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It looks good, but you can change the name of the mecha directly to the name of the user in the fighting scene, otherwise I really can't understand the plot [crying][crying][crying]

First of all, the plot is very good, I like it very much. The characters of the male and female protagonists are so fragrant [blowing kisses] [shy]. Especially the male protagonist, I haven't seen such a lively male protagonist in a long time [blowing kiss]. The plot so far has been very neat and tidy. I suggest the author mark out the time and place. The timeline and place are too jumpy. And don't worry, because everyone can say the same thing. Anyone who says it can be marked if it is repeated. Sometimes it is not marked. I really thought the person above said it. It made things a bit confusing for me. Come on, you must finish writing it. By the way, if possible, remember to add background information, otherwise, it will be confusing✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Not bad, the plot is good, I also like the heroine's character, it would be better if there were less swear words [Thoughts]

Um... How can I put it this way? I think the plot is good so far, and the world view is quite large, but the narrative aspect is really not very good. Many parts are very confusing. There are no prompts for the changes in the timeline and location. I just rely on my own understanding (some dialogues as well). In addition, it can be described in more details. The first few chapters feel that the progress is a bit fast, and several years have passed in a flash. In addition, I still don't know the age of the heroine.

I think the development of the story is very interesting, and the other parts are also very good, but I don't know who said what each person said. After reading it, you have to guess who said it. After reading it again, it feels very troublesome, and you will feel like you can't understand it. I beg the author to change it a lot [almost crying], it is really your book [blowing kiss]

It's a great idea, but it's just not enough, madam!

Very nice hahaha