Zhu Xian***

The writing is really good. Judging from the previous plot, it is already considered to be the best among Zhuxian fanfics. In a bunch of Zhuxian fanfics, the protagonist either wants to be a minotaur or Huangmao. As long as the author does not write down the character later, I guess the subsequent plot should be about the beast god and Baguio defeating the Qingyun Sect. As long as the plot is handled well and the story has a happy ending, this book is even better.

It makes up for a lot of regrets, but there are too many typos or wrong sentences. Logically it's a little bit different. Come on! It can be written better. I actually wrote novels. It would be better if you were reborn and entered Qingyun for the first time. But if you were reborn and entered Qingyun for the first time, it might not have much to do with Baguio. This may be the author's intention. There is nothing we can do about it, we have to add a plot.

The writing is quite good, and the character's personality is captured very accurately. Is Baguio smarter than the original? Is the cultivation level higher than the original work? Although she doesn't like Zhang Xiaofan always saving her and letting her go, Zhang Xiaofan himself is kind-hearted, and he doesn't know about the ghost king and his daughter plotting against him in the original work, and Lu Xueqi doesn't even know about it.

It feels good, no big problem.

The writing is quite good, but I just don't understand that the protagonist is still not invincible despite being reborn and practicing the Book of Heaven for ten years.

It's really good-looking, and the ending is very satisfying. I hope the author will work harder and write more. The author is also very obedient. He updated two chapters in one day because I am now a sophomore in high school and can only read it on Saturdays. I hope the author can improve the efficiency of my colleagues without losing the quality of the article. Thank you for your hard work. There is no way it is really good-looking.

The book is good, and the character's personality is captured quite accurately. Tomato is the Zhu Xian fan who is most in line with the original setting. The author is quite thoughtful, and is definitely very familiar with the plot of the original Zhu Xian novel. Most Zhu Xian fans copied some of the worldviews from other Xiu Xian novels and incorporated them into Zhu Xian. This novel is okay. It really makes assumptions about how it will develop if you want to be reborn. I have also written a Zhu Xian fanfic, and it has always been difficult for me to choose Baguio. If she is resurrected midway, because her thoughts are different from Xiao Fan's nature, she will inevitably go on a different path from Xiao Fan, or fall into the traditional novel's plot of converting the demon witch to make her fall in love with the protagonist. You can only see this here. The author has studied Zhu Xian [Like][Like]

[Like] It's ok, the character design is basically intact.

Nanjing dormitory. Not hungry.

Cheers to the author, what a great book [Adored][Admired]

Finished reading it in one go

Not bad, I feel very good

The author writes well

It's so good. It would be great if I could read this comic.

It's just that you wrote that Zhang Xiaofan's cultivation level is a bit low. Based on his past, in ten years his cultivation level would not be said to be higher than that of Daoxuan, but at least he would be equal.

It's not bad, he's among the best among Zhu Xian fans. However, some plots were copied and pasted from the original work, so one star was deducted.

Like, like, I like wearing it back! The heroine is even better, no need for Baguio

The writing is really good, but without money, I can only watch advertisements to generate electricity, come on author [like][like]

Very beautiful and sweet. I hope the author will continue to update.

The writing is good and fits the character of the original characters. It also details the plans of the Ghost King and his daughter.

It's beautiful, well written, and I read it in one sitting! !

The plot is well written, and there is no magic modification or vilification of the original characters. Recommended