Toyokawa Shoko from the Ending Band

It's better looking than Shenren Yichuang, continuing the Ark orthodoxy

I always see the author saying some very Porky things at the end of the chapter, and he doesn't seem to be confident, but in my opinion this book has surpassed many fans of the same type. The two chapters are well integrated, and there are no obvious poisonous points. It is a very well written book.

I think we should be bolder when writing fan fiction. In many cases, OOC characters are not a big deal (just let me know who it is). I think that in order to add Xiangzi, not much new content was added. Instead, a lot of content from the original Lonely Rock was directly transferred to Xiangzi. It is very flattering and very fragmented. Of course, the experience of the novel itself is actually good. I hope the writing will get better and better [Blow kiss]

To be honest, according to the level of a newbie, it is actually okay. There is nothing particularly surprising. The most important thing is that the author is constantly improving. He cares about whether his writing is good and cares about the readers' feelings, rather than finishing the task and finishing it. But I suggest writing more descriptions from Xiangzi's perspective, and not focusing too much on the band members at the end of the original plot.

It's pretty cool, but what is Father Xiang planning to do now?

It's okay, although there are a few minor flaws, but overall it's pretty good.

Give me more stickers, just like a galagmu, and give me more special CGs for special plots [laughing] If there is no routine for the band's daily program, wouldn't it save time?

Really, I finished reading it in one go today, and then I realized that the author couldn't update the latest chapter QAQ Obviously the author's Xiaoxiang is super, super, super cute! But the author has very little confidence in himself, so he wrote very well. While reading, I can clearly feel the author's love for Xiaoxiang. As long as this is present, this book is not far behind. Xiaoxiang please be happy~

It's a pretty good fan work. The work you write can arouse people's expectations. Yes, I like you very much!

Come on! Very well written!

Five-star praise, so beautiful

The writing is very good, but depending on the plot development, it seems that the chicken group will appear in another situation? For example, in the form of an online band?

Super invincible and beautiful

I feel very good, cheers for the author✊

Beautiful, highly recommended book

Better looking than the hen card

The connection between mygo and the lonely rock plot is a bit rough in handling Xiangzi's emotional expression. But overall it's a good fanfic [Blowing Kisses]