Original God's Fun Record

The beginning is subtle, but the writing starts to gain momentum in the middle. I think the best fan fiction is to make the words and actions as close to reality as possible without making the characters OOC. There is no doubt that this book can achieve this. This book is not a light-hearted novel, at least not at its core, but the tone has been set and it is destined not to be read by a large number of people in a short period of time. Therefore, I suggest the author not to place too much emphasis on results. The merits and demerits of the book are up to one's heart, and the data will alienate your and my efforts. If possible, I am very much looking forward to how this Ji person can use his mortal power to move this extremely real corner of the Demonic Continent. Thanks to the author for allowing me to read such a down-to-earth novel in this impetuous era.

In fact, I have never understood the protagonist's intention to reform Liyue. This is for the sake of Liyue. Why do Zhongli and the Xian family distrust the protagonist so much? The protagonist has never done anything bad to Liyue. Isn't the protagonist simply being hot-faced and cold-assed? After working hard for Liyue, most people are cold-eyed. And can't the protagonist make it clear? He has to make others hostile to him, and has a masochistic tendency? Isn't it going to be like "I was misunderstood by everyone, and everyone will regret it after I die" later on. Of course, apart from this point, I personally think the novel is quite beautiful and a masterpiece. Finally explained, this star can be made up

As the second creation of Genshin Impact, it seems a little too serious and heavy, but from the perspective of forensic writing, it can be called a fairy tale. There is no one-step method to reach the sky without deus ex machina. The disadvantage is that it can be expanded to write millions of words in tens of thousands of words. If there are new works in the future, you can try it on some niche platforms (Red, Green, and Blue are easy to get into when writing like this) Some of the plot settings rely on reasoning based on the game's copywriting, so it is a bit thin, and the language is also a bit fragmented (the unique charm of political animals cannot be freely retracted), highly recommended! ! !

It's a pretty good work, although some of the protagonist's actions are quite brutal, and the team controlled by the protagonist is too powerful, which makes the plot flow very much like a behind-the-scenes plot. But all the original characters are not OOC so far, which is very, very good.

After reading 100 chapters, I also finished the first sequence. After reading the author's summary, I had some thoughts. I feel that one of the biggest highlights of this book and what I like the most is the political sense of humor. It is different from other Genshin Impact fan fiction. It is not the same stereotyped style, and the subject matter is relatively new, which can be regarded as a bright spot for me. In addition, I also liked playing Genshin Impact before, but I was relatively young at the time and didn't know much about the political aspects of the plot. Now when I read this book again and relive the old things, I feel that I have lost them in the morning and have a new feeling. In summary, it is worth watching, and it can be considered a fine chaff in Tomato. As for the low rating, it may be because it is not suitable for the taste of most people in Tomato, and the structure of the first prologue is indeed a bit messy.

It feels good and the readability is quite good. But the immortals felt something was not right about the protection of corruption and Zhongli's hesitation. It's not that questioning and hesitation are wrong, it's that questioning and hesitation are not right. They should be worried or even afraid about the unknown future, but they should not be worried or afraid about Hai Qing He Yan and the good present. Otherwise, I suspect that they have not escaped from the world, but are enjoying the privileges of the nobility. Regarding the question of the immortals and Zhongli in the article, I want to ask a question: whether they can save the people who starve to death in Liyue, the richest country in Tiwat, and whether they can save the people who are tortured to death by privileges and starve to death in the richest port of Liyue, why are they so protective and kind to the nobles and traitors?

From my perspective, the problems are threefold: First, it is seriously inconsistent with the title of the book. After all, I really didn't enjoy it until the end of the volume. The performance of the second protagonist's purpose is too late Sanweixianjia may be a bit OOC for those who play Genshin Impact But the flaws do not hide the flaws. Judging from my 10 years of novel reading experience, it is 9.3 Or 9.4. Of course, since the author shares most of the same views as me, I should give it a higher rating. This book is not suitable for first-time readers or those who are too cerebral. The former is not suitable for expressing some problems with this kind of conflict, and the latter is not suitable because of the second problem I mentioned. Of course, it is also not suitable for some people who have different opinions. Overall, it is an unusually good book.

