Disciple, Why Did You Turn Your Master into an Alchemy Furnace?

To be honest, I care more about the daily life and the process of reconciliation between the male protagonist and the three female protagonists than about improving one's realm or opportunities, etc. Because things like improving one's realm, opportunities, etc. Are all over the Internet. Unless there is a very novel way of writing, there is no need to write too many of these types of events. Then, after you get to know the three heroines to a certain extent, you can confess that you are not your original identity. This book is quite good, but the female protagonists forgive too quickly. Normally, it is impossible to forgive so quickly. The author can refer to me. I personally think that the ceiling of this type of tomato is called: Do you all love the heroine? I took the villainess away. The portrayal of the female protagonist in it is very real and delicate. Although the male protagonist has always been very good to the female protagonist after time travel, due to various previous experiences, the female protagonist has been pretending to get along well with the male protagonist. In fact, she has always wanted to kill the male protagonist. During this period, the inner struggle of the heroine and the daily kindness of the hero to the heroine were written. It really impressed me as a bookworm of more than ten years. Later, because of what the heroine went through, I really couldn't bear to do anything, but I felt in my heart that I couldn't forgive myself for acting like a dog. Being led away by the male protagonist, he regretted the last step of his plan to murder the male protagonist. After meeting the male protagonist for the last time, he helped clean and organize the male protagonist's room, went shopping with the male protagonist to buy clothes and told the male protagonist how to behave in the future, and then left with an excuse. The female protagonist cannot forgive herself or the male protagonist, so she calmly chooses to die by herself. The female protagonist feels that her death is also a punishment for the male protagonist, so that he will never forget her for the rest of his life. (The female protagonist is very smart. Murdering the male protagonist in the book is a plan to kill two birds with one stone. It can not only kill the male protagonist but also kill other enemies. Later, if she can't bear it, she will replace the male protagonist and put herself in the position to die.) I think the above is relatively true. Personally, I don't think people should be forgiven so quickly. However, the author has also written it very well. I highly recommend the author to refer to the above book. Come on.

Very beautiful, recommended! The writing is beautiful, and the description of the wood makes you feel like you are in that small courtyard in the cold wind. After seeing too many empresses, saints, sons and goddesses coming and going from high places, you might as well read the story of cultivating immortals from the real bottom, where they struggle bit by bit.

It looks good. I think it's enough to keep this kind of warmth. I hope there won't be any conflicts for the sake of conflict or forced intrigues. It's very good-looking. I hope there won't be any knives. Come on!

After reading Chapter 21, I feel that the writing is very good and the old author writes it very smoothly. From the beginning, it introduces the current difficulties faced by the male protagonist, namely the poor life and the abuse of the three apprentices. The only drawback is that the author doesn't seem to have a clear explanation of levels at the beginning. The simple spiritual roots, physical constitution, medicine refining level, magic weapon level and even the cultivation system are very vague.

This book should belong to the slow-paced genre. This is the only slow-paced novel that I have read word-for-word from the beginning to the latest chapter. The writing is fine and the characters are well created, but there are some rare words that I can't understand. All in all, it is a good book. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update, and I am more and more looking forward to the future development. I am very curious about how the author will deal with variables such as Da Su Li and Da Qi, as well as the original plot of Ye Qingcheng's failure to conceive a baby. Will there be another knife in this world line? I quite like this character.

It's written by a small workshop, so you can generally read it. Come on. It's really embarrassing

The writing is good, the writing style is relaxed and pleasant, and the plot arrangement is reasonable. It is worth reading. Start high and go low. There is too much nonsense in the mid-term, and the description is protracted. There is not much substantive content in each chapter, and the frequency of updates cannot be maintained. It is too different from the beginning. It is recommended to wait and see.

Come on, author. In the novel, I saw the hardships of rising from hardships, and the warmth of people getting along with each other. It is the kind of scene in my ideal world where my characters live in my hands. I hope the author can stick to it, and the author has updated a lot, and I am very satisfied. I just hope that the protagonist can grow up quickly and be able to protect them from the wind and rain. Judging from the current situation, the rhythm is well controlled. I hope the author can continue to maintain it. I hope that after a thousand sails, I will still be a young man when I come back. [Blow kiss][Eat melon]

The writing is clear, the plot is smooth, and the psychological changes of the characters are well handled. I look forward to the follow-up plot. (I still don't know why the book keeps showing that it is being removed from the shelves)

7.1 Points. Sure enough, the score means nothing. With three female apprentices, they have been getting better and better along the way. The protagonist and the people around him are all very qualified, so it seems quite comfortable. The master and the disciple are just a little ahead, and they immediately enter the life of a master, a kind and a disciple, and a filial piety. There are not many bad people and many good people. Apart from the fact that she is a woman who has to go to great lengths to marry the protagonist, there is basically nothing else that she cannot accept.

The core focus of this type of article actually lies in the calculations between people, the thoughts, experiences, and changes of the male and female protagonists. The story is the cornerstone, logic is the line, and the main line (improving cultivation, solving suspense, foreshadowing, etc.) Is used to write the work well. However, the priority of the novel is inverted compared to most conventional novels - the things between the male and female protagonists are highlighted, and the main line is secondary. The thinking and logic of this book are okay, but the psychological changes of the characters need to be expanded upon. The most ingenious, funny and humorous article I have ever seen written about multiple female protagonists is the Magician's Manual of the Twelve Heavenly Kings and Hundred Alliances in 2018. The two most commendable points are: 1. The characters are distinct, and the words of each character are in line with the character's distinctive personality; 2. The details are appropriate and the priorities are orderly. When a person does something, what he does, how he thinks, and how it fits the person's personality are the key points.

This is the first time I have encountered such a comforting book after reading it for such a long time. Many of the points that others think are poisonous actually make the characters more real to me. I hope the author can keep updating it. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's a very good book. I feel that the emotions occur very naturally and smoothly, and the story is very clear and attractive. In some aspects, it really doesn't lose to those top-notch immortal novels. It may be that the writing style and the entire world view are limited, but objectively speaking, the score is at least 8.5. Yes, I feel that the title and introduction of the book need to be changed, because the content of the book is more oriented toward daily life and traditional fairy tales. The yandere feels more like a little easter egg. Maybe many people come here for the yandere. However, after reading it hundreds of thousands of times and not seeing it, the rating is low.

It's a very interesting novel. I've read the latest chapter and I feel that the world view the author wants to write about is very big and the timeline is different. It's very novel. I'm wondering if the relationship with the senior sister can be speeded up. [Thinking] The protagonist should have some enlightenment, and the relationship with the apprentice should be developed slowly. After all, there is no new village even now [laughs]

At the beginning of this book, the plot of feeding his master poison and being discovered should be based on another book. I forgot the name, but that book also has three female apprentices, and in another book, Xiao Qi is sent by his master to a workshop to be used by others.

It's okay. The biggest poisonous point at the moment is that the 9-year-old disciple talks like a four- or five-year-old. If he is really uneducated, he should become a wolf boy or a mute, because development is a critical period. If you miss it, he will not make up for it backwards, but will be dead directly.

It took me more than a day to read the latest chapter. The overall impression is good. I personally don't think it's toxic. Although I can't wait to read the subsequent chapters, the author seems to work during the day and code at night? Quite hard work. Anyway, come on! Watch this book!

I am not a reader of male videos. I opened this book due to study needs. Although I haven't read much, I clearly feel that the author has put in a lot of effort. You can feel emotions, values ​​and something like hope at the beginning (?). All in all, it is a work written with care. The interspersed rants are also very funny. Come on, author, keep writing!

Okay, it's very well written. It's not the kind of mindless cool novel. The characters and emotions are delicately portrayed. The author should keep it this way. Don't listen to those things that are lacking. I've read too many interesting articles that are lacking. It doesn't matter if the update is slow. Write slowly. I support you, the author. Come on.

You need to be cautious when entering the pit and upgrade the panel. These are not big (currently reading more than 230 chapters). They are mainly about daily life and emotions. You can take a look at it on a daily basis, but the emotions of disciples, masters and various people seem very suffocating. (The above only represents my personal opinion, please don't criticize me if you don't like it) [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ]

First of all, I am quite opposed to the harem, but the author's writing skills are really good, and it looks very comfortable. The depictions of the several apprentices are also very vivid, and the rhythm is just right. However, I feel that the combat power will collapse in the later period. Let's see how the author controls and adjusts it.

It's not a sadistic article. Although the pace is slow, the overall layout is very good. It is suitable for people who like to read slowly. I highly recommend it. I also like the author's style. Cheers, author [blowing kiss]

It's good-looking, the realm is consistent, the plot is reasonable, and it's not exaggerated at all. It's not mindless and cool. This is how cultivating immortals should be.

The writing is exquisite, the characters are vividly drawn, and every character in it has feelings and meanings, especially the plot of Manager Chen's breakthrough in the later stage of foundation building, and the detailed description of the growth process of each disciple. The protagonist's personality is also very distinct and his three views are very upright [Like][Admiration][Admiration] I really like watching it Another point is that the protagonist can reveal his identity. The direct suspicion between him and the second disciple is a bit uncomfortable, and it doesn't feel good about the progression of the plot later.

I have read 30 chapters so far. The rhythm is smooth, the conflicts, plot settings, character upgrades, etc. Are all very appropriate. The main characters have distinct personalities. It is an absolute good book!

Except for some plots that are a bit far-fetched, there are basically no problems. I hope the author writes better and better.

Although I was deceived by the author's title, I think this book is still acceptable. If you like pure and refreshing writing, don't read it. I like this book very much. I hope the author can finish it. Happy birthday to the author.

It's good-looking and I like it very much. I don't know when the apprentice's feelings for the protagonist started and how old the protagonist is.

The writing is quite delicate, and the description of life at the bottom is good.

Very good! The setting, writing, rich story, and complete logic! It just looks a little heavy.