Collapse of Iron**********

It looks good, but the protagonist doesn't look like a star god. Instead of defining the protagonist as a star god, why not just say that the protagonist is an envoy from the beginning. If nothing else is mentioned, how can a star god have such freedom? What is his destiny? It is true that the Star God is not comfortable with his destiny, but as the founder of the destiny, the Star God is the most steadfast follower of the destiny, and the most stubborn among countless destiny people. And although the Star God can choose to go against the destiny, it does not mean that there is no price. Didn't the Insect Emperor just give birth and be beaten to death by the Amber King's three hammers? No matter how powerful he is, it is impossible for him to destroy a star god with three hammers. Can't we say that the protagonist is blocked if he splits himself? So what's the point of the mutual exchange of knowledge between the left and right brains? Wouldn't it be enough for Him to just split Himself apart? He himself still follows his own destiny, and it is not himself who is exchanging ideas with him.

Don't say anything, give it to yourself, we are shameless [shy]

The setting is excellent, but the writing is insufficient. Many settings are straightforward, and a large amount of direct explanatory text is used to supplement the world view. The plot is a little confusing and the plot is too fast. However, this article is still at a higher level than similar works with the same setting, so it is given 5 stars for encouragement. After reading about chapter 20, I couldn't stand it anymore, the plot was outrageous. Let me ask you a question, suppose that one day, a person of unknown origin but very powerful suddenly appears in your house. He not only teases you, turns off the TV you watch, but also sleeps in your bed, becomes your classmate, and interferes with you when you are doing research projects. And the reason for all this is simply because a powerful C'tan wants to cosplay and be your sister. Yes, this is what happened between the protagonist and the Black Tower. This score is deserved. I have been very conservative, at least not starting with one star.

Very nice, Lily likes it [Like] You're not going to make a plot about torturing the main character, why don't you take it easy [Petrochemical]

Lily, Lily, I want to see Lily

No, where did my Lily CP go? After reading so many chapters, I still can't tell who is the CP of the protagonist. Now we can exclude the characters that have appeared. Then wouldn't Yunli and Huang Quan be the only ones left? I feel like hell is more likely, I want to see CP!

It's a five-star rating.

I really like this book [cool] I just like it.

Why has the update been discontinued?

I feel like the author probably won't come back