation speed inside the scepter equal to that of the outside world. In addition, the passage of five hundred years makes it possible for the train set to come back in the first reincarnation. As for the future time flow problem, Lagus will definitely spend time repairing the time flow inside and outside the scepter after learning about the change of the protagonist, but that cannot be solved in a short time. After all, it is the ultimate agreement to change the life. Of course, this is my own opinion. As an ordinary author who writes fan fiction, I cannot guarantee that all logic is correct. My book will not write about thirty million reincarnations, and it is not an invincible novel, so private settings are inevitable. But as long as there is such a possibility in my own opinion, it is enough to make sense. As for the chance, why the train set just arrived... The protagonist has traveled through time and has a plug-in, commonly known as the Son of Destiny. It should be reasonable to have some chance. There are only so many explanations. Whether it is reasonable or not, I have already written it this way. What I wrote is just a dumpling-making article to make up for my regrets. There is only so much I can guarantee. As for how to clear the level without the eternal return and how Demiuge grows, I will try my best to complete it with my own ideas in the future (it has already been written in the outline). Just like changing the time flow rate, there must be private settings, but when I write it, there must be a reason for the result, rather than fabricating it out of thin air.

Let me tell you my humble opinion: let's not let go of the assumption that this is the real first experiment, and the main line is to get the best ending that can be achieved through constant repetition (countless stories with the same and different main lines are constantly happening). My idea is that in the initial reincarnation, the Iron Tomb was solved without relying on the train set, but the impact was too great and was sealed in memory, and then the reincarnation began (assuming that the universe restarted here, it was a reincarnation without the train set). In the endless repetition, we were attracted to the train set due to coincidence, and then we kept repeating the calculation of the train set (in the end, this is what we look like in the main line) And here is the original appearance before the memory has been maintained (I imagine that the memory defeated the iron tomb in the end, but because the ending was too desperate, I made the choice of ending B, and chose to start over together to find a good ending). The protagonist and the train solve this crisis together, but it is a victory that can be achieved without anyone filling in the cause and effect. (After all, this is the if line. After eating the main line knife, don't make it difficult for yourself anymore and make a good dumpling.) I don't know what you're thinking, but now I feel like I can't think of any other way for you to write a good ending except for Ascension to Fuli and the cosplay of Heihe (it seems too late now).

The real moving part of this comic is not the gaudy scenes, but the irreversible love. The end of the tragedy of troubled times. From their meeting in the temple to their farewell at the execution ground, Lu Bu and Dong Zhuo were supposed to be masters and servants, father and son, but instead they were portrayed as a series of events. Lu Bu was originally devoted to Dong Zhuo, but due to Diao Chan's intervention and power tilt, he became jealous and resentful. When his adoptive father left, he burst into tears, mixed with love and hate. In the silence after the execution, Lu Bu rode away alone, his back lonely, as if he had left the world behind him. That "General" became an abyss of guilt and longing for him. In the end, this work interprets the cold and hard historical events into the legend of the most miserable mandarin ducks in troubled times.

Haochi, a rare good grass in Ompharos. The author has a good grasp of the rhythm and can explain the beginning and the golden finger clearly within three chapters. However, I personally think that the value increases too fast and needs to be properly suppressed. The experience level system is the most inflated type of value. I hope it can be well controlled.

About half of the books were dead, so here I am. I was following up on the reading, and then the author suddenly stopped reading. I thought he would come back after a month just like last time, but I didn't expect that this time it would be goodbye forever ((( foggy The subjective judgment is that it is a eunuch, so the evaluation is given: A- The rhythm of the content is excellent (if you can accept multiple female protagonists), the description is not rich, and the literary quality is not high. But what kind of literary quality does a web article need (just kidding), so it is given an A+ level. If the description is slightly improved, it can be rated as S-. But he became an eunuch, so he was demoted to A-. I originally wanted to give him B+, but after thinking about it, there were still some bottom books in B+, so I gave him A-.