The writing is very good, and if it can be maintained in the follow-up, I think it can set a precedent among Genshin Impact novels. Looking forward to the follow-up development, and curious about how the author will fill some pitfalls. The most curious point is, why does Ji want to reform? There has to be a reason for reform, right? At present, it seems that the emperor, the immortals, and the seven stars are not the reasons for the protagonist's reform.

It's super good-looking, and it's completely a mortal's defiance of nature. The author must update it. The author's soul returns. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back. The soul is back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and is blessed by you in all your lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. (Heart of the curse: The Supreme Order, transcend your lonely soul. Escape from the sea of ​​suffering and reincarnate as a human being.)

In terms of planning and accounting, he is still good, but unfortunately he still lacks strength. In the end, everything he plans is to make wedding clothes for others, and he gets nothing. Without power everything is empty talk.

It's very different from ordinary Genshin Impact. It feels more like a deconstruction and reuse of Genshin Impact's worldview. It's really nice to read. I recommend it.

The protagonist is not a person who stands in the light from the beginning. He is dedicated to himself. The people who persecute the most are the fools. There is no death of the stuck character. He does not blindly follow the plot. He has created a languid and bad Ji Mou with a bit of an official flavor. It is worth watching and looking forward to the sequel.

It's like this, as long as you can pick out the bugs in the tree, even if you hollow out the tree, it's worth it. Liquidation is still liquidation. No matter you are a fairy or a god, as long as you block my way, you will be liquidated.

Regarding political humor and fun, Tomato once had another book. I am currently taking a wait-and-see attitude towards this book. That book is the first one in Genshin Impact in my mind, and it is the second one by @ mass-produced Qunyuge. (It's really beautiful

If you don't want to see the system, harem, etc., Feel free to watch it.

The plot arrangement, character portrayal, and growth curve are all very good. The only thing I am a little dissatisfied with is that Lao Ji does some things a little too harshly. We can seek a win-win situation. There is really no need to be too capitalistic. It is quite distressing to watch.

This book is biased towards doing "politics" in Tiwatri. The protagonist makes subjective changes to Teyvat from a relatively objective perspective. The character's IQ, personality, personality, plot characterization... Are all fairly objective and logical. Well, overall it's worth watching. All the way to the back, it hasn't collapsed yet. There was no left-brain elbow hitting the right brain.

In fact, I really want to watch an emotional drama. The tenderness shown in the gags is very poignant. If you are worried that the writing is not good, you can add more daily perspectives of the characters as a way to adjust the reading. The emperor's perspective is very good. After reading the first volume, I feel that there are not enough characters deeply involved in the plot. A large number of characters have not appeared. It is very enjoyable to read it in one go, but I think it will be difficult to read it.

After the end of the first volume, the political humor in the second volume is a bit deliberate The second volume is very boring. The protagonist is an old man, but his mentality is too exaggerated. I don't know how the author arranged it.

It will be really comfortable to understand. The author writes very well. You must work hard and stick to it, 😘

Very interesting, the content is excellent

Love to watch. The protagonist is simply very cunning.

It's really good-looking, with a rare plot that makes people feel comfortable watching it.

It's good to watch, but the digging hole in the front is a bit too deep and looks weird, but the plot behind it is very good. In fact, the main reason is that there are too few. It would be absolutely fine if people could read the first volume directly, but the update was not completed at that time. So, ten chapters a day, just for this book ◝(⑅•ᴗ•⑅)◜..°♡

The front is a bit bland, but the back starts to get a little interesting.

Why is the rating so low? Is it because it writes about politics? In my opinion, it is at least 8.5 Or above.

It's pretty good, but the number of words is a fatal flaw, so I'll give it a while. Too few chapters

Follow the plot and make jokes. Original name: Music Record.

To be honest, among the many Genshin Impact fan fictions I have read, this one is considered very good.

I like to watch this kind of protagonist with a high IQ, not the kind of hot-blooded virgin [note][note]