What Good Guy? You Should Address Me as Your Majesty!

The characters are well described, and the setting is no problem. It will be popular! After the identity of the witch appeared, she had a middle-class aura, which changed drastically from her previous style. . .

That's good, but aren't you a time traveler? Why does this setting feel like indigenous people?

I go, this book is really good, the plot is very smooth, the description is also very appropriate, the two heroines are also very pleasing to the character, one is gentle and cute like a maid, the other is a tsundere daughter who is not annoying. I have read the latest chapter, the protagonist is ready to start a career, it is great, the author must work hard, three updates a day is not enough, just give me tentacle monsters ten updates a day [Shy][Adoration][Adoration] What should I say? Author, I think you can use less ellipses. I feel like a sentence that can be finished directly must be separated by ellipsis... You should be trying to write that kind of profound meaning, but there are too many and it's weird [Thoughts]

The rhythm is good and it's a Western fantasy genre that suits my taste (although it feels more Japanese fantasy) The character portrayal is also relatively clear. Although the heroine is a bit stereotyped, it is handled well and has a good look and feel. The only drawbacks are some details. For example, it's a bit awkward to announce a series of skill names out loud. A small part of the plot is too hasty and the character portrayal lacks new ideas. You can try to innovate and start practicing with small roles. But overall it's really good. Please support it with five-star reviews.

I have only read fourteen chapters so far, but the author wrote it very cleverly. Regardless of the subsequent battles that were skipped in the previous chapter, this can last at least three or four chapters in the starting point. Skipping here will only make us feel just right. The author also cleverly uses the good person system to find a balance between the "positive energy writing requirements" and what readers generally read now. All in all, a very wonderful novel.

It's quite poisonous, but it's not unattractive either.

The writing and emotional description are very good. I think it has a starting point, surpassing 80% of tomato history books. The content is also creative and exciting. It is strange that it is not popular, it is strange that some people have negative reviews, and it is strange that no one reads it. I have read the book for more than 10,000 hours and feel it is a pity. Have others not read the book?

I've read a few chapters and couldn't help but comment. The writing is really good. Every line reminds me of the feeling of watching dance works when I was studying. I'm really surprised. The author's writing has the style of a general.

Can't the male protagonist see other people's emotions? Why didn't it disappear later?

Nothing wrong. . The only problem is that the protagonist is the same as the native. In other words, the protagonist is a native with some ambition and ability. Or maybe it's actually because the protagonist acted too "shocked"? I don't quite understand it, but it does seem like the protagonist has "integrated into the rank".

Compared with other so-called "northern lord farming and upgrading to become emperor" novels, this book starts out very naturally and smoothly, unlike other novels that start with a dump truck + unpopular noble heir + sudden system + northern territory + bought girl. You can follow

You are creating a good person template that is recognized by most people in the novel, but this is only your own opinion and may not be accepted by others, nor may it be a truly good person in the real world. This illusory and subjective way of describing values ​​cannot reflect the complexity and diversity of human society, and will screen out many readers. Maybe you should read Kant's "Critique of Judgment" to have a more objective judgment, and then think about what a good person is.

It looks good, but the time traveler setting is the only flaw.

It's really good. The protagonist is not stupid. He can't defeat high-level BOSS, and he won't skip the challenge at every turn. This is the first time I have seen a reasonable and comfortable military structure in a non-Western historical text, especially the combination of legion system and knight system that is not obtrusive. It is really great. The emotional drama is also well written, thumbs up I just realized that the rating is so low, please stop being a eunuch, author [face covering]

I don't know why it doesn't score high, but it's actually very well written, with good rhythm and writing style, although it borrows a lot of lines from the setting [laughs]

I am Shennong Shui, I thought it was written like a martial arts novel, with fights and dialogues, and slow progress. I can only say that I am a little disappointed, but I will continue to check it out.

It's okay. It's wonderful, but the AI ​​polishing is too obvious.

The rating is obviously low. It's a very good book with very picturesque descriptions. I like it.

An interesting Lord of the West, worth watching

I think it looks good and interesting. The author's writing is very good. Please be sure to update it vigorously! Not enough [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

At present, this is the pinnacle of Tomato West fantasy novels.

Beautifully written, with good plot and characterization

The writing is very good, and the world described is very real, but after more than 50 chapters, the quality, plot, and personal feelings declined. Maybe the front one is more in line with my preferences. Come on! This is love! ! ! ?

Fascinating and very beautiful, it is a rare product that I can find in Tomato

Strange, why is the Church of Light the villain in every book?

It's pretty good, but my personal power is too unclear. I feel like I'm just a little bit stronger here and a little bit stronger when I level up.

It's a good Western fantasy. Why do you have to add a space ring to destroy the overall structure?

It's okay, a little bit too little poisonous.

To be honest, reading this novel is a bit like playing a single-player role-playing World of Souls game.

It's pretty good, but I personally don't think it makes sense. 4.5 Points