Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles: Becoming Luye's Disciple

I personally think that the foreign persimmon Luye GL is the best looking among the fics😋 There is nothing to say about the writing style. The author has strong narrative ability, the plot is very interesting, and the original setting is very thorough, so it is very comfortable to read [Love]

The description is very good, Xuezhu's character is very distinct and very cute. Everyone in the little black world is not occ. The interactions between Infinite, Xiao Hei, Lu Ye and Master Xue and his disciples are very heartwarming. [Shy] Xuezhu is completely a native of Xiaohei's world. And judging from the great description, there are a lot of foreshadowings. There should be a big conspiracy behind it. I look forward to it [Like]

It's quite good-looking, and the characters are basically not OOC. It's a double-female story about Lu Ye and the original heroine. The writing is relatively fluent, and the master-disciple relationship with Lu Ye is quite heartwarming, and because the timeline is basically an original plot, it's good👌🏼. However, the timeline is a bit long at 100 chapters, and the emotional line has not yet been developed. The plot is a bit bland, but it's not like a movie or anime. The abrupt ending of the humor may be a little boring, but you can still taste the different flavors if you taste it carefully (everyone likes radish and green vegetables), and because the protagonist is young now, most of the main perspective in some chapters is in Luye. I hope the protagonist will grow up quickly and do more things with the protagonist. I'm too young now, so I can't see the attributes, but I'm more paranoid about being under 1 year old. [Like] [Like] [Smile] [Salute] (Also, I hope the author will update more. The update frequency is indeed a bit slow. Come on, come on!! Chef, cook quickly! I'm so hungry! I'm addicted to reading enough books)

This is one of the highest quality novels I've read. It's good and I love reading it (except for the short length, there are no flaws)

Well... It just looks good. Falling in love with Luye is very easy.

The characters are written with vitality. I haven't watched the movie, but I know a little bit about the characters. Anyway, the writing is pretty good. But now it's about 100 in this state, and I haven't seen the love line yet. Is it still considered early stage to take more than 100 pictures? Therefore, this book is suitable for not reading for a few days and then reading a dozen or so pictures. Otherwise, it feels like you can't poop and have constipation [face covering]

I haven't read much, only nine chapters, and I can't wait to comment. First of all, author, you have only reached less than 100 chapters. It is understandable that few people have read it. Many people only like to read the ending, which also leads to low ratings and fewer people to read it. Secondly, your subject is the recently popular Luo Xiaohei, and it is also a dual heroine with a small audience. The popularity will not be too high, and the ratings will not rise. Finally, many novels with dual heroines are popular because of their own writing. I read your profile and have only updated one novel. I don't have any loyal fans. Your writing style is very good. As long as you stick to it, you will get better and better at Tomato!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. The heroine is so cute, when will the relationship turn sour? When I stand on the top of the year, I am the most fragrant [Adoration]

The characters are well grasped, and it fits the image of the original work better. The plot logic is smooth, and the writing is acceptable. It is interesting and not embarrassing. It is worth watching and deserves five stars. [Praise]

I finally found the book about Senior Sister Luye! Or two heroines! ! Love it so much! ! !

The logic is clear, the background is clear, and the characters are distinct. It is a good book.

It is very beautiful, the logic is clear, the plot is reasonable, the writing is very good, and it involves some professional knowledge. It can be seen that the author has read it and has a certain understanding of it. Guaranteed by my many years of reading experience and my Chinese teacher's hair. 🤚 It's so beautiful! Definitely Tomato's first-rate novel! !

I want to see senior sister chasing Xuezhu

Still want Deer 1, attack in Qing Leng Nian

I like it, I like the interaction between Luye and Xuezhu, it's not OOC, but Xiao Hei probably won't fight with Xuezhu all the time, Xiao Hei is a very polite child~

I love watching it. It is a very good fanfic of Luo Xiaohei's world view. It is well integrated with the two movies and TV. The plot is smooth, the words are comfortable, there are many female characters, Xuezhu is cute, and she is currently with Lu Ye's master and apprentice CB Meng. I look forward to their subsequent relationship development. This is the first time I read a fanfic on Tomato. After reading the introduction, I jumped in immediately. It's so cool. It's very well written. I won't meet again until the end. T T The work is tiring. Teacher, please pay more attention to your health, but you must finish it (

It's nice to watch, although it's a bit slow to warm up, and it's actually a bit brain-consuming.

The characters are vivid, the plot is ups and downs and interesting, the plot is full of life, Xuezhu is very cute! The characters in the original work don't feel OOC, it's a very good book I've read in Luo Xiaoheiquan!

I like it. The writing is smooth and the characters have not deviated from the original work. I like it very much and look forward to the master-disciple relationship. [Read it carefully]

Ahhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! What a treasure of books! After looking for a novel about Luo Xiaohei's world view for a long time, I finally found Xicran! ! Recommended for all sisters who like Luo Xiaohei Zhanji to read it! ! The writing is very good, and you can tell at first glance that this is not a newbie.

It looks good, the characters are well integrated, and there is no strong sense of separation. It's like there are such characters in the original work. I support the author [like][like]

The best Luye fanfic I've ever read

Super beautiful, highly recommended, the characters are not OOC either

Emotional scenes are so slow 😭, I want to quickly pass the childhood stage and then be sweet and sweet

Very good is really very good. I think the author's writing style is ready to join the original screenwriting team.

The teacher's writing style is very good ~ the plot is also very interesting ~ Teacher, I have a small request, can you not have so many interludes, or maybe write more interleaved content, more interspersed things, but less content, so it is easy to get confused.

A very interesting double heroine story with Senior Sister Luye! But note that Xuhuai Luozhu and the others seem to be villains, and Shen Kanao who likes Feng Xi and the others

Not bad, it fits the original work quite well. It created some new information and characters based on the original work, which is quite novel.

The characters are three-dimensional, there is no OOC, the overall rhythm is okay, and the plot logic is good

Awesome, but so little