Juezuzero: Everything Is up for Grabs, I Want All the Entries

Are there too few entries? Obviously there were entries for the other two passers-by at the beginning, but why were the entries only for these protagonists later on? Does this suppress the protagonist's combat power?

It's very good-looking, and I feel that the author has written every part with great care, but the only pity is that it has been 7 days and the author has not updated yet (most likely he has entered the palace).

This book is pretty good so far, um, but the words are still too dense. Try to add more symbols. The secrets are not very good to read. To be honest, um, the rest of the flaws are that the bones are wrong, and some of the words are the ones at the back. I feel that the author will also hit the wrong bell [laugh][laugh][laugh]

I can't read a few chapters, but there are little jokes here and there in the paragraphs, and the author's intentions can be detected between the lines. At least Aha believers must not miss this book. I rarely have such high evaluations of books. The previous one was still infinitely terrifying.

It is a book with a good idea, but there are some things that are not right. For example, in Yunkui Mountain, the old master was lying down before Hollow No. 0, Instead of lying down after the fall of the old capital as written by the author, and Yijiang is already at the point where her five senses are about to disappear (almost the same as Xiaoguang's condition at the beginning of the plot.) Secondly, Yunkui Mountain was the day when the No. 0 Hole erupted. Except for Yixuan and Lao Lu, basically everyone entered the hole. The detonation of the Shiyu Tower represents the end of the most urgent part of the fall of the old capital, so when the tower explodes, the protagonist cannot see Yi Jiang at all. And even if Yi Jiang dies in the follow-up mission, she will not be seen in Rankan, because since the fall of the old capital, Rangan has basically been in an abandoned state.

It's better to support a new book. By the way, is the heroine Alice?

At present, it seems to be a day-to-day book. The protagonist's main actions are to make up for the regrets in the game. The pace is relatively slow and dull. It feels like a retirement book. It's just that the rhythm is too bland, there are no ups and downs, and it seems a bit uninteresting. The protagonist has an exquisite character, which should be the author's own personal design, like the kind of character he has conceived for a long time. However, the plot is very bland, and it should be the kind of book the author writes for himself. And the pace is too slow. If it continues at this pace, it should still be like this in the next dozens of chapters. If the plot wasn't so bland, more people would have seen it. The author has many ideas, which can be seen from the many books he/she has written before, but he lacks the corresponding narrative ability. Some of the ideas are very novel, but he/she does not have the corresponding ability to write the story well. The narrative is straightforward and lacks the twists and turns required to write a novel. And on the contrary, my understanding of the characters is not enough, and I cannot fully portray the characters. Judging from his/her previous book "Zero Zero I Became a Hidden Player", this setting of the film is rare. It is extremely personal style and completely original. However, no matter how good the setting is without good enough content to support it, it is of no use. The writing style needs a lot of polishing, and I even feel that my literary knowledge is not enough. Only the outer shell remains, and even the shell is not perfect

The first few dozen chapters look pretty good, five-star praise

The content is pretty good, no pitfalls, but a bit boring

Still pretty good

A zzz fan book with plans and actions. If the game had the protagonist in the book, the world of zzz would be much cleaner.

It feels pretty good. You can watch it if you have time. It's not fast-paced.

It feels like a human-computer dialogue I had no desire to continue reading. It felt like someone was grabbing my neck and pouring sand into it.

Nice! It's just that there are too few chapters and the progress is too slow. Please update as soon as possible.

A very good fan fiction

Come on, come on, come on!

Cat grass water is not for drinking

It feels like it was written by AI but not like it. Could it be a tavern?

I didn't steal anyone else's copyright, this is great

It's not bad, I think it's basically because of my worldliness. My mother praised me for being sensible recently [laughing evilly]

The protagonist seems to be trying to teach me something [laughing evilly]

Come on, I read it as soon as you started writing, and you stopped updating for a while. I thought you wouldn't update anymore [Salute]