Dancing My Way Out of the Abyss of Adolescence

Okay [shy] I dare to write about the abyss of a young man. He is a character and must be 5 stars. Okay brother

This is my first time meeting a young Abyss fan. Encourage

Well, it's a novel with a novel theme, but sometimes the left brain attacks the right brain, or the writing style is too immature, and there is a lot of sense of fragmentation. I hope the author writes better and better [Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's quite satisfactory, but it's still good. Compared with the original work, this book is very, very interesting🐮🍺

The Abyss of Youth is really demanding to manipulate, so the author's writing in the early stage may have a bit of a fumbling feel, so forgive me, but it's basically gone in the later stage. [Cry]

Overall, it's okay╮(￣▽￣)╭But I don't understand the combat power a bit. The previous setting was for a city explosion, but the performance in the novel seems to be quite weak. According to Demon Slayer's combat power, it doesn't seem to be a city explosion? So is the setting wrong or the performance of combat power is too small? So is the combat effectiveness a bit low, or is the enemy stronger?

The structure is clean, the logic is smooth and not obtrusive, and the description is delicate and touching. It is indeed a good book. Based on the fact that no one in Tomato has written about the abyss of teenagers, it is not too much to give it a five-star rating. I am proud of myself, I love to eat food and grass [laughs][laughs][laughs]

As long as the protagonist's character doesn't collapse, this is the best book.

This book is really good, and the subject matter is niche, so there is no competition. Keep writing, it will become popular

I beg the author to give Teacher Xiaochai a good ending.