Become a Dad Through Conan and Adopt Gin at the Beginning

I don't know what to say, but the character of the protagonist in this novel is too soft. If he raises three abnormal children, if his character is too soft, he is looking for death. His life is so miserable, partly because of his personality.

The novel subject matter makes people addicted. I really want to read a story about Gin and Lingling becoming brothers. I still have a habit of developing it, but it is too painful. One wave comes after another, and it is not a good life. Moreover, the details before and after do not match the original work. I suspect the AI ​​style, but the setting is too advanced and I can't collect it again...

It's beautiful, very beautiful, and the writing is really good. The details are also perfect. Gin's character is wrong. How should I put it? It's quite indifferent anyway. There is also the depression of life and the despair and unyieldingness of the low income of that era. To be honest, I felt it was well written.

It's okay to write. It's just that the protagonist's life is miserable [laughs] Come on, author

I was deceived by the introduction. It's really hard to be deceived [crying][crying][crying]

So pretty [adoration][admiration] I just don't know if there is cp [thinking]

The story is quite interesting, and I am a fun-loving person who likes to see novel settings. Without the foresight of the time traveler and Long Aotian's sense of superiority, there is only an unlucky guy whose survival instinct is used as a leash by the "system". The protagonist is forced to complete a series of tasks that alienate his personality in order to exchange for the most basic survival materials. He is like a manipulated "clown". All his struggles and performances are just for the most humble purpose of survival, although he is constantly alienated by tasks to maintain "home". The sense of despair and absurdity in this setting is directly satisfying. The character creation is extremely tense, and the dramatic conflicts caused by repeated conflicts between different characters are very exciting. There are also problems. For example, the timeline is confusing, the plot is like a PPT game option, and after completing a line, it feels like going back and choosing again. There are jumps and redundancies in the connection between chapters. For example, the origin of "Reiko Qiu Ting's Violin" has contradictory descriptions (sometimes it was already there, and the next time it was bought with money from a dead pocket watch), and you need to piece together the logic on your own (I read it as multiple branches, and I can tolerate it). Five stars for unique stories.

First of all, this book is worth reading and following, five-star praise. Then comment: I don't know why this book has a low rating. Maybe it's because it just came out or the content is complicated? Or is it the result of the family's choice of adopted son? Or does it make people silent? Gin's future has never changed (or has an insufficient bond?)? His father's entrepreneurial career was half the opposite of Gin. Maybe he had read too many Shuang articles. A systematic father could not suppress family conflicts, and was more powerless. But looking at it rationally, there is a slight sense of discontinuity in the plot connection of the entire article. The writing is not great but it can be said well. If it falls back to the chapters so far, the entire fanfic can be said to be average, because I don't know the follow-up progress, so I'm looking forward to it for the time being. There are currently two best works by Conan fans (Ke Xue Coroner and Conan: I Am Not a Snake Disease). I hope the author can follow up the writing and the plot to create a good fan work.

The angle is very novel and looks good५꒰۶⁎⁼̴̀ω⁼̴́⁎꒱۶

This kind of subject matter is very new. It's my first time to watch it, but it's very interesting. I think

The emotions are well-shaped and contagious, but it's really cool.

Can you give me some spoilers? Does Kurosawa Zhen have his father in his heart? 🤔

It's pretty good, and quite novel, but the story line is messy in some places. Now that the development is pretty good, there's no need to design setbacks anymore. I feel like

It's well written and has a rich plot. I look forward to the follow-up.

The writing is quite beautiful, the writing style is very good, and the subject matter is novel.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. I beg the author to update it soon! ! ! ! !

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง0

The plot is interesting, I like it very much

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

So far, it looks pretty good [Thinking][Thinking]

Very very beautiful

So pretty, woo woo woo

I like it, I like it, why is the score so low?

Come on, I'm looking forward to the plot after Ke Lan arrives, it will be fun hahahahaha

It's okay... I don't recommend watching it if you don't have the patience. It's a bit boring after watching it for a long time.

I've read Chapter 40 and I think it's okay so far, the subject matter is fresh. Protagonist normal person

It's fun and beautiful

It feels good, the characters are quite real

Very interesting, with a particularly magical angle, a novel about Ke Xue

It's very realistic, and the depiction is very realistic. It doesn't have any system or anything from the beginning. It's pretty good at shaping the characters.