[Campus article] [The heroine's secret love] [The prodigal son returns] [The second male is on top] [HE] [Double cleansing]
On the first day of school, Zhang Dengdeng, a girl with social fears, just wants to be a little transparent.
She was huddled in the corner, but she became roommates with the boy with a dazzling smile who looked like a little sun - Wang Mingyuan!
He was cheerful and popular, but he was so bad at math that it gave her a headache. With the words "Mathematics is up to you from now on, my deskmate!" And a pack of sweet mints, she was caught off guard and broke into her dusty world.
She thought she had caught the light of youth.
He complimented her that her name was like a little lantern and her eyes were astonishingly bright when solving problems.
His presence gave her in the corner a secret taste of the sweetness of being seen.
Until she accidentally caught a glimpse——
In the Chinese class, the sunny classmate stared at the screen of his mobile phone with frighteningly gloomy eyes. The way he poked the screen with his fingers was like a different person.
What unspeakable secrets are hidden behind the sunny school grass?
When "math tutoring" becomes an excuse to get closer,
When the "little sun" is occasionally shrouded in haze,
Zhang Dengdeng clutched the bag of candy that he was reluctant to eat, and his heart beat wildly:
Being close to him is warmth? Or an abyss?
Reader comments
How should I put it? It was very complicated after reading it. This is how I felt after reading the book for the first time. At first, I thought it was a mutual healing between a gentle and beautiful good girl and a boy who appears to be sunny but actually has an unhappy family. Later, when Deng Deng and Jiang Jianian got together, I didn't feel happy. It's not that Jiang Jianian is not good. On the contrary, he is very good and the male protagonist of youth novels. But in my heart, I feel that Deng Deng should be with a sunny boy. But in fact, she and Jiang Jianian are rare. They accompany each other all the way and come together naturally. A gentle and ordinary life is hard to come by. He didn't have much feelings for Wang Mingyuan. The misfortune of his family had caused great harm to him, but he was lucky enough to meet the gentle and kind-hearted Deng Deng. The deliberately disguised sunshine allowed Deng Deng to lay down a "salvation" rope into his muddy life. However, instead of grabbing it, he "scratched" Deng Deng's hand holding the other end of the rope again and again. It was not until those hands were full of scars that he lost the rope and he wanted to crawl out of the mud. At first, I had a trace of regret after he woke up, but some of his actions in college later made me treat him... I can accept that he is not good enough for Deng Deng, but I cannot accept that he is not good enough for Deng Deng. Such a kind Deng Deng has given him opportunities again and again, but he still can't control himself and hurt Deng Deng. Maybe no one taught him how to love people, maybe he can't be very good to Deng Deng from the bottom of his heart. I hope Dengdeng and Carnival will always be happy. I hope Mingyuan wakes up early next time and meets his own "dengdeng".
It's pretty good, but I think the timeline of the main text is a bit too fast, which makes people feel more dramatized. But I think the extras are very well written. The extras written from the male protagonist's perspective are very detailed. The shortcomings of the previous male protagonists have also been filled in. The writing style is also very good, and there is room for improvement. I look forward to your next work.
The reason for the timeline may be that the author writes mostly short stories, so he can go through them quickly.
It's pretty good. It would be better to add Jiang Jianian as an extra. He should also have his own secret love history, right? Quite curious
How should I put it? It was very complicated after reading it. This is how I felt after reading the book for the first time. At first, I thought it was a mutual healing between a gentle and beautiful good girl and a boy who appears to be sunny but actually has an unhappy family. Later, when Deng Deng and Jiang Jianian got together, I didn't feel happy. It's not that Jiang Jianian is not good. On the contrary, he is very good and the male protagonist of youth novels. But in my heart, I feel that Deng Deng should be with a sunny boy. But in fact, she and Jiang Jianian are rare. They accompany each other all the way and come together naturally. A gentle and ordinary life is hard to come by. He didn't have much feelings for Wang Mingyuan. The misfortune of his family had caused great harm to him, but he was lucky enough to meet the gentle and kind-hearted Deng Deng. The deliberately disguised sunshine allowed Deng Deng to lay down a "salvation" rope into his muddy life. However, instead of grabbing it, he "scratched" Deng Deng's hand holding the other end of the rope again and again. It was not until those hands were full of scars that he lost the rope and he wanted to crawl out of the mud. At first, I had a trace of regret after he woke up, but some of his actions in college later made me treat him... I can accept that he is not good enough for Deng Deng, but I cannot accept that he is not good enough for Deng Deng. Such a kind Deng Deng has given him opportunities again and again, but he still can't control himself and hurt Deng Deng. Maybe no one taught him how to love people, maybe he can't be very good to Deng Deng from the bottom of his heart. I hope Dengdeng and Carnival will always be happy. I hope Mingyuan wakes up early next time and meets his own "dengdeng".
It's pretty good, but I think the timeline of the main text is a bit too fast, which makes people feel more dramatized. But I think the extras are very well written. The extras written from the male protagonist's perspective are very detailed. The shortcomings of the previous male protagonists have also been filled in. The writing style is also very good, and there is room for improvement. I look forward to your next work. The reason for the timeline may be that the author writes mostly short stories, so he can go through them quickly.
It's pretty good. It would be better to add Jiang Jianian as an extra. He should also have his own secret love history, right? Quite curious