Wanfa Xianjun Fell into Luo Xiaohei

The writing is very good, and the protagonist has the joyful and hateful passion of ancient martial arts. The main plot is smooth and not too OOC. It looks smooth but not too obtrusive. It would be better if the protagonist had more autonomy

Beautiful to read and comfortable to write. It's so cool, I want to see the male protagonist return to his original world. I feel like we can also include other Chinese comics in the future, including Big Fish and Begonia, Red Demon and Little Fox Lady, and other Chinese comics about cultivating immortals?

This is the most comfortable Chinese writing of Luo Xiaohei's fanfic I have read recently. The story line is very clear and the characters are well controlled.

It's very beautiful but seems to have been decided by capital.

Not bad, not bad, very good-looking, the protagonist is the strongest in the world in the later stage! Starting from Lanxi Town, it is Qing Ning's brother, who has kicked many people's lunch boxes. The writing is considered to be excellent in Tomato. The integration of the protagonist is not abrupt and very harmonious. I recommend reading it (quietly, the author knocks Jun Qing! Jun Qing 99!)

It looks good, but there are too many exclamation points. Sometimes it would be better to use a period after the character speaks (to be honest, the exclamation points feel a bit dramatic). But it looks good so far

It's good to watch, respects the original work, the character settings are in line with the original work, the addition of the protagonist is also very smooth, and the addition of the big fish and begonia part is also OK. Although the world view is a bit smaller, the overall plot is very smooth and worth watching

I remember that there is a saying about Time Stop in JoJo, which is to peel off oneself from the original timeline for a period of time, and directly express the "cause and effect" caused by this period of time on the original timeline in the form of "results". So according to the protagonist's ability, it is not too much to cut Time Stop into another dimension, right? [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Wanfa Xianjun, which work is it? Role.

A good book, [like] [laugh] Too short! ! ! ! ! !

It's really beautiful^ω^ The plot of the story is very coherent, and then it is very enjoyable, and the pace is not draggy. Now the plot is basically over in Blue Brook Town.

It was really good to watch in the early stage. I can't find any faults. There are no big problems with the character creation. The plot about Big Fish and Begonia is also integrated very reasonably. It's just that the cold swordsman Fuyao who suffered from me has now become a funny guy [face covering] and is simply a naughty child.

Note that this book is not an invincible text. Don't think it is an invincible text just by looking at the title [laughter]

Nice! The plot is very fast and smooth

Can the voice be changed?

It's so good, it's so good. I fell in love with it after reading just a few chapters [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

Very good book. I haven't found many on this topic. But I personally like this writing style very much.

This book written by Luo Xiaohei is really good [Blowing Kiss]

Super beautiful, highly recommended

Personally I feel it's okay

Looks good^ω^ Please support!

Good looking, a rare good fanfic

Very very beautiful

Very good and beautiful

Gua! I want to see the protagonist directly use his full power to crush the mythical beast

The writing style is quite good. Many 9:00 books are not as good as this writing style. Although it has the shadow of Luo Xiaohei's world, it has also changed a lot, but it is a pity that the writing is a bit slow [Chigua]

The author writes very well, I like it very much (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)

The writing is delicate, the concept is clever, and the characters are basically non-ooc

It's very interesting to read, and the writing is also good. If you like to read without cp, don't jump in. If you like to see someone who is a senior sister, you can join.

The writing is very good, and every character created has flesh and blood.