The cold leather feels against your fingertips, like a piece of ice that will never melt.
He used what little strength he had left in his body to hold it tightly. The rough edge of the leather ring touched the palm of my hand, causing a subtle but clear pain. The nails dug deeply into his palms, leaving crescent-shaped white marks, but he felt no pain at all.
Only the huge, empty, gouged-out wound in his heart emitted a silent, heart-rending cry with every heartbeat. The wound was bone deep, forever exposed to the cold air, never scabbed, never healed.
Reader comments
Overall, it's good, but the language is still too cumbersome. It can be simplified next time. Big boost to the author! [Laugh]
The detailed descriptions of the characters in the book are very good. Through these detailed descriptions, you can feel the inner activities of the characters and feel the emotional fluctuations of the characters.
Overall, it's good, but the language is still too cumbersome. It can be simplified next time. Big boost to the author! [Laugh]
The detailed descriptions of the characters in the book are very good. Through these detailed descriptions, you can feel the inner activities of the characters and feel the emotional fluctuations of the characters.