This book is slow to develop and mainly depicts war scenes. The main plot advances slowly and may take a long time to write. I hope you can give more praise and brothers and sisters support me. Thank you all!
Reader comments
It has been said that the Warhammer world will be integrated in the future. Although I don't watch Warhammer very much, angels are heretics in the eyes of the Empire, and they are objects of conquest. They are neither angels nor humans. They are an independent race. I don't understand your plot of handing over Saint Gillis to angels. The Emperor only loves humans, doesn't he? And how good is Saint Gilis? The most powerful primarch, the Great Daemon of Khorne, could control a person in seconds and be controlled by a few angels. Anyone who knows a little bit can't stand it. It's true.
What level is the archangel? It was actually easily suppressed by a few little angels. You can think about whether you want to watch this thing.
We all came here for Warhammer, but you suppressed the archangel's combat power, and also made a reason to suppress the consciousness of the universe. In the eyes of Warhammer humans, angels are aliens, and the opposite sex cannot cooperate and can only be slaughtered. Yours does not conform to the setting of the Warhammer world, so this score is very appropriate.
Alas, although I have only read the first few chapters, I would like to give you some support and hope that some mistakes can be improved.
How could Sanctity be so weak when he was one of the most perfect Primarchs, and Sanctity would not have lost control without the Black Rage.
It has been said that the Warhammer world will be integrated in the future. Although I don't watch Warhammer very much, angels are heretics in the eyes of the Empire, and they are objects of conquest. They are neither angels nor humans. They are an independent race. I don't understand your plot of handing over Saint Gillis to angels. The Emperor only loves humans, doesn't he? And how good is Saint Gilis? The most powerful primarch, the Great Daemon of Khorne, could control a person in seconds and be controlled by a few angels. Anyone who knows a little bit can't stand it. It's true.
What level is the archangel? It was actually easily suppressed by a few little angels. You can think about whether you want to watch this thing.
We all came here for Warhammer, but you suppressed the archangel's combat power, and also made a reason to suppress the consciousness of the universe. In the eyes of Warhammer humans, angels are aliens, and the opposite sex cannot cooperate and can only be slaughtered. Yours does not conform to the setting of the Warhammer world, so this score is very appropriate.
Alas, although I have only read the first few chapters, I would like to give you some support and hope that some mistakes can be improved.
How could Sanctity be so weak when he was one of the most perfect Primarchs, and Sanctity would not have lost control without the Black Rage.