Dance from the Abyss of Youth

Okay [shy] I dare to write about the abyss of a young man. He is a character and must be 5 stars. Okay brother

This is my first time meeting a young Abyss fan. Encourage

It's quite satisfactory, but it's still good. Compared with the original work, this book is very, very interesting🐮🍺

Well, it's a novel with a novel theme, but sometimes the left brain attacks the right brain, or the writing style is too immature, and there is a lot of sense of fragmentation. I hope the author writes better and better [Top post][Top post][Top post]

The structure is clean, the logic is smooth and not obtrusive, and the description is delicate and touching. It is indeed a good book. Based on the fact that no one in Tomato has written about the abyss of teenagers, it is not too much to give it a five-star rating. I am proud of myself, I love to eat food and grass [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Overall, it's okay╮(￣▽￣)╭But I don't understand the combat power a bit. The previous setting was for a city explosion, but the performance in the novel seems to be quite weak. According to Demon Slayer's combat power, it doesn't seem to be a city explosion? So is the setting wrong or the performance of combat power is too small? So is the combat effectiveness a bit low, or is the enemy stronger?

The Abyss of Youth is really demanding to manipulate, so the author's writing in the early stage may have a bit of a fumbling feel, so forgive me, but it's basically gone in the later stage. [Cry]

As long as the protagonist's character doesn't collapse, this is the best book.

This book is really good, and the subject matter is niche, so there is no competition. Keep writing, it will become popular

I beg the author to give Teacher Xiaochai a good ending.

It's okay, but I don't understand why other anime characters are included.

How can I put it this way? Personally, I think it's okay after watching it. It's pretty good [like] [like] [like]. At the same time, I feel like, well, the appearance of Demon Slayer is a bit too appropriate, or there is less explanation and supplement. It feels a bit abrupt and inappropriate. The above is my personal opinion. Of course, the author can just write according to his own ideas. Come on [please update] (such as scrambling)

It looks good. I want to

Invincible. When I traveled through time, I felt that the character of the protagonist was so ridiculous.

Write to me. I took this as stomach medicine.

The first time I met a young fan

The protagonist is also a god [face covering] The plot in the sewer is outrageous

After all, this is the first novel of this type. In case of burping, I'll give you five stars.

It would be great if there were only Shonen's Abyss and some daily episodes

It can feel like the protagonist's growth is the main part and the story of the boy's abyss is supplemented.

Great, finally starting again

It's quite interesting, but I'm going to write it according to the original work. To be honest, if I'm a fan of it, I won't be able to write it anywhere. Only by adding a new worldview can I write it better.