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Baozi, don't be too tired or idle. Write more and it's not enough. The flow of the plot is also great and the characterization is also very good.

The plot is quite exciting, and the emotional line is also good. However, the writing is a bit immature, and many places are not very reasonable. You need to refer to the background area of ​​the novel to carefully consider, such as some details of the Star Luo Empire, and the shaping of the characters are a bit thin, but overall it is still very good-looking.

Haha, your words are really funny and elegant, which makes people feel happy. Since Your Excellency is so sincere, I will give you a few responses. The little girl is just an ordinary person, there is no way she comes from a wealthy family. However, it is a pleasure to drink a pot of turbid wine with you under the moonlight. As for writing poems, although the little girl is not talented, she is still willing to endure the hardship and chant the wind and moon with you. As for the saying that the golden wind and jade dew win over countless people as soon as they meet, it is really too flattering to the little woman. I am just a child of the world, there is no such thing as a hero or a beauty. However, it is a blessing to meet you. Since the moonlight is so beautiful tonight, how about we just have a drink and enjoy the beautiful scenery together?

[Shy] I finally found a Douluo fan that suits my taste! Follow till death! The writing is a little dull, but it has interesting plot points. There are some minor flaws in the plot, but they are innocuous. Overall, I like it very much. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑Let's have a look again

It's good. The time travel and character setting are very good. Before San Wu recognized their relatives, Tang San and Xiao Wu had no interaction and no feelings. Moreover, when San Wu was helped by San Wu, San's inner fluctuations were in line with the heart of an adult Tang sect disciple. The most important thing is that it is not a human-machine novel. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha (the worse one star is given to the official match. Although I am not taboo, but I was a bit disgusted by the official match before, but it's okay, I still need to eat food)

Super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, really! This is a book about two male protagonists in Douluo Dalu. The protagonist's martial spirit is a fox and the sword has a system.

First of all, articles about Douluo's heartthrobs are very rare, at least I haven't seen a few. Just because of the subject matter, I give him 4 stars. The only missing star is that I don't think the content is particularly attractive to me. Normally, I should give it three stars, but the subject matter is very good, so I give it an extra star as an encouragement.

Beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration], the author will update it quickly! Also, don't keep giving low ratings. If the rating is too low, it will be removed from the shelves🤣

It's good-looking, the car is fast, and the current CP is Shrek and the others are happy

Baby, I really want you to come back. I still can't help crying when I think of you late at night. I wrote and deleted messages. I also tried my best to save you when you left. The biggest regret in my life is that I can't go to the end with you. Many things I promised you have not been completed. I wish I could meet you at the age of marriage. I feel that the world is unfair. I sincerely always feel let down. I beg you to come back. It must be very annoying. I have written a lot of words these days, thinking about which day I want to show you what I want you to do. You know how I came here these days. You asked me before if I regret being with you. To be honest, I have no regrets because as long as it is what I like, no matter whether it is good or not, I will give you my best. I have become accustomed to having you every day. When you leave, you don't want me anymore. I smoke and drink like a useless person every day. I thought this would kill my thoughts about you. But every time I get drunk, the person I think of is you. Maybe you think I am particularly worthless. It's not that we are inappropriate, it's just that I really want to see your updates.

I like it so much. The author must not stop updating it. It's so hard to find such a good-looking one. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Adoration]

Nice! ! ! It's so beautiful, teacher₍₍٩( ᐛ )۶₎₎♪

Save the rating [Sending my heart] I hope the author will continue to write and never give up! ! !

It's super beautiful. The plot is exquisite. I love it. Can the author release 100 more chapters?

It looks good (๑• . •๑) Great support to the author

Wary Goode, the plot is super nice [laughing]

This book seems to be quite to my liking. The author's writing style is also very good and quite active. Overall, it is quite interesting. Well, if you are interested, you can read it.

The writing is good, it feels a bit like Green Tea Strategy Douluo.

The content is very well written. Emotions are also very rich

Very nice. Although the writing style is a bit immature, it is very beautiful. Moreover, there are still very few stories about Douluo with two male protagonists. Look and cherish. This is the most interesting Douluo fanfic, I suggest you read more.

So pretty! ! ! Come on

Beautiful, super beautiful

My wife is so pretty

Very bold, give me some support, so far it's good

Good-looking, really good-looking

The author's writing is very good, but it's a bit lacking.

It's really beautiful! Oh my god, there are really very few Douluo books. This one is already the best. Oh my god, it's so beautiful. I can't help it. It's so beautiful.

It's very interesting and very suitable to my taste. The author must write it to the end.

Super good, hit my X point. Super nice (AQA)

This book is good. The martial soul is also a nine-tailed fox. There are quite a lot of martial souls. It's really nice to read.