Surviving the Apocalypse in the Girls' Dorm: Activating the Homebody System

The article is good, but it is too difficult to read. There are many metaphors and exclamation points. It is very tiring and hard to read. I will write two paragraphs to express my feelings: The huge glass curtain wall of the supermarket was smashed by an out-of-control car! Glass shards sprayed into the supermarket like a rainstorm! Half of the front of the car was stuck in the hole and was smoking! Scream and stampede instantly upgrade! The crowd went completely crazy, running in all directions like headless flies! The shelves were knocked down harder! The scene completely turned into a disaster movie scene! "Qingge! Listen to me! Turn right in the back alley! Go straight for fifty meters! Turn left into the 'Chunfengli' community! Go through! Avoid the main gate! Exit from the small iron gate on the east side of the community! Go to Wenhua Road auxiliary road! Walk along the wall! Turn right at the first traffic light into Wutong Lane! Over the low wall at the end of the alley is the small east gate of the school! We are responding at the east gate! Hurry! Don't stop! There was an abnormal vibration just now! Danger!" And it's not just these two paragraphs. The author feels that the exclamation mark is used as a comma period. It is understandable that the new book wants to polish the writing or express a panic tone or scene, but it really feels like an explosion to read. However, I feel that the new article still has potential. Come on, the author, wait until you are fatter and then read it💕 I went shopping and came back again🤣 I still think this article is good, at least I feel that the plot and the heroines are all online It's such a pity that updates have been stopped. The author is waiting for your return💕💕💕

Please let more people read such a beautiful article. I'm not used to no comments and interactions.