The plot design is interesting and reasonable. He is one of the few normal protagonists I have seen so far in the opening of Ompharos. The protagonists in other novels are either entertaining or entertaining. The protagonist of this book is a normal person, and it is not obtrusive to read. However, there are too few updates, and the author is not good at writing, which makes it uncomfortable.

I feel that the moves and skills in martial arts novels are useless and can only be used to beat ordinary people. In Star Iron, the strongest skills are large-scale AOE skills, and the moves and skills are only suitable for showing off skills. The main purpose of star iron is to enhance inner energy.

The book is good, but there are too few. I have never played this game, but I heard others say that the birth of the Iron Curtain was inevitable, and the protagonist's panel allows the protagonist to unlimitedly improve his abilities, and even absorb the devouring power. This completely allows the protagonist to get all the demigod powers in reincarnations. This not only changes their destiny, but also strengthens their own strength. Wouldn't it be nice to prevent Bai E from eventually becoming Emperor II? It can be considered a perfect ending. I don't know if the other Star Gods can catch a glimpse of the training ground of Omphalos. If so, with the protagonist's belief in protecting his friends and his will to destroy Lygus, he can be a protector and destroyer. [Sneaky laugh] [OK]

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I can only say that the writing is indeed pretty good. As long as there are more updates and it doesn't crash in the later stages, it will be 9 or above. There are too few updates, not even 4,000 in a day. It belongs to the category of just letting things go. Whether this book can survive at this rate is a question.

It's okay. I've finished reading it now. It's in the top ten among the Bengtie fanfics I've read. Come on, the author, please write more. The description of the heroine is also very good. It restores the character to a great extent without too much occ (this is great) [Like][Like][Like]

It's beautiful, the story flows very well, and the emotional lines are well written. It's worth reading. In the harem, except for Polysia and Tiriscipios, there are all the golden women. To be honest, it's a bit of a pity [already planted]

It's really good

Try to fight the iron tomb to death. It is best to die so hard that you can't die again. The masters of the system must use their strength, otherwise Xi Lian will have to continue his endless reincarnation.

It's okay, there aren't too many bad points, the plot is pretty smooth, the dialogues aren't that awkward, and there aren't too many cool characters. To be honest, I hate those stories that are full of memes. Every once in a while, if there are memes, it makes people feel bad. There are also emotional lines, at least they are not for nothing. Among so many fans, I am one of the few that I think I can watch. I hope it won't be too eunuch later, and it won't be too outrageous.

When will the old work be resurrected? [Crying] I can do anything, Onigai [crazy]

The time doesn't seem right

Very aggressive chop

So far, it seems that it is edible and tastes good. I suggest you update more while the popularity of Weng Xing is still there, otherwise not many people will read it when the popularity is over. Three chapters a day shouldn't be too much. What does one chapter a day mean?

The writing is beautiful, but one chapter a day... I have almost forgotten the plot. Or keep it for a while, but I'm afraid I'll die [cover face][cover face]

It's really beautiful. I hope it will never end, but this is definitely impossible. After all, no matter how long the story is, it will end at some point, right? (Xi Lianyin)

Come on, the writing is very good, but it only took a few hours to finish reading. Also, the protagonist will die later. Will the fire of the earth be resurrected with the protagonist, or will the protagonist retain the power but the fire will stay?

It's quite good-looking, the setting is very novel, and it really pokes me. There are no surprises at the moment, but the updates are slow. It took a long time to update a chapter of TvT.

Does the heroine have three months?

It's a bit interesting, I was fascinated watching it It's really well written [adoration][adoration][adoration] I have to say that the rhythm is really perfect, there is no abrupt or dragging feeling at all, it is just right. The author is really capable, and I also like the portrayal of the protagonist very much. The combat power is perfectly grasped, and most of the highlights of the protagonist are Krypton life. It is not an invincible style or a loser style. The portrayal is lovable, I like it [Blow kiss]

Haokang, very Haokang

It's been recommended online, otherwise you won't be able to retain people, and you may easily lose your support if you push people to support the book.

Good, great, no need to say more