[Infinite flow + identity + light fantasy + micro group portrait + HE]
"I'm Xu Nanyi? No, I'm Shen An! Let's get to know each other again, my name is Shen An, Shen means Shen from Shenyang, and An means An from Ping'an."
If one day you discover that you are not you and this world is not the world, what will you do?
The eyes outside the world never look away. Everything is determined by the rules, but is this destiny really determined by heaven? Maybe it was decided by humans?
"I want to be myself, is it wrong to do so?!"
A double game between soul and destiny.
"Memories are overlapping and identities are changing."
When "everything that was arranged" turns into a sharp knife, what if I don't get what I want?
"Every cause must have an effect, and every effect must have a cause."
One truth runs through his life...
When everything that has been arranged and redeemed comes to light, is the truth really what it seems?
"Those who understand the overall situation cannot help themselves."
Does the viewer have to be the one being viewed?
"It turns out that everything happens for a reason, and coincidences in the world are no coincidence."
The journey home is long, and I will be surrounded by the fragrance of sweet-scented osmanthus. The long journey is all due to fate.
Reader comments
I came from Douyin and read the teacher's novel carefully. I personally think that the teacher can refine the first chapter a little, and some paragraphs may be a bit obscure. That is, when the characters appear, some characters who need a sense of mystery can be removed, and some character introductions can be added. Or maybe I didn't read carefully. Some paragraphs feel a bit inexplicable when they appear. For example, why does the girl's knife float towards the protagonist before entering the dungeon? The protagonist asks why he would use those powers? Can you add some to it, such as he was stunned for a moment and couldn't figure out why he was doing this? The description after entering the dungeon in the later period is great. I personally feel that there is no problem with the writing. The teacher's writing is actually very good. The barrage can be appropriately reduced, and the main focus is to refine the story around the protagonist. The barrage can be changed in the form of "" The language that appears is presented in other ways so that it is not easy to confuse, just like the system voice, such as using [ ] or . Personally, I think the teacher's novel has great potential. The paragraphs after entering the copy are very attractive. I also look forward to the teacher's wonderful creation of the protagonist in the future [Sending Hearts]
At the same time, I am also looking forward to Wuyuan's performance in the teacher's novel, so I will add some small settings about him. He is a good boy, with a certain sense of justice in his heart, but a relatively weak concept of money. In front of children younger than himself, he will take the initiative to play the role of an "elder". If necessary, you can try to find him. No matter whether he can do it or not, he will give it a try. Due to family reasons, his father is an alcoholic and violent man, and long-term domestic violence has not made him the same as his father. Instead, it contributes to his gentle character. For him, his own "umbrella" is not actually important. He will subconsciously "hold an umbrella" for others, but the character who is not bound by tragedy has always been fragile, so he has a certain degree of self-destruction. Tendency, of course, the teacher does not have to write about this. After all, if Infinite Streaming has self-destructive tendencies, it is actually quite difficult to keep him alive... Above, thank you very much to the teacher for adopting the child at home. I actually sent you a message on Douyin. Maybe it was swallowed? [Sending Hearts]
I came from Douyin and read the teacher's novel carefully. I personally think that the teacher can refine the first chapter a little, and some paragraphs may be a bit obscure. That is, when the characters appear, some characters who need a sense of mystery can be removed, and some character introductions can be added. Or maybe I didn't read carefully. Some paragraphs feel a bit inexplicable when they appear. For example, why does the girl's knife float towards the protagonist before entering the dungeon? The protagonist asks why he would use those powers? Can you add some to it, such as he was stunned for a moment and couldn't figure out why he was doing this? The description after entering the dungeon in the later period is great. I personally feel that there is no problem with the writing. The teacher's writing is actually very good. The barrage can be appropriately reduced, and the main focus is to refine the story around the protagonist. The barrage can be changed in the form of "" The language that appears is presented in other ways so that it is not easy to confuse, just like the system voice, such as using [ ] or . Personally, I think the teacher's novel has great potential. The paragraphs after entering the copy are very attractive. I also look forward to the teacher's wonderful creation of the protagonist in the future [Sending Hearts] At the same time, I am also looking forward to Wuyuan's performance in the teacher's novel, so I will add some small settings about him. He is a good boy, with a certain sense of justice in his heart, but a relatively weak concept of money. In front of children younger than himself, he will take the initiative to play the role of an "elder". If necessary, you can try to find him. No matter whether he can do it or not, he will give it a try. Due to family reasons, his father is an alcoholic and violent man, and long-term domestic violence has not made him the same as his father. Instead, it contributes to his gentle character. For him, his own "umbrella" is not actually important. He will subconsciously "hold an umbrella" for others, but the character who is not bound by tragedy has always been fragile, so he has a certain degree of self-destruction. Tendency, of course, the teacher does not have to write about this. After all, if Infinite Streaming has self-destructive tendencies, it is actually quite difficult to keep him alive... Above, thank you very much to the teacher for adopting the child at home. I actually sent you a message on Douyin. Maybe it was swallowed? [Sending Hearts]