The Qing Dynasty's Ultimate Overachiever: Working for the Yongzheng Emperor from the Start

The idea of ​​the novel is quite good, but the writing is not messy. Don't just upload it blindly. Check it carefully and write an outline first, and think about it carefully... You don't have to write it with passion. Don't mess up a good novel!

Sister, some of the chapters you wrote are inconsistent. Jiang 👀 just saved the little eunuch, and when he turned around, the emperor forgot who she was, Eunuch Su. It seemed like he had just met her. It looked really contradictory. Also, the main character's mother was dead and alive again, which was too confusing.

The writing is very good, and the writing style is also very delicate, but I was a little dizzy after reading it. Where is the heroine on duty? Sometimes she is in front of the emperor, and sometimes she is in Chuxiu Palace. Why is the plot jumping around?

Author, the little knowledge points in your novel are more practical than those taught by teachers in books, like the nurse sister who is retiring who taught me during my internship.

Read a few more chapters before giving a rating. As long as it's not a myth about the golden finger system, etc., You can continue reading.

It feels very real, keep reading.

The content is true, the plot is compact, and it's beautiful to watch.

The heroine is so frustrated. In fact, the real Qing Palace was not that harsh.

Inconsistent, too many adjectives

The description is delicate, and the flowing words are filled with warmth.