After Breaking Off the Engagement, I Raised the Heroine of the Sadistic Novel to Be a Swordsman

The writing style is very delicate. It is either a sentence unique to Tomato or a paragraph of short white text. It gave me a feeling of being a literary youth (not derogatory) like a beacon fire drama about princes. It is very interesting, but it is a bit regretful that I did not see the slap-in-the-face clip of the Supreme Elder Qin worshiping the protagonist as his disciple at the disciple recruitment meeting. Why not eat the soft rice of the apprentice? I said it too early [face covering]. In Chapter 46, I thought that the sect leader would come in person to apologize and ask questions about the practice. After all, this is related to the future of the practice of everyone in the sect. It has been agreed that whoever can solve this problem will be handed over to the sect, but in the end, I agreed because of a piece of information [laughs]. The whole book just keeps bowing to various female protagonists and licking them. I have already guessed that the master and the senior sister will come in the future, and they must have forgiven each other in a few words, and then licked it [face covering] The bag will not be cleared [laughs], pretending to know everything, but in fact, in the eyes of these female protagonists, it is just a licking look, which means the writing is better, so I still keep the three stars. I can't stand it anymore, brothers, please take care of yourself, this is a licking novel.

In the rescue novel, the male protagonist adds points to himself by rescuing the abusive female protagonist. Currently, he has rescued a female sword fairy from seven hundred years ago. (The male protagonist is also full of buffs) The master who rebelled against the sect left the male protagonist to be punished The senior sister who dug out her own golden elixir caused her own cultivation to be ruined And the goddess sect who broke off the engagement😤 is indeed the script of Destiny's Child

The writing is pretty good, but the plot has some toxic points. These are not explained clearly at the end, so it makes people uncomfortable to watch. It's too early to say that Dabi's writing in that paragraph is really bad. A group of riddle people, often interspersed with some inexplicable plots. It's very uncomfortable for others to read, and it doesn't feel like it was written by one person.

This book has a very delicate description of emotions, which is its biggest advantage, but there are also some controversies. For example, regarding the treatment of the protagonist's senior sister and master, many people think that the male protagonist is a turtle, but I think the male protagonist is more like the Asashi male protagonist in ancient Japanese comics. The female protagonists fight with each other, while the male protagonist calms down and leads the harem leisurely. However, if the punishment for the senior sister and master is just a spanking, it is indeed a bit too light ( ⩌⤚⩌), also, I want to see Jiang Yiqing regretting it and being severely humiliated by the male protagonist~ʕ ◦`꒳´◦ʔBecause Jiang Yiqing's submissive look is indeed very cute~=ᗜωᗜ=

I didn't regret reading this book at all. After reading it, I feel that I will be drawn into it by the author's delicate writing style. The whole article is smart, fresh and full of new ideas, and it transforms many elements that are difficult to write at the moment into clear layers. After watching it, I really felt my mood improved. Of course, this is not a cool article. If you read too much Shuangwen, you will get bored and irritable. This book progresses gently and silently, describing the characters delicately and sublimating them. Ahhhh~ I feel so good

Generally speaking, the flaws are not outweighed by the flaws. Simulation plots are not uncommon in Tomatoes. Most of them are nothing special. However, the author's only outstanding advantage is that the writing style is good and the atmosphere is well created. Sometimes there is a slight sadness when writing simulations. If you like this kind of atmosphere, it will be a good read, but the shortcomings are also obvious. The author uses this dual-line method to write the novel, which sometimes feels a bit messy and the reading experience is not very coherent. Moreover, the author has laid a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, including Chapter 144 that I am currently reading. Because some of the foreshadowing in the early stage will not be until the later stage. It can only be recycled, so you will be a little confused when reading it, so I also hope that the author will slow down the pace of the story a bit. It will be much better to tell one story in one space, but overall it is still good. Readers who are short of books and like rich and delicate emotions should still be able to read it. Keep up the good work, author

I have finished reading the first simulation. I feel that the writing is very good, but I am a little anxious. In the first simulation, everything the male protagonist gives to the female protagonist is basically based on the premise of harming himself, and it feels like torture for the sake of torture. Moreover, the setting does not feel like someone who writes about cultivating immortals. You can feed your destiny to others at the golden elixir stage; Kenshin can steal the use of others; people who can create their own exercises to make up for congenital physical defects without any negative effects will be treated as waste if their cultivation is gone; the exercises have been practiced for several years, and they cannot continue to practice after returning the book.

