The Seventh Life Is Not the Past, but the Field of Yandere Shura

I just realized that there are no reviews, but it is indeed a very delicately written book. Some comments said that there was a doppelganger. When I saw it, it was already after the revision. After the revision, it was actually fine. However, in a fast-paced novel market like Tomato, as long as there is a slight surprise, it will basically be withdrawn from the bookshelf. If you want to write a reasonable harem male protagonist, you really have to be a bit lively. Just write that the female protagonist is very generous and accepts being separated from her husband. I think it is difficult for people to read Gongshi. The plot begins with removing the system to strengthen the body, and the level of yandere is just right. The author's writing style is also delicate enough. It is an upper-middle-class emotional novel that can keep people reading.

In fact, it's okay. It's something you can watch in Tomato. The interweaving of plot memories is still very smooth. Change it back to 4 stars, the writing is still okay

，，，，，，，Yw，，yw It is only right that there is friction between the heroines. Many of them are harmonious in the first place. This kind of multi-life rebirth novel must have constant friction in the Shura field. This kind of interaction and friction between the heroines can better reflect the distinctive personality characteristics of each heroine, and the characters come to life. I think the multi-life rebirth novels in Tomato are well written. I have only seen a few books. This one can be counted as one, but I don't know why the score is lower than those few books. Is it too early? I hope the author will add more [Like]

Really, don't have a clone, it will be a big poisonous point

Big boost, author, you are the best, the tonic has been affected by bad reviews! ! ! ! You can change the plot, but don't change the outline [cry][cry][cry][cry]

Don't be a clone. Can you listen to my advice? ! ! [Pouts]

Wuhu! The author is so good! If you can write, write more. This is something that married male authors cannot write. Only virgin authors can write it. It contains beautiful and innocent fantasies! I love it so much!

When I saw Chapter 422, this was the first book I read without skipping it alone. I think this book is comparable to Sumu's classic book. Although there are some interesting points, they are still quite few. If you are into yandere harem books, you can try this book.

The best stone, I can't be the only one to wear it

I have seen similar online articles before, this one is also very good

The characters of Xia Qishuang and Gu Yiyi L are very three-dimensional, but the contrast span is too big. Gu Yiyi was able to accept the harem after Xu Fan lost his memory. She suddenly changed from a paranoid and yandere to a clingy little girl. Although there was foreshadowing and Wenyuan came back later, it was still a bit sudden. Xia Qishuang can be said to be the second in the harem. She originally wanted to destroy the harem, but after Xu Fan died, she became indifferent. The bad woman suddenly became reasonable. Although it was for Xu Fan, she had the same problem with Gu Yiyi.

It's beautiful, very funny, different from previous yandere novels, and very creative

Very nice, I don't know who is criticizing it

Real and objective, mostly descriptions, which can help

Although it is an annoying plot insertion, fortunately it does not exceed fifty chapters, but twenty chapters is still too much for everyone, and then it feels a bit bland. It should be considered as a development without a dark background.

The emotional line with Master is really good, there is no such mindless imprisonment and coercion [note]

The characters are described delicately and the characters are rich and colorful. The psychological, profile, and language descriptions are all very exciting. The author's writing skills are very good. It's really like writing with a god. The simpler one is 6666666666!

Broader, wider, shrinking The pandan part is somewhat poisonous

Very good, fun

It's so beautiful, come on author [laughing]

I'm the only one, come and see [smile]

It's fun to watch, it's interesting

Pandan is a little poisonous

It's a good book. I'd like to ask the author if there's a long yandere monologue by one of the heroines in the book that I forgot about.

Author, could you tell me roughly what the foreshadowing is about? It makes me sad to see it. Tell me. [Cry]

Not bad. At least the author will listen and change it.

Actually, I really like this book.

It's good, but the space occupied by the women is quite uneven.

I understand, true love is a system [laughs evilly]. Accompanying the protagonist for seven lives

After reading it, I felt a little fast and a little overwhelmed without realizing it.