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Very good, this is the most enjoyable sex-translated article I have ever read. The other plots are either pretentious and slap in the face, or it is the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. The first time I saw it, it was so relaxed. Again, if the author writes 10,000 words a day, no one will leave negative comments [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love]

The title tags are pretty good, and the writing style is also pretty good. My opinion (not important): The book should use the core tags of Wen Chao Gong, Bian Bai, and Fiancee as the core elements to attract readers to develop the story. However, I feel that there are less elements such as Wen Chao Gong, Lily, and Fiancée in the book, which makes me, who is attracted by the labels, feel that the novel is bland and tasteless. (Currently watching Chapter 18)

The rhythm is relatively gentle and more daily, and the identity of the protagonist avoids many of the conflict points of Wenchao Gong, making Wenchao more like a background board, highlighting the main theme of Lily. The protagonist is a bit too awkward about family conflicts, but it is still very interesting to watch (compared to the novel, Kitten Girl, whose paragraphs are constantly refreshed, is more delicious😋)

111, Can you make a game? A short and concise independent game. I want to watch Metagame, Mita, Ashe, Undertale, and Money Management. Music games are also available. I feel like I can write more than three million words!

Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Establishing at Thirty: It is necessary to update thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website will praise you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to hear, including readers. When you are seventy, just follow your heart and do not go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want! I beg you, please update soon! ! !

There is nothing wrong with it except that he keeps mentioning the reason for running away from home. Interacting with my fiancée is so awkward, sometimes I like it and sometimes I hate it.

The subject matter is quite good, but I mainly feel that too many chapters are spent on personal life and emotions that have nothing to do with the text. I feel that adding more that are related to the text, such as the response from the audience/readers, will be better.

I was indeed deceived by the cover [grievance]

This is the first time I have seen a novel by Wenzhao Gong (let's put it aside) with such a detailed background. The identity of the protagonist is also rare in this genre. It is quite attractive. It seems that the fiancée part is not handled very well so far. Keep up the good work.

I remember there was no Yiren setting at the beginning, right? The author will update it later. When I was catching up on updates today, I suddenly saw Yiren and thought I had seen it wrong. I suggest that I make an announcement after adding settings next time (dog head)

This book has many merits and is very interesting, but the author of the protagonist's fiancée seems not to have explained the background of the world after the protagonist's time travel. There is a case of Lily getting married. Aren't you afraid of strange looks? [Shocked] (I like Lily, this review only talks about the book)

I don't see anything unreasonable in the plot. I haven't touched any personal points so far. The pace is relatively slow. The previous plots of casual flirting but not marriage really shocked me. It has a light sense of relaxation and a heavy sense of excitement at the same time. It's great. Quick update [blowing kiss].

The writing style has surpassed many similar books, it is very delicate and not embarrassing

It's okay, but after finishing Dou Po, I can write about Zhetian. Putting the setting of Zhetian into the social background of this book is simply a dimensionality reduction blow.

I was also deceived by the cover, but after reading it for a while, I found that it is quite good and comfortable to watch. I hope the author will not interrupt updates and eunuchs.

It's good to watch and I'll update a lot [Learned][Learned][Learned]

Very good, my type

Yes, the idea is ok

It's good-looking (it's really good-looking given the size of my bookshelf)

Anyway, if you are in doubt, just use muscle memory.

The fiancée was a little sudden. I don't feel like the police officer has the cp feeling, but it's not bad.

The writing is okay, and it looks very comfortable. Why do you want to be a pigeon? You don't come from the pigeon cat next door, do you? [Please update]

It looks good, I think it looks good anyway

In fact, it is a very delicate plot and setting. Judging from the comments, it should have been revised. Except for the (probably the heroine) identity setting is a bit controversial, everything else is pretty good.

The writing is very good, but when will I see the game being made~

I hope the author can bring collapse to this beautiful world. [Sinister smile]