I haven't seen such comfortable writing in a long time. The heroines in the author's works are very vivid, as if they are acting in front of you. The author also has his own considerations in the process of writing, such as what the normal plot development is like, and the author will avoid the shortcomings of those old routines, and correct and erase the shortcomings silently. It is very comfortable to read. The male protagonist's character is also very well created. He has an online IQ. He will keep an eye on himself when dealing with things. He will also pay attention to what is happening around him and will not act rashly until the evidence is confirmed. What impressed me the most was the author's concept of educating people. His three views are surprisingly correct. He will give his own opinions on the choices of the children around him, but if the children still insist on his own approach, he will not impose his own ideas on them. He will only try to minimize the risks of the matter. After all, it is not always possible to teach others, but just teach them once. If I were to rate this book, it would be rated at 9.6. I wouldn't rate it at 0.4 Because I haven't finished reading it yet and I don't dare to draw any conclusions. If the author insists on writing like this, I believe the rating will be more than six points.

[Shy] The description is delicate. Although sometimes I like to repeat the plot and the plot, it does not prevent it from being a good-looking article. As a newcomer, it is far beyond my expectations. It is awesome. There are too many women. I am very worried about the male protagonist. I will bear it for him if he applies for a replacement.

I enjoyed every simulation and now I'm watching the second one. When I saw this paragraph, I didn't hesitate to come over and give it 5 stars [sending my heart] "Lin Shiwan straightened up, patted the dirt on his hands, and looked up at the moon. The moon is very bright, as bright as those nights in Qin Jianjia's stories. The difference is that last time he only had one apprentice to protect. This time, he had two. They don't know anything and haven't experienced anything yet. Their biggest worries now are 'will the master be very strict' and 'will there be sweet-scented osmanthus cakes to eat tomorrow morning?'. What Lin Shiwan wanted to do was to let them only have to worry about these things forever. " There are some bugs in the setting and plot in some places, which makes it very confusing to watch. 1. The male protagonist simulates the first life for the second time, and one person fights 4 Yupu. Originally there were three, and then it was said that there were two Yupu in Qingqiu Mountain that could be dealt with, but I didn't know what to do with the extra one. Later, due to a sudden incident, it became 4. But what about the two in Qingqiu Mountain? How did it become a 1v4 with the male lead? (Maybe I watched it at night and missed it in a daze? Those two Yu Pu from Qingqiu Mountain were assigned elsewhere?). The male protagonist blew himself up across the border and crushed 4 people without saying anything. 2. In the second simulation of the reality competition after the first life. Qin Jianjia, the male protagonist's disciple, beats the male protagonist's former fiancée. Not keeping your wits about you? With the strength in the later stage of foundation building, [crush] the peak of the Zifu stage. She's still a saint, right? Such awesome strength cannot attract the Queen's attention (maybe I didn't watch the subsequent plot and don't know what her list is). Then, if the male protagonist (middle stage of the Purple Mansion) reaches the golden elixir realm, he should also consider using the Burning Infant Overcoming Tribulation Technique (to upgrade himself to the golden elixir level). I just want to say that although I know Qin Jianjia is very powerful, she is currently playing a [15-year-old late-stage Foundation Establishment], and she is 700 years old anyway. How can she get involved because of jealousy? (Of course, you can also say that she has been in retreat and her mental age is still very low). 3. What I am very puzzled about is why Qin Jianjia thinks that the male protagonist must know what happened between them. Instead of thinking that the male protagonist is reincarnated. Then I learned what abilities the male protagonist might be using to save various people. (Although it is true that she has been testing again and again, the male protagonist has not shown anything obvious, right? It's just a matter of habit) When I watch it now, I still like to watch simulated plots. After all, there are new love scenes every time, but I don't like watching real-life plots.

Qin Jianjia: I am his first daughter Those days were the best times of my life We have lived together for 11 years, just him and me, father and daughter After finding me, he brought me out of the darkness of Lingjian Sect Put me next to him and we spent some time together For 11 years, he only paid attention to and nurtured me A bond formed between us that is unbreakable Stronger than the bond he had with his other daughters. Because there's no one else like me among them spending so much time with him 11 years is not a long time, I think Compared with 700 years, 11 years is just one heartbeat. But even so, I still cherish that time [laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

How can it be written so well? I have cried several times. This writing style, the emotional rendering power, including the characterization, is really a good article. I don't know why the rating is so low.

