Life Is About to End, Awaken the Longevity Burning System

It's beautiful. A little girl accidentally touched the hand of an 80-year-old man. Her face turned red and she was extremely shy😳[face covering]

Very good, give me some encouragement, it's an old article worth reading. My only wish is not to become younger, but to be an old man pretending to be a pig, eating a tiger, and pretending to be a worldly expert. Don't lose the coolness of this and it will be perfect [currently in development]

This book is well written, the plot is very compact, and the arrangement of the storyline is also ups and downs. However, the system is a bit contrary to nature and destroys the balance. Considering the protagonist's current state of racing against death, it is understandable, but it is recommended to weaken it appropriately in the later stage, otherwise it may collapse. [Smile]

The plot is very interesting, and the story is very strong. Even if it deliberately suppresses the protagonist's realm, it is always difficult to escape from danger, but the story is very strong. I can only say that it is a little unreasonable. Please encourage me.

I clicked it casually, planning to see how it goes first. After reading almost 20 chapters, I thought it was quite exciting. The rhythm is very gripping. A dying person encounters a system that burns lifespan. It is really difficult to play without a little bit of ruthlessness. Wait and see again. It seems that some details cannot withstand scrutiny.

The writing is very good. The pace was slow in the early stage, but it gradually started to gain strength. The overall pace was very good for me. I haven't lost my combat power after more than 500 chapters. It's a very good article about cultivating immortals. I rarely read articles about cultivating immortals, but this one has something that attracts me to keep reading. I don't understand why so few people read it. It's really good to read. You won't stop reading it just because it's not a brainless and refreshing article, right?

Yes, although it is a bit poisonous, the subject matter is quite novel, but it is definitely not enough to upgrade the spiritual root. Although you don't need the spiritual root after passing the Nascent Soul, it is recommended to add a bonus point that can upgrade the spiritual root in the later stage. The suggestion is that the cultivation method drives the spiritual root to upgrade.

Yes, yes, the plot is very good. It is not as fake as other cool articles. It is more realistic. The author's writing style is also very sophisticated. Although the rating seems to be relatively low, it will be higher in the future.

A very good book about cultivating immortality. It doesn't feel like anything fussy.

Tomato is a rare good book. If it weren't for the fact that the author was too anxious to write because of the data, I feel that this book is very complete. The characters who appeared in the early stage have their origins explained in the later stage, and the system is given a source. I read the entire book before commenting on it

[Like] This book has the feel of reading a novel about mortals cultivating immortality for the first time, but the amount is too small, and it will easily fade away as time goes by.

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The author's writing style is good, the content is clear and concise, the words are concise and capable, and the explanations are clear and concise. It's such a hasty ending, it's such a pity, give it a like and support! I've been following it for two months and it's the finale today.

Fellow Taoists, it's really worth seeing! A little girl was so shy when she touched the hand of the protagonist, an 80-year-old man [face covering] The protagonist took a small airship to cross a hundred miles in just one day [smile] I flipped through the next chapter and guess what I saw. The shy little girl was the heroine. At that time, the protagonist had not regained her youthful appearance. Hey [awkward laugh] She was awesome.

It's a good book. I hope the protagonist can look like an old man, with the demeanor of a protector and a sense of security!

It's good to read, indeed better than other fairy tales.

It's pretty good. I really like this kind of rhythm of slowly climbing up. Of course, I really hope that the follow-up storyline and combat power of Up will not collapse, and the leapfrog level will not be too outrageous.

It's my favorite novel, cautious protagonist, malicious world

The writing is okay, but the writing is still a bit immature and needs polishing. The plot is exciting.

The writing is really good, with novel themes and diverse stories. Especially the resetting of training scriptures, spells, etc. Is different from others.

This novel about cultivating immortals is great! The plot has ups and downs, the depiction of immortality is delicate, the characters are vivid, and the world of cultivating immortals is grand and exquisite. It allows me to immerse myself in the fun of cultivating immortals. It must be five stars!

Very beautiful and exciting. Much better than those mindless cool articles. This one should be given ten points.

The entry point is the calamity of life and death, which describes the protagonist's tenacious vitality and his struggle with heaven, earth and humans. Looking forward to the next plot >~<

The plot and characters are very cleverly designed, and the narrative is very smooth.

Engaging, clear, and well written!

It's relatively good. Although there is a system, the protagonist is not invincible at the beginning, but has a compact storyline. Every decision is related to life. It is worth watching.

The plot is compact and the character descriptions are realistic. It's a good book!

It's really good. Come on, author! ! ! It's really beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it?

The writing is really good. It is not easy to see such a good novel on this platform. I listen to it every night and fall asleep. The author must work hard. I wish you a great success.

It looks good, but some of the settings were not explained before, so it's close to perfect.