After My Inner Thoughts Were Exposed, Everyone Started Gossiping

I think the author is a new writer, and his writing is okay, but when I read it, there are some parts where I can still tell that I am not very proficient, and it feels like it is not smooth enough. After all, I have watched Tomato for so many years. I can't stand the plot of the trip because it feels a bit divorced from the main body of the article. But after all, I am also a newbie, and my writing is still very good. Keep up the good work, author.

Good looking, good luck to the author

It's pretty good, but I feel like a lot of it is unfinished. Then, each resolution feels pretty average, but I still like the ending, but I can't see much of the emotional line. I know that the protagonist likes the protagonist Beast, but there is no process of liking it, and there is no process of falling in love.

It's very beautiful. Although the writing style is still a bit green, it's really great for a new writer😍😍😍. It's much better than my first time😋😋😋Watch it better, author😘😘😘

So far, I think it's good to watch. I like the plot. They are all very cute babies. I just hope the author will work harder and update. I'll wait for you [Blow kiss]

Although this setting is a bit old-fashioned, the character design is quite interesting, but I think it is a bit too fast for some emotions, but the author is a novice, and I think the writing is quite good for a novice (๑ت๑)

It's pretty, I think it's pretty

The plot is okay. There are too many words in some places. In some places, the characters are wrong and the sentences do not make sense. If the author has time, he can give it a rough look and revise it, and the reading experience will be better.

Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very pretty!!!!! Teacher, please accept my worship [The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food]

Well, come on, it can be better.