It's okay, the writing is very good, but I feel that the description of the protagonist is too perfect. Even when the master defected and the golden elixir was dug up by the senior sister, he could still let go of his hatred. Then every time he found something suspicious about Qin Jianjia, he just wrote it down and didn't ask questions later. I hope the author can change it.

This article is characterized by delicate emotions, but occasionally there are some small bugs in female videos. Overall, it is still very interesting. I hope everyone can read it more. The first simulation was very well written. Problems started to arise in the second simulation. There were too many female protagonists, and many of the characters were not fleshed out enough. The Empress was even a little baffling. It was baffling for a high-level person to desperately try to destroy the Fox Clan. It was also baffling that the Empress could send dead servants out to die at will. It was even more baffling that the Empress could use a carriage to escape when escaping. After cultivating immortals, you can also use a carriage to escape. This is the reason for the low rating of all the emotionally well-written articles. In the third simulation, I still couldn't help myself, I still re-cultivated, and the female character was portrayed even more like she didn't. He got married, and then took her to escape from the marriage. In a world of cultivating immortals, I still run on my feet, or I send people to chase me. It's inexplicable. Now I am with the master, and it is also inexplicable. Author, the reason why you describe these people being bad to the male protagonist is not sufficient. Why do those high-level bad guys suddenly appear? Why he suddenly came to oppose me is completely inexplicable. Those who have cultivated to the highest level should be the most awesome, no one can defeat them. It is not that the heroines have cultivated to the highest level, instead of high-level villains appearing to fight and fight with them during the battle.

The author writes well, the emotional line is very delicate, all the characters are well integrated, the plot is natural and comes naturally, and the subject matter is very novel. I hope the author will become bigger and stronger!

It's very interesting. I think the protagonist is very good. Although the master and the senior sister are wrong, I want to bring them back on track. I like this very much. I don't like the kind of characters that just fight and kill at every turn.

It's pretty good. At least it's rich in emotion, the plot is smooth, the lyrics are not awkward and blunt, and there aren't that many mindless plots. The development is also very warm. It can be regarded as a good simulation novel.

Quick update, I can't sleep at night, when will I abuse the male protagonist Master [Adoration] [Adoration], a bad woman must abuse her mouth and teeth severely, (for example, the news that the male protagonist will die soon (fake death) reaches the Demon Master?)

After reading 60 chapters, I can see that the author's writing is good. I have also read a lot of similar novels and female pornographic novels. The author is awesome. Come on, author, keep updating. Also, Xia Kong is really good-looking [laughter]

The plots of books written by highly intelligent people are so grand that there are thousands of chapters that would be impossible to explain. The writing is good, the concept is excellent, and the characterization is the finishing touch. The rating should not be so low. A thousand-mile horse still needs Bole to choose it.

I was almost put off by the rating, but it's actually pretty good-looking and the writing is okay.

It's a very good emotional narrative. The arrangement in this aspect is much more comfortable than ordinary simulation articles. It would be nice if the author could do more [crying] I still hope that there will be more elements of two-way redemption, and the more I write it, the more it looks like a female-channel romance. The male protagonist is a bit inhuman, and the plot has become so slow. Can it be faster? Stop sprinkling sugar. Pure sugar with unclear meanings is not good to watch. The more I watch it, the more outrageous it becomes.

Good writing is good writing, but it's still a female channel!

Can you give Fu Yanqing a good ending?

I have seen the second simulation now and it feels very good. I hope to continue to stick to it.

It's really good, it has a low score, but overall it's considered excellent in all aspects of Tomato.

No joke, among the many simulation articles I have read, this one is one of the few that is well written, and the author's progress can be clearly seen. Come on

At least the emotions are written in a delicate way, without being literate. It is rare to find it in tomatoes.

It's pretty good in Tomato. Everyone's set up is pretty good, and the writing is also pretty good. It makes people feel itchy just looking at it.

It's okay. The overall plot and foreshadowing are in place. The details are a bit AI-like. I guess it's because of AI optimization, but it doesn't affect it. After all, creativity and storytelling are the most important now.