Hogwarts: I’m a Grind Machine, Not the Dark Lord

It feels very good, and it belongs to the type that you can read again after a long time, which shows that almost every picture is attractive enough. As for the women's issues mentioned in some book reviews, I think it's nothing, right? Because there aren't any ambiguous scenes, and this book doesn't claim to have no elements of the opposite sex. That Sylvia can't be called a heroine, she actually feels like Harry Potter and the others, more like the protagonist's friend. ... In order to praise the heroine, the author has already started to make random changes. I originally thought it was normal to have a female protagonist, but now I understand why other readers can't accept it. In Chapter 314, the protagonist, as a wizard who pursues knowledge, used white fresh essence to treat himself after fighting with others, and was then dragged by the heroine to find the lady in the infirmary. The result was that the protagonist's treatment would delay the healing of the wound. ? Co-author: Is this the result of three years of studying potions with Snape? Snape didn't teach you a single healing potion? Do you think it's appropriate that the great wizard who can defeat the Super Auror Team led by Stringer himself doesn't know how to treat wounds? Then the heroine asked the protagonist to teach her. What she was thinking was that the protagonist would waste time on her instead of going out to hang out. This part made me really angry. The protagonist clearly spent time making himself stronger, but was stopped by the heroine, and the protagonist happily agreed. The heroine can be a booster or a vase, but is it a very advanced and clever way of writing for the heroine to hold the protagonist back? Unacceptable and disappointing

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Mink Cicada and Sun Wukong Q battle hundreds of rendezvous, but Xue Baochai really It's too strong, if it weren't for Noshou's outer ring + Noxus' break Headquarters, this wave of M4 six times strafing will kill you. But I am more thoughtful Ge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, one You are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", showing Zhuge Ryo was angry at Monkey for beating him to death with three sticks, and Luffy followed him for Rem's sake. Ultraman Q had a pair of waves, and the whole episode was spent with just money. But Pikachu's skin is indeed too thick, if it weren't for Yasuo's wind barrier Live at 100,000 Volts, then follow up with a Steel Cutting Flash, this wave of Turtle Style Qigong Accumulation will be interrupted. But I care more about Lin Daiyu's Q pair The line from League of Haters, "Brother Baoyu, these guys wearing leather jackets... Are weirdos here to rob the Grand View Garden? ", Showing Lin Daiyu For Iron Man, Q 14 flies in the sky and cannot come down. All in all, this The plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, and there are many foreshadowings. Fighting arena Face as if you were there

There's no big problem with the plot, and the characters are pretty good too. It is still recommended to indicate in advance that there is a female protagonist or you are not sure about it in the introduction. People who want to watch without cp will easily quarrel with others after seeing so many interactions (a group of people who are inexplicable)

Marvelous! The writing style is very mature, the plot is coherent and reasonable, and the character behaviors and personality transitions are very natural. Except for some scene descriptions that may be trying to imitate the translation accent, they are all remarkable. It's rare to see a Harry Potter article with such a complete and reasonable system. The last time I saw such a mature one was the Bloodline Wizard (others are also very good, such as Chinese education and drinking black tea, but I personally always feel that too much humor can cause drama). I really hope that the author can stick to it and not be defeated by the current poor data! (I'm a little confused as to why the rating is 6.6, I feel it's at least 8 or above)

It's so good, a pure wizard upgrade story, the plot is very natural and smooth! However, there are some very harmonious companionship emotional lines, which are currently single arrows towards the protagonist. In the past two days, I have been so addicted to reading novels that I forgot about food and sleep. I recommend it.

It's so good-looking, the protagonist has many fantastic ideas, the content focuses on knowledge and is not boring, the protagonist is not distinctive, and the relationship with the heroine does not exceed his age.

The writing is really good, but I thought it had no cp, but the more I read it, the more I thought it had cp. I gave up after reading more than 300 chapters, but the author's writing is really good and the logic is very rigorous.

The protagonist learns to become stronger. I feel that the writing is really good. The logic is clear and the character is good. However, the heroine Sylvia is very abrupt because it has little effect and is somewhat inexplicable. And sometimes it delays the protagonist's concentration on becoming stronger. So it is a small point and the only place where I feel dissatisfied. Everything else is okay. I can watch it. I think it's 8 to 8:5.

This is the fanfic that I have read that respects the original the most. Relying on various private settings extended from the world view of the original work, it is organized and systematic. It feels like the author himself is like the protagonist, like a Ravenclaw who loves to study (I use "like" because the protagonist is Slytherin). The research and improvement of the protagonist's magic is full of details, which almost brings the reality of the Harry Potter world from the second dimension to the third dimension. The character design of the protagonist is also very good. So far, he has clear goals, self-consistent logic, step-by-step growth, and an online IQ. The career line is the main one, and the emotional line is looming but very natural, and it comes naturally. Personally, I think it is a masterpiece with a score of 9 or above.

The writing is smooth and there are no obvious loopholes. The author will translate the original work to clarify the concept, which can be said to be rigorous. I haven't seen the emotional line yet. The protagonist's original family has been mentioned a few times, but the latter are all about the protagonist personally. Maybe it's just to flesh out the character's image? But due to personal hobbies, the theory and exploration of new knowledge parts are a bit too much for me. It takes a lot of effort to become the protagonist of the Great Magician... Maybe it took more than half a day to read it, so it was a bit boring. The book is good