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Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle! [Punch hard]

It is a Western fantasy novel in my imagination. The plot progresses reasonably and is very comfortable to watch. It gives me the feeling of watching a jobless reincarnation. I hope the protagonist will not be as useless as Rudy. The only shortcoming now is that it is a bit short, come on, the author [code hold] [code hold] [code hold]

After watching it, it was okay. The plot setting was okay, 9 points. I hope the male protagonist can be more gentlemanly and not too wretched. Logically speaking, the middle should jump directly to the age of six or ten. Now the latest plot depends on how the author writes it. The male protagonist is too young. Normally, this battle should be a test given by the master to the male protagonist, or the male protagonist secretly eliminates enemies who threaten the family alone, and then the master and Sai follow. As a result, the male protagonist is too young. I feel that I want to relax first. It is easy to write conflicts until the male protagonist grows up. Just hint at them in the early stage. Now the conflicts have come and the male protagonist cannot solve them. The rhythm is not very good. There is also the issue of Sai's strength. What kind of strength, the master can not solve it. To be honest, since the world view has not been laid out yet, I don't know what the master's expert strength is. This is the first time I have seen a mature witch who is not on top of the world. The author's early relaxed writing is great [blowing kiss]

It is an excellent slow-burn western fantasy novel that is worth looking forward to. The protagonist is mainly a mage. If you don't like to see the perspective of infants and young children, don't read it. The story starts from birth, so the early stages are all about the development process during the minor period. There won't be too harsh plot, but overall it does have the flavor of jobless reincarnation. West Huanfeng has to develop slowly to feel the charm of this world view.

It's a classic novel. The system has a lot of influence on the protagonist. The protagonist's level of thinking is a bit low. As mentioned in the comment area, it is suitable for those who have just started reading novels or selectively store their brains. Overall, it's not bad. It's not too toxic, but it's normal.

The plot setting is okay, except that the protagonist's IQ is deliberately infantilized, and the flavor of a Japanese-style different world light novel is okay. It's okay to pass the time.

There were a lot of internal complaints about the previous system and the protagonist, which affected my view of the protagonist's image. At present, it seems that he is just an innocent, a bit stupid, a bit tough-talking (this affects my perception of him, just be tough enough with the system, you just like it. I think it will be more likable if you can be frank but not obscene), a bit kind-hearted, and a clear-eyed college student. Currently, he does not show many of his advantages. I can only say that he is neither lovable nor annoying. Come on, meow, you must live, meow. [Sinister smile]

So far, it looks okay. I feel like I'm going the jobless route, but don't imitate Rudy's wretched image. The reputation of jobless people is seriously polarized. In addition, let me explain the issue about the protagonist's father being a slave owner. This suggestion does not need to be emphasized anymore. Starting from the protagonist's magical talent, to be honest, the slave owner line is no longer the main plot. From the perspective of the protagonist's father, his declining family needs slave trading to maintain its livelihood. If the protagonist is strong enough, as a father, he should also change careers. As the father of a great magician, the profession of slave trading may be a small stain on his son. The plot can be developed to take risks and meet aliens.

I support a wave of support for this otherworldly harem novel. It is very well written and I highly recommend it.

I have been reading this novel for a long time, and a friend recommended it to me. It's really addictive to watch, and it still has elements of time travel and fantasy. But the story setting is very clever, and it would be better if the pace was a little faster.

The writing is very beautiful. It makes people feel unsatisfied after reading it. It is very beautiful.

The author has written this book so well that it totally deserves five stars.

It's so beautiful. The author's concept is very good. Five stars.

The plot is compact and interesting, not boring

The author thinks this book is totally worth 9 points. It's so good.

The plot setting is clever and unexpected

Recommended by a friend, it looks good😊

The character of the protagonist is very likable, I like it😍

The writing is very good, but the pace is a bit slow. I look forward to the content that follows.

The characters are well created, worth watching [laughing]

This book makes me feel the power of words, which is often shocking. It is my favorite type.

It's really well written. It's rare to see such good-looking novels on Tomato. I don't usually post comments or ratings, but this author is indeed a character [][]

The author's logical thinking is rigorous and his writing is fluent. Recommend

One thing to say, the writing is really good, the characters and plot are quite good.

Not bad! This book is really good-looking, the characters have lovable personalities and a strong sense of empathy.

The novel has the fantasy elements that I like, and it is still attractive. The male protagonist is well-characterized, but the pace is a little slow, but it is still worth reading.

A rare and good article, with a huge world view and a unique system. It incorporates Western fantasy and Eastern fairy tales. It is a perfect novel.

It's a very good novel. The character of the protagonist is my favorite type. The plot is also very interesting and funny.

The characters have distinct personalities, and the plot is really light-hearted and funny. I have had the best wife since I was a child. Watch this book [Love]

There are no heart-wrenching plots, just lighthearted and funny daily routines!