Palm Print Is Too Inferior

The writing style is very delicate, and the inferiority complex of the male protagonist is vividly described, but it is a bit too sadistic. It seems that no matter how high the male protagonist climbs, there will only be hardships, and he just tells another reader. There is too much foreshadowing in the early stage, but it is a bit lengthy. I hope it can be improved a lot and let the male protagonist be redeemed as soon as possible. Stop blindly suffering from yourself [cover face][cover face][cover face]

The author's subject matter is novel, the writing is smooth and delicate, and the male protagonist is so miserable😭It hurts to look at it... Can you write more about how powerful the male protagonist becomes after he grows up? After suffering for so long, the male protagonist must be arranged to stand on the highest peak! He must avenge himself, trample all the injustices and those who bully him under his feet, and repay him ten times or a hundred times! ! Also, the love with the princess must be beautiful [crying] Don't be too cruel

It's good to watch, but the early stage is too long. I like to watch people who have grown up, but don't be too sadistic. This kind of novel should be about protection, but it is written as redemption. This is the first time I read this kind of redemption, so I feel that it is not well written. The male protagonist should be written as authority. Extremely, even if her body is defective but not particularly uncomfortable, the heroine can still continue to walk the path of being gentle and virtuous. This gentle and virtuous character is only internal, but a bit arrogant and domineering externally. The male protagonist will become a sickly and loyal dog when he grows up, biting like crazy to the outside, and close to the inside. Perverted loyalty, the kind that even commits suicide without hesitation. Ten chapters at most are enough for the preliminary preparation. If not, add a little emotional line to explain the beginning of redemption. Growth in three to five chapters, and then one hundred and eighty chapters can be written about what happens after growth. You can write down the hero's crazy loyalty to the outside world and the almost perverted loyalty at home to the extreme. You can also add a little palace change to write out the hero's determination to strategize and rule the world. Finally, kneel down and hold it in hand and give it to the heroine, even if it is the hero who approves the memorial in the end! If it is written like this, you can add a little bit of the psychological changes of the heroine Xianyu! The whole novel is fluent and I am particularly willing to read this kind of article, really! This book by the author Da Da is also very beautiful. I just hope that I can make more improvements in the future and write a new book based on my idea. Please, Da Da! After seeing the reply, I gave it four stars instead of five because the final ending was a bit bad. It was like hiding in the world. Things would be better if there was more fireworks or rights. I saw the reply. You can abuse your body, but not your heart, and you can also abuse your heart, but I just hope it's the female protagonist to the male protagonist, not anyone else! It just flaunts the purpose that you are my thing and no one can touch it! Is it okay? Big! See reply

Can I ask who this is? The author, I really feel that it was too painful in the beginning. The heroine is also a very, very good little girl. I really don't want to see the ending of the two of them being tortured and not good, so I want to ask first [crying]

The author writes so well. But I feel like the progress can be made a little faster

The male protagonist is too miserable, right? [Crying] The female protagonist is also young and can't help it

When will the male protagonist be able to become a palm print? Don't be so miserable. Although it is a male abuse, it is too painful and painful to watch😖😖

This writing style is not like Tomato's writing. Many descriptions are very delicate, the picture is very strong and has a sense of substitution. The dramatic conflicts are also well described, but it feels that it will be very challenging to the audience. In this fast-paced era, this kind of writing may seem a bit tired.

The writing is delicate and touching. The author writes very well, and the details are very detailed. The plot is compact and ups and downs, but the male protagonist is too pitiful. I will not be so pitiful when writing male protagonists in the future. The female protagonist is also well written, highlighting the image characteristics of the female protagonist. Overall, it is not bad and beautiful.

The front bedding is too long.

The author's writing is very detailed, fascinating, and the writing is smooth and vivid. It is really great! Come on, big brother, if you can write, just write more [laughing]

The writing is superb, but the early stages are so brutal. The descriptions are so good that I felt vision pain. I survived the early stage and burst into tears when I saw the ending. Unlike those casual novels that are forgotten after reading them, the names and stories of Shen Jie and Yi Yang are firmly engraved in my heart. Highly recommended, Xiaochang! ! Come on, author! Looking forward to other works!

Very sadistic, I think it looks good [like] [send heart] The most uncomfortable thing is that I feel that the writing is a bit biased, and I feel that it is a summary. My main point of view in the next dozens of chapters is that the female protagonist has brought a lot of trouble to the male protagonist. It feels like the female protagonist has caused the male protagonist to have no peace in his life. How should I put it? I don't know how to put it.

I have suffered too much in the past, and my life has been hanging by a thread many times. It is really miserable, but the reality may be more cruel, but overall it is quite good.

It hurts so much, I saw phantom pain [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The author writes very carefully

Delicate writing [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] treasure

It's so miserable, the male protagonist, I really want to burst into tears Cry well, the princess has been trying hard to dispel the haze in the hero's heart. Help, I really kept crying in the last few chapters.

The details are well described, and the author has a profound literary background. It's just that the update is a bit slow.

Very delicate, layer by layer, I like it 😍, come on, the author is great

It's beautiful, the writing is smooth, and the characters are fleshed out

The abuse was too harsh, the male protagonist was so miserable, and the female protagonist seemed powerless, but the writing was pretty good, but I couldn't hold on anymore

I think what's more interesting about this book is that it contains a lot of psychological language, which is quite novel.