Comprehensive Comic: a Journey to Another World Starting from the Star Iron Template

It's nice to watch, but the main character seems to be tempted. If you like a non-heroine, you should think about it.

So far, there are no poisonous points, and the world view is good. It's just that the number of chapters is a bit too small, so I can't tell much yet. Just past the first copy, things were just starting to unfold. Don't do it, Demon Slayer looks full of special effects, but the actual force value is not high. The original author has stated that fire, water, lightning, etc. Are all fake special effects. Regarding Goldfinger, I don't know if the author has any foreshadowing. But I don't really like overly active Goldfinger, it's better to be a 'dead thing' without self-awareness. Because I don't really like things that are beyond my control, especially something I rely on like Goldfinger. Secondly, I started reading novels in 12 or 13 years. I have read a lot of books like Golden Finger Backstabbing, which made me feel a little bit psychological.

First couplet: Honkai Impact II can't save the world, and can't stop the protagonist group from dying. Zhonglian: Genshen cannot save everyone and cannot prevent others from dying. Neck Link: Honkai Impact III can't save Himeko, and can't help Kiana Mei Second line: In Ompharos, you can't save the Golden One, you can only kill your companions one after another. Hengpi: Captain, travelers, pioneers, we, can't do anything, oh no, you finally have some growth in Ompharos, after all - they were killed by you yourself! ! !

Chapter 24, not bad, both single women and harems are acceptable, but don't fall in love with someone you meet. Chapter 76, the Demon Slayer chapter doesn't have my highlights.

Demon Slayer... Your previous content saved you and blocked the negative comments I was about to spout.

The novel is good, with sufficient settings and relatively detailed psychological descriptions of the characters. However, the ratio between the plot and the psychological portrayal of the characters needs to be slightly adjusted. It is best to consider the use of language again. Beautiful enough language will look good anywhere. A little improvement in writing style will make the novel look and feel much better. In addition, the author may also use some AI for assistance. It is best not to use the AI's own language, because the AI's expressions will lack a lot of emotional sincerity. But you generally don't make much money writing novels on Tomato. Writing in the way you like is the most important. Finally, I hope you can be happy every day!

I think it's okay. I hope it will get a rating close to that of Playing Robin. The shortcoming is that there are a little few updates and few chapters. It doesn't look good from the front, but it looks better as you go to the back.

I read Chapter 5, poisoned for the second time, and talked about the problems that have been exposed so far. The talent is beyond the standard, and there is no need to give templates. Fortunately, the person who is not dead is a Rakshasa, who is easy to be stabbed in the back. As we all know, even ordinary people in Star Iron are supermen in real life. No matter how bad Rakshasa is, he is still a high-level fertility walker. What will happen next There are several possibilities: not to suppress the combat power, to directly sweep invincibly, or to go to a powerful world and be beaten to the side of the road. The combat power to be suppressed is 50-50 equal to that of the lower world. I read the review of the book to suppress the combat power. I may not be able to beat Shiangshen in Demon Slayer. In summary, it is too big to suppress the combat power. I won't read the rest. If you can read it, you can go in.

The second world is not very good, mainly because I am tired of seeing worlds like Demon Slayer and Naruto, so let's try another different world. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Deducting one star for Demon Slayer is really because I'm tired of watching it. I will change it back after I finish writing it. Of course, if the next world is a world that has been written badly like Naruto and Pirates, I will continue to deduct stars⭐

It's awesome, the protagonist's IQ is always online, and the relationship between the characters is handled very well. It's one of the very few novels that is very satisfying to read. The author's average chapter length is 4,000 words, but I still want to update it quickly [making a face]

Why do birds fly? Because they must fly into the sky. When the final meteorite falls in the Cretaceous period, only free birds can escape from their destined demise. In order to prevent the sun from setting, I fly into the sky and take away your light. I will melt because of it and fall to the sea. But in order to take it back, you must fly to a higher place than me. This is the logic of adulthood after transcending childhood. Ghost Face Kado heroine, author, are you filled with yellow? At first I thought there was no female protagonist, then I thought there was only one female protagonist, but it turned out to be multiple female protagonists and a young female author. You are awesome. Then I will see if I can get a long review? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Women are like giving it away for free. How have you changed some things? At first it was said that the protagonist has no feelings for girls, then he likes girls, and then he has multiple female protagonists. I thought you had no female protagonists at first, but it turns out you have multiple female protagonists, so forget it. You have to write at least a little bit of emotion. But you don't even write about emotions and there is still a young girl. Why do you like this so much? It's okay if you write many female protagonists but can't express emotions. You also write about a young girl. Fortunately, you didn't write about a young girl. How about that? If you write it, I will be the first to report it to you. I saw that it became more and more popular later on, using other people's faces to fall in love with others, and there were so many relationships.

The author writes well, the protagonist is very charming, the characters are not exactly the same, at least there is no sense of inconsistency, and the plot is also good, especially the part where the protagonist solves the shortcomings of the character template and turns it into his own strength, but I personally feel that there are three problems; First, for the protagonist's talent, you can draw a lottery as soon as you enter the new world. If the protagonist has any difficulties, you can directly draw them to solve them. In other words, if the talent is too high, it will affect the game experience; Second, learning skills in different worlds is one of the charms of Infinite Stream, but now the protagonist's abilities come from talents and the mall. Although there are many methods, they have nothing to do with the world the protagonist experiences; Third, the issue of female protagonists. In fact, as long as the author can write it well, both multiple female protagonists and single female protagonists are fine. However, due to Qianbian's reasons, in the future it may become a situation where a female has a crush on the protagonist, and the protagonist has no reaction, but because Qianbian likes it, then he will accept this situation; The author can pay attention to these issues. Finally, I hope the author will not stop updating. Come on, author! ! !

Man and ape say goodbye. Only a few stones have polished it, Childhood time. The flames turn in the copper and iron furnace, Why did you guess when? Only a few thousand cold and hot. It is rare in this world to smile, and we bow to each other on the battlefield. Bleeding everywhere, Jiaoyuan blood. After reading this article, I felt like my head was spinning, but I remembered only a few spots and a few lines. The five emperors and three emperors deceived countless passers-by. How many romantic figures are there? After stealing Zhizhuang and gaining fame, King Chen stood up and waved the yellow ax. The song is not yet finished, the east is white.

The first volume is okay, but the second and third volumes always seem to have a feeling of overwhelm. It's like it's easy to push the end of the second volume, but it lingers there for several chapters. The third volume takes the lead. To be honest, I don't really like this kind of thing, so I'm waiting for the third volume to be finished to see what the fourth volume will be.

I have a small question. Some paragraphs have an AI-like feel to them. Did the author use AI to assist?

It's a pity that the last book was a good one. I liked it a lot, but it wasn't very easy to write in the later stages. I feel like the author wrote this book quite well and has greater potential.

You just tricked others into getting in. What does this book say? It's a bit watery, and the update speed is a bit slow. One or two pictures a day, most likely one. It's okay to sleep on this article. If you can wear a lot of pieces, it should be okay. If you read them one by one, it's okay, not too bad. I want to read this book, which is the best way to keep a book.

The Goblin chapter was very enjoyable to watch, but when it came to Demon Slayer, weird bugs began to appear in some places.

The best friend's Arad continent story is much more interesting than the protagonist's!

Goblins are still the best among Slime Demons. Goblins in other worldviews are low-level brainless creatures. In fact, the earliest setting of Goblins was alienated elves, called goblins. They are ugly in appearance, but not so wretched.

The book is very good but updates too slowly. Basically, one page per day is not enough to read. Except for the excitement in the outer world, it is even slower to read after returning to the main world. There are not many chapters now. What I want to read are the wonderful stories of the characters in each world, but I don't want to follow one story for a few months. I'd better wait for a few months before talking about it.

The surprise is good, the beginning is good, there is no SB plot, and the characters' dialogues are comfortable and like normal people

It's good-looking, the characters are described very delicately, and there's nothing pretentious about it. I feel like the heroine is probably a sword spirit

It's good, but there are not enough chapters to read [I'm about to cry]

It's quite good. I've added it to my bookshelf since I recommended it. After reading the first chapter, I've been stocking up on it for about half a year. It looks like it's going to be finished. It won't be finished after finishing the epilogue. I don't allow it. There's still a lot I haven't read yet. I hope this book can reach a thousand words [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Bookworm certified grass jelly

Very well written, the best book I have read recently

Very good, but how did the author's daily update get on the recommendation list?

It's a good book. The author writes it well, but the world selection is not very good. Whether it's brother slayer or demon slayer, they are too popular. I have seen too many. I hope the next world can give me a fresh feeling.

Very good, worth seeing