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Reader comments
There are too many false and empty descriptions. The first time they met Da Jian, there was no fight, no communication, and no name was even announced. Then the protagonist thought they were teammates. Then they repeatedly emphasized the story of one hundred years of solitude and one hundred years of forbearance, which always gave people a sense of wishful thinking and self-impression! The entire plot of Big Sword is basically sad. The protagonist is not invincible at the beginning or invincible when he appears. Facing the Big Sword that can be awakened at any time or has already been awakened, that's a giveaway! Watching the protagonist rise up on the front foot, and as soon as the character is established, the back foot is watching the civilians die. I guess blindly, the protagonist has actually awakened! Otherwise it won't be blocked at both ends, like a lunatic!
There are too many false and empty descriptions. The first time they met Da Jian, there was no fight, no communication, and no name was even announced. Then the protagonist thought they were teammates. Then they repeatedly emphasized the story of one hundred years of solitude and one hundred years of forbearance, which always gave people a sense of wishful thinking and self-impression! The entire plot of Big Sword is basically sad. The protagonist is not invincible at the beginning or invincible when he appears. Facing the Big Sword that can be awakened at any time or has already been awakened, that's a giveaway! Watching the protagonist rise up on the front foot, and as soon as the character is established, the back foot is watching the civilians die. I guess blindly, the protagonist has actually awakened! Otherwise it won't be blocked at both ends, like a lunatic!