[Harry Potter original character × JoJo + no System but with a golden finger + a non-invincible growth story (Neville really doesn’t seem to have much magical talent) + Hermione has a lot of screen time, but she really isn’t the heroine, you know]
The first twenty-odd chapters follow the original story, since there’s no reason to stray from its course. The timeline starts diverging from the original at Christmas, when Neville realizes Dumbledore can’t be trusted.
Blood of Magic arc: Neville: My heart is pounding violently! It burns hot as a flame! Engrave it in your soul! The rhythm of this blood! Voldemort! Sunlight Yellow Overdrive, you know!
Chamber of Secrets arc: Neville: Ripple Overdrive, channeled through the Gryffindor Sword! Basilisk! Silver Overdrive, you know!
Rebel Fighters arc: Neville: I’m using the power of my invincible Shithead to figure something out.
Undying Trophy arc: Neville: It feels great to beat up the Death Eaters! It’s like greeting Christmas morning in a brand-new pair of underwear! (Wipes sweat)
Wind of the Phoenix arc: Neville: Voldemort, can you reach reality?
Sea of Souls arc: Neville: Your greatest sin, Voldemort, is that you don’t even think of yourself as evil.
Horcruxes, Saints, and Heaven arc: Neville: Well… that was quite a detour.
Voldemort, scheming to return, about to return, preparing to return, returned, lying low for a whole year, announcing his comeback, and promptly getting fired: So I’m looking for Potter! I didn’t choose you! Don’t come near me!!!
Not bad, very good, the writing is also very good, but not many people read it now
The characters are in line with