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It's quite interesting and indeed a bit funny, but the main character's situation is that of walking on a tightrope on a cliff, which made me uncomfortable, so four stars, good luck to the author.

Looks good, at least I think it looks good

It was very novel in the early stage, and too much repetition in the middle affected the look and feel, but it became ups and downs later on. The repeated abstraction that affected the look and feel at the beginning became the introduction to the main line later, but it still seemed a bit rushed. For example, some recycling used later was not buried in the early stage. It seemed that I came up with it one by one. I had ideas but lacked experience, but overall it was very good.

It's very interesting and the process is very interesting. Putting aside the elements of cool writing, the process is very warm. I hope the author will work hard.