Building a Powerhouse, Starting with Pokemon

Brothers, please comment! I want to progress!ヾ(^▽^*))) After six months of planning, the story of this book has come to an end for the time being. Thank you all for your continued support. If a newbie writes a book, the content may be a bit off-topic. This book is just for accumulating experience and generating electricity for love. The 800,000 words are really exhausting [cover face][cover face][cover face] I have no plans for the next book yet. If I want to write it, I may work hard on new themes, set a small goal, and strive to be able to work full time [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] Finally, I would like to thank all my readers again for their support. See you again when we are destined to be together [laugh][laugh][laugh]

First of all, as a novice's homework, it is already well written and full of fireworks. You can read it if you are tired of reading it. This book is based on the dual identities of the manor owner and the dojo owner, half farming and half alliance trainer. The system is there, but the sense of existence is not high. Next is the problem. A trip to Joey Ye is considered a high trip. I think the purpose of Pokémon's existence is to accompany and fight. From the perspective of companionship, it has the meaning of companionship, so it feels strange to have a harem of Pokémon (even though it is only about 2 or 3). Moreover, the subsequent interaction with Ogi Nanami will be very strange, and it feels like the protagonist's previous feelings for Joey Ye were clownish. The last suggestion is that since there is Donghuang's farming culture. I think the identity of the exchange students can be the children of high-ranking officials in the opposite alliance. They don't want to be fooled by fireworks. I think they just need to become a master of battle, and then grow together through the interaction with the protagonist. This would be better than leaving Joey Ye and having Nanami and Mingyi come back. When there are Pokémon, the heroine needs to be continued, which indirectly weakens the relationship between the protagonist and Joey Ye and the theme of Pokémon companionship. (In my humble opinion, I still hope Haihan.)

It's a bland Pokémon farming story, unlike some novels that are too focused on battles. The overall storyline is relatively novel and smooth [laughs] I don't like the emotional part very much [laughs awkwardly] Also, I personally prefer some specific data descriptions, so this part is very vague [thinking]

The author writes very well, I just hope that there will be no more knives between the male and female protagonists [crying] [crying] Most of the books about Pokémon that I have read before were stopped halfway through. This one is one of the few that I could read to the end. The writing style is bland, but it is not boring to read. The battle descriptions are very good, and the daily narrative sometimes makes jokes. It is very similar to Teacher Lu's book. Overall it is very good.

It's okay so far, but there are too few updates. There should be more updates in the future.

Good looking, good word count

It's very nice, but the rating is so low, why is that?

Yes, this rating is low

I like this book. I read Pokémon when I was a kid. What animations should I watch to supplement my knowledge? I've only watched Ash's Pikachu version [face covering]

Good looking, too little. Who is the heroine of the author? And when will Joey Ye return? @HantanKuying