Fate Holy Grail Betrayer Meets Righteous Fool

Although I have seen C-mother and Emiya's fanfics before, most of them weakened some of the stubborn characteristics of the two in order to form a bond. This one is the one that I have seen so far that best matches the personality of both parties, and it has a sense of fate. The text description and be route are also very game-like. I've read so many Sanxingdui novels in the past few days, and I finally got a gold card guaranteed (tears)

According to unofficial records, Miss Nasu Kinoko once secretly opened a trumpet. A certain domestic platform replenished the c-mother line. [Laughing evilly] Okay, no kidding. Review it carefully. This is an excellent c-mother line short story, which depicts a delicate and non-delayed emotional line within a limited number of words. I think this is rare. If you have played one or several of Xingyue's works, and at the same time regretted the ending of c-mother, I believe you will like this book. [Blowing kiss]

It looks good, the emotions are smooth, the characters are three-dimensional, and the bad ending makes the character of Shirou in the main line more three-dimensional, and Shirou's behavior can be understood better. The growth direction of Shirou in this line is not ubw but strengthening magic to strengthen his self-confidence. In fact, I still want to see a little extra story about how to hold the Great Holy Grail. After all, the Great Holy Grail, which cleans the souls of seven servants, has a unique skill that leads to the source, which is very attractive to magicians. How should Shirou hold it later? Will he still pick up projection magic after strengthening magic to the end? It does not have to be unlimited swords, but it can also be other swords. Damn it, this novel was moved and not written by the author. I found a translation that was available ten months ago. It has the same content as the novel [cry][cry][cry]

Very good, the character settings are very consistent with the original work, the story development is also logical, and very innovative [love] [love] [love] Personally speaking, only the details of Red A's battle against Winky are a bit strange, because Winky should be defeated after using ubw, but Winky still has room to take out ea after entering ubw. Although the explanation given in the article is that Winky further took out other Noble Phantasms beyond the concept of swords, making Red A gradually difficult to parry, which is also reasonable. Maybe it can be modified to a scenario where Red A is too late to activate ubw under the full power of Shining, and is killed by Shining with ea, but it doesn't hurt. The ending stopped at a very appropriate place. Although I actually wanted to see the story of Shirou and Caster after the fifth war, it was still very good. The only shortcoming was that it was too short [crying]

It looks good, the characters are very realistic and there is no OOC, and the plot is also written with the flavor of the original gal. It is like watching the original extra story. After watching it, I feel that I can also enjoy Shirou and C's mother. It is rare to see such a good fate fanfic.

Good stuff, I always feel that this is a real fanfic, there are no extraneous outsiders, only if lines that readers want to see.

Great, Shirou met C's mother. The two sympathetic souls let go of the pain of the past because of love. Shirou became the guardian of the Holy Grail for love and started a new future. Different from the original, but equally exciting But the good end is too happy, and the result is too different from the true ending. Lan Yu is completely useless in the true ending and has only symbolic meaning.

A very good short story, completed in chapter 61, with Emiya Shirou picking up Medea's if line instead of the teacher, and the single heroine Caster. The first-person dual perspective switch, from the perspectives of Shirou and Medea, unfolds a different five-war plot. How the righteous partner step by step moved the witch who had been betrayed many times, and how he obtained the final Holy Grail. The emotional line is delicate, and the plot development is also unique. Like one.

It's a very good novel, and the characters are not very OOC. The story is just too short, but it still feels very original. It would be great if there was a Shura Field! [Makes a face] (Although I know that with Emiya Shirou's character, it is impossible for him to have a harem)

I was originally surprised why Sakura had so few scenes, but thinking about Medea's appearance and exit in Sakura, then in this second Medea line, it is not a kind of compensation and revenge [laughter]

It's well written and tastes very similar to the fsn original. And the level is just right for me, the emotional line is clear and it's sweet but not too arrogant. It can also be seen from the outline of the story that it was written after a good idea, so all the foreshadowings are recycled very well. It is considered the best FSN fanfic I have ever read.

I rarely read Fate fanfics, so I don't know if it is original by the author. The linear title and narrative techniques of this game are very novel. The first-person narration and the occasional insertion of BE also have a game-like feel. I like this caster line very much. It is a rare masterpiece.

Let's talk about the conclusion first. In the fsn series, it means that fsn is not the fate series but it is a super cup. The author is loyal to the original work without being OOC. The writing style is very similar to the original game copywriting. It really feels like playing the original work. Even the dark setting that Shirou in different lines will take different paths is well written and eye-catching. The disadvantage is that it is too short.

It feels a bit like playing a game. The author must have played the original game. I gave up after a few days without reading the guide, and died easily [laughing and crying] The writing style is a bit average, but the emotions and inner dramas written are very consistent with the character settings. There is no OOC, so overall it is very good. Thank you to the author for coming up with more stuff.

A very interesting writing style, very refreshing, the emotional changes are very natural, and the characters are full-bodied. The attitudes of both parties towards each other during the emotional changes are very interesting. The details and foreshadowing almost feel a bit like grass and gray lines.

I've always wanted to read the story of Shirou and Mom, it's really good

When will the Kingdom of Heaven's Illya line, Rider line, Kallen line, Bazett line, Shen Er line, Tiger line, and the Liudong Isei line that I miss so much be arranged for me? It would be better if the book could be paired with game BGM and converted in real time

The feeling of the original novel comes up after just scratching it. To be honest, it's really good [blowing kiss] [Awkward laugh] It's just that Mom probably won't engage in any kind of "betrayal" until the middle of the show. The teacher in the original story picked her up and fell in love with her to death. Maybe this is more consistent with the original work, but if so, the story of the original work will be much less interesting. [Laughing] There is nothing wrong with either choice. Instead, this should be translated into Japanese and submitted to see if it can be animated [Blowing kiss]

Overall, the book is good, especially the appearance of be is eye-catching, and even has the feel of the original work. Although the plot is still a bit abrupt, it can be regarded as a superior work. Thank you to the author for this story. It also fulfills one of my wishes [Blow kiss]

Lao Xu once said that in order to maintain the quality of the Fate series, he will set a benchmark for subsequent spin-offs/extras/doujins. I think the answer to this benchmark is not fz, but this book

I don't know how to evaluate it. It's not that it's bad, on the contrary, it's just because it's so good and the smell of fate is so strong that my poor brain can't find any words to praise it. So, five stars! [Like][Like][Like]

It's very immersive and feels like the original game. Wow.

So well written A fateful ending that stands in regret and looks at the future, and a true ending that is full of hope and beautiful like flowers. After reading it, it does make people feel a little bit disappointed in the original work. The author's control of the plot and foreshadowing is also amazing, and the links are tightly linked. Although there is some lack of description of details, it is innocuous. The handling of various plots and the control of destiny are really a new experience that is different from the beautifully written works💪🏻🥰

This book is well written, not only has a normal timeline, but even a bad end, showing many possibilities. [Laugh]

It's a good book that needs no introduction. I read it in one sitting. However, in the final good end, only Medea seems to have disappeared, leaving only Lily. Can the author write a sequel to the true end, about Medea's thoughts after seeing this memory after returning to the Hall of Valor?

The good ending at the end is better than the bad ending that contrasts with the happy ending. This good ending is really too ordinary, but for the sake of the previous content, I still give it five points. I really wish this happy ending could be changed, really. . Let's write a good ending 2. I beg you, half the writing skills of the previous ending are better than this one.

Boss, will you write Medusa and Illya lines in the future? What do you plan to write in your next book?

The best fsn fanfic so far

It's a pity that I can only read the fanfic. There are many unexplored points in fsn. Except for the C sub-line that was clearly abolished, Sakura and Illya can only be regarded as fusion and deletion. The original Gossan family are not good birds. Zangyan wrote it out. Ahad of Einzbern and the darkness of the Tohsaka family are gone.

The rhythm is very tight, the psychological description is very rich, and it feels like you are reading an extra story. The writing is very good. All in all, it is an absolutely excellent short article [Like][Like][Like][Like]