At the Beginning, I Loaded the Yuanshen Template.

Mo Yuan fandoms end quickly because of the plot, and many of them start to follow the trend later on, such as creating their own chat group or something [laughing] Come on! After the plot is written, you can start a Zhutenliu, for example, replace Madoka and become Madoka, get rid of the shape and create a chat group or something [laughs]

Yes, it has the faint flavor of anxiety in the plot of Magic Circle. After all, it is refreshing and does not feel like Magic Circle, but it has lost that flavor.

After Chapter 24, the poisonous point comes. The reason for the poisonous point: a problem that Xiaobai's novels often make. They are forced to join the plot. There is no necessary plot. The character written is a bit too weak. The author should keep working hard👍I will read it again Chapter 26 can be skipped, it's extremely poisonous😨 Chapter 27, 28 Slightly Poisonous Chapter 29 enters the main plot, you can jump here I've finished reading it. If you are just starting to read novels, you can read it. If you are an old bookworm, hurry up! 😫

It's good to watch. The writing in the early stage was a little softer but retained Puella Magi Madoka Magica's faint sense of anxiety. The only drawback is that the protagonist's character is too weak. However, I temporarily went to other worlds and became stronger and stronger. It was directly recommended. The only point of dissatisfaction is that there is no debate with the white cup. The white cup seems to be extending the life of the universe, but it is actually doing useless work. The creation of life from scratch is essentially reducing entropy, while the white cup attributes life to a distorted, abstract and unstable state, which is increasing entropy. There is a probability that a group of monkeys will knock out the complete works of Shakespeare. What is the probability that a mirror will recover after being broken and dropped to the ground?

Personally, I think the author should describe more about cheats and enhance the protagonist's power. The most difficult thing about Puella Magi Madoka Magica is the huge cause and effect of QB, gods and demons. I personally suggest that in order to solve the problem, higher-dimensional forces must intervene. For example, the concept of "player" can completely serve as the source and explanation of cheats. The connection between QB and players in some games is not small. Does this mean that the QB race can be completely controlled? The level of interest and depth of player templates is too high. Even if the author does not adopt this opinion, other templates will have to be developed. If there is only one kind, it will be boring. I hope it can be more fun. It is commonly known that the protagonist has too few abilities. The incubator is too strong and can't even spawn monsters. I hope that higher abilities will weaken the QB's sight. For example, Sakura Kyoko saw Madoka and accidentally mentioned the protagonist, which aroused everyone's suspicions. Later, she discovered that the protagonist was hiding a secret and then the protagonist confessed everything. Everyone accepted the reality and used the protagonist's abilities to deal with QB and Kami Shikame Madoka, and then created characters in the game such as Madoka and the demon Homura. It was very fun to deal with them. Also, the Madoka template has obviously influenced the protagonist, which is obviously a pitfall. It may be because the Madoka template is playing the role. If the author adopts my suggestion, it can be explained like this. Everyone knows what players are like in reality. It is nothing but interesting. It doesn't matter whether the creation is good or bad, as long as it can be attractive and interesting. If the author doesn't follow my suggestions, will he be able to give everyone a whole life? After Shikame Madoka discovers the truth, should he call the protagonist Mantou Ka (Shikame Madoka)-senpai?

The setting is really good, the plot progress is okay, the characters are really difficult to handle, so I can make do with it.

Yes, I really like the scene where the protagonist Chuchu is lying pitifully on a chair in the park sleeping. It would be even more pleasant if Homura watched her at this time. I hope to see the interaction between Homura and the protagonist soon.

After reading Chapter 20, let me talk about my feelings first. The protagonist's goal is to collect emotional points and light up the skill tree. But in daily activities, she is very independent and is easily carried away by other people's emotions or behaviors. Her personality can be said to be weak. She has a magical girl physique. She will run away when being pulled by a junior high school student, and then she will just go with the flow now that things have happened. The adult soul will not resist or interrupt others, but it will not be so embarrassing if it is tougher sometimes. Actually, to be honest, around Chapter 20, the score should be 3.5 Stars, somewhere between average and pretty good.

I have seen the best one about Madoka. It took more than 30 chapters to get to the second episode. The rhythm is very good [I learned it] [I learned it]

After looking at it, it turns out that it is not a graffiti. The relationship between Xiaomi Homura and Shikama Madoka is indeed portrayed in an extremely complex and profound way. In the dimensions of time and reincarnation, Homura is the guardian of repeated fate, while Madoka is the victim who eventually becomes the law; but in terms of emotional nature, Madoka embraces the great desire to save everyone, and is even willing to sacrifice her own existence, while Homura only cares about Madoka's happiness and only longs to be with her. This mismatch between mission and selfishness may be the root of their tragedy. Homura devoted all his obsession and efforts to Yuan, but Yuan could not belong to her alone - this unrequited love eventually turned into Homura's eternal loneliness. But when Madoka became a god and disappeared from all time and space, Homura forever lost the person who could give her all her love. When Madoka dissipated, leaving the last trace of warmth and hope in Homura's heart, what was Homura thinking? Is it a brief companionship in a certain reincarnation, or is it the despair and unwillingness to witness Madoka sacrificing herself countless times? Homura gave all his love, even willing to twist cause and effect and repeat despair, just to rewrite Madoka's fate; but what Madoka pursues has never been personal happiness, but the salvation of everyone. Her words "If I can save everyone, I am willing to accept this ending" completely shattered Homura's remaining hope. Homura resents this ending, but can never forget Madoka's gentle eyes and firm belief. She knew that she had to accept Yuan's decision and bid farewell to the only person she wanted to protect for the rest of her life. So after Madoka disappeared, she was still fighting. She couldn't forget the little bits and pieces of those reincarnations, and she couldn't forget the light that Yuan brought when he reached out to her at the end of countless despairs. At the end of the story, Homura stands alone in the reconstructed world. If she can choose, she hopes Madoka can be an ordinary girl and laugh with her into the future. Therefore, they are just another pair of fateful mandarin ducks. ——"Are you willing to become a magical girl?" ——"I do. If this can help everyone." Reincarnation will eventually come to an end, and the cause and effect are inevitable. Love, wishes and obsessions all become dreams, only the moonlight of the silver court remains.

It's not bad, some parts are a bit abrupt. For example, when treating my sister, those special effects were exposed inexplicably. It's not like 22 years old But the flow of the plot is pretty good But the part about getting to know Xiaoy was not fun enough.

For me, it's not bad (only in Magic Circle World). Some people say that this is similar to the main story of female pornographic abuse. I don't think so. Although the protagonist is not very powerful, he has accomplished everything he wanted to save, and the protagonist did not suffer any particular disadvantages. That is, he was relatively weak when he met a certain witch, but didn't Madoka come to save her? I know something about the main article about female abuse. His abuse is intolerable to ordinary people. I feel like some readers only like to read cool stories, and when they see the protagonist being deflated, they think he is a sadist. In fact, it is also a way to write the protagonist with a softer personality. This way of writing can better highlight the personalities of other important characters. It's just that the protagonist is a little aggrieved, after all, the light is overshadowed by other people.

Very nice fanfic. No poison points. Unzip and read with confidence Made up for the drama. [Hold face][Hold face][Hold face] Fortunately, the timeline where the protagonist comes is the period of long-haired flames. Just missed the Magic Era. [Hold face][Hold face][Hold face] Otherwise, we have to go to Kamihama City to wade in the muddy water. There are really many magical girls there. There are really many witches. But the emotional value given there is definitely the most. If the protagonist had come earlier, he might have become a demigod. With the addition of templates, it might become even more powerful than Xiaohuan. Even if the Magic Era is added, there will be no problem [Like][Like][Like] Because I missed it directly [cover face][cover face][cover face] Too reasonable. In short, it's a good idea. [Like][Like][Like] So healthy

The biggest impression I have on the protagonist is that he is entangled, with all kinds of entanglements, including whether to send the rescued child home. Do I really care? . .

The operation of the child godman is scheduled. Homura's writing is not bad, but the appearance of Engami is unknown.

Hmm..., The author's writing in the early stage is really not very good, there are a lot of poisonous points, it can be seen that he is a novice, but he has improved later. Generally speaking, it is a relatively rare Magic Circle fanfic, so it can be regarded as an okay book.

Very pretty. However, in the extremely long chapter, there are no fragments that can make me feel very bright. I feel that reading this novel is very time-consuming. Although the pace is not particularly slow, it is very slow. However, this is not necessarily a shortcoming. From another perspective, it can also be understood as a tendency to develop into delicate descriptions, but it is a bit stiff in the senses. It's quite good-looking, but it's weird because it's not satisfying and there's always enough to eat. I couldn't stop reading it, but I didn't feel comfortable reading it. It's very weird, so I plan not to read it for the time being.

Could it be that the witch in the Warcraft arc was transformed from Ai Shengxuan? After all, she is the only one who has relationships with Madoka and Homura Akatsuki at the same time, and she also has three special characteristics: memory, cause and effect, and time. As for why it is in Akatsuki Homura's shield, is it because Ai Shengduan exists in Xiao Meihan's reincarnation? After Ai Shengduan cut off the history in order to achieve the goal of Madoka becoming Madoka, Ai Shengduan only has a relationship with Xiao Meihan who still existed in the reincarnation, and the ability of continuous reincarnation originated from the shield of time, so Ai Shengduan is in the solution After the end of history, her existence only existed in Akatsuki Homura's shield. When she was forgotten by everyone, including herself, and the magical girl's gem magic disappeared, and finally turned into a witch, would her body completely disappear in reality? Finally, due to the relationship of cause and effect (existing in Akatsuki Homura's other reincarnations), she finally appeared in Akatsuki Homura's shield.

Madoka Dusk, if beaten too much, it will turn black easily~ Logical IQ is online and there is no problem at all~

What a great Madoka fanfic, with a sense of urgency, Xiaomi Homura is also very realistic, and Homura's psychology is well written The design before defeating the night of the witch is quite good, but it gets a little off topic later on, when traveling in a group: Ma Hua Hua suddenly appeared, and the five colors were divided into Ma Hua Hua + Protagonist + Madoka + Red and Blue to Fate Zero, and then the plot could no longer be sustained and all the characters collapsed. The main character lacked the motivation to use the Holy Grail to return to the "original world", and became a white text who used the original main line camera to save people and have a happy reunion. It's just that the switch to Zhutian style is also very abrupt, but after finally getting through Witch's Night, why don't you take it easy before going on to the next plot? It only says that the system's skills are not unlocked, which means that the time travel is not finished. The specific connection is very poor. To be honest, it would be much better to finish after finishing Magic Circle Night; Why don't you just stop writing fate and continue the Warcraft chapter? During this period, Yuan Yan's feelings will begin to develop further - this is what I want to see the most! (Second note, even after finishing the fate, I entered the World of Warcraft chapter. Why did you, the author who wants to write this article, finish the fate midway) The emotional flow and information gap before finishing Witch Night were really good, but there was no emotion at all after that. I gave it four stars for the sake of being touched by Homura's emotions in the previous game.

After reading Chapter 34, except for the fact that the main character is a little bit mother-in-law, there are no shortcomings, which can be regarded as bread and butter.

A Magic Circle fanfic that is above the standard. The more exciting the original drama is, the more difficult it is to write the fanfic, because it is easy to continue the story. The author who can write a Magic Circle fanfic into a full-length novel has really worked hard.

The look and feel is okay... The system is useless later on and rarely appears... Now the protagonist moves closer to Madoka I guess Ichishou will be slowly assimilated by Round God... And become Round God himself... Because his image is after becoming a god

The plot is a bit confusing later on, but Madoka fandoms are rare, so it's actually good to have new ones. . .

God, the only book I've been following so far

Although the logic of the author's writing is sometimes a little confusing, and some characters are not handled particularly well, but overall the story is quite interesting, and it is good in terms of fan fiction. It's worth a read, so cheers for the author.

I think the author's description and details of time travelers are very small. This is the emotion I think Madoka should have as an ordinary junior high school student, and thus describes the shortcomings of the time traveler Madoka. Some readers are uncomfortable seeing this, which is normal, and everyone has their own opinions. I also read some reviews and they are very true. Finally, why didn't the author update during May Day? I want to read it!

At least the places I've seen so far are pretty good. Can you just return it if you don't like it? This subject matter is already very scarce. I'm afraid that one day the author will be so angry that he will die [crying] I beg you all to leave the book [crying] [crying] [crying]

At least I saw Ai Shengduan, Wu Se didn't have many knives, that was enough

I've read Chapter 159 so far, and there's still a lot to watch. The first is the identity of the protagonist Why is the protagonist's soul so similar to Madoka? If the person behind the scenes could change his soul, why would he only give him a short time? Also, Kyubey once said that the protagonist still has half of his soul in his body. Why did he fall into a coma like everyone else after losing the soul gem? The author didn't explain it, so I'll explain it myself: (Purely personal opinions and guesses) The protagonist is a different kind of Madoka, but her memory was changed by someone behind the scenes (a pseudo-traveler) and she was placed in this defective world. Kyubey said that the protagonist has half the soul in his body, but after throwing the soul gem, he will become a magical girl. This is a "characteristic" of a magical girl. The only advantage of having half of the protagonist's soul in the body is that it can be restored to integrity by God through this half of the soul (perhaps the protagonist's soul gem will be lost/destroyed/turned into a seed of lament/or other things later, and then sent to Madoka, the Ring of Truth, for rescue) Throwing out the soul gem is equivalent to throwing yourself away. This characteristic is caused by the separation of the soul from the body, even if it is only half I have another idea The protagonist is Madoka who traveled through the second world. Madoka accidentally traveled to the world before the protagonist's second travel. She lost her memory and spent her whole life. Later, she was transported back by a certain existence and mistakenly thought that she was a time traveler. Like other magical girls who lost their soul gems, it is the same as the above statement, it is a 'characteristic'. @Likes rosewood There may be other explanations, but I hope the author can continue to update and don't give up. What if the protagonist is Madoka and accidentally fuses with Kyubey and has her memory modified? You can add some inner description If you want to save Asami Tomoe: Ling seemed to have fallen into a bottomless abyss There are three lights in front corresponding to three choices The principle of a circle in the middle·small circle On both sides are Madoka Magica and QB Choose not to interfere anymore, let Madoka become a god and become part of the principle of the circle Save Chin Asami Don't save Asami Tomoe QB: If you don't save it, the survival rate will be higher. You don't have to worry about its collapse, and you can also eliminate the possibility of team destruction. Overall, not saving it is more cost-effective. The Principle of the Circle•Madoka said nothing but looked at her gently Puella Magi Madoka Magica: Ling, didn't you just step in to save everyone? In fact, you have already made up your mind from the beginning, right? Otherwise, you can go to other cities and not interfere. There is no need to hesitate. Now that you have made up your mind, let's move towards that goal! Then the QB gradually became smaller, and Magical Girls Madoka and Lingqi held their bows and shot at the QB QB: Human beings are really incomprehensible (This is an inspiration I came up with unexpectedly) And if Ling is Madoka, the follow-up should add that Ling went to other worlds, and ended up encountering a world that stopped forever, and then met her Homura there, restored her memory, and defeated Witch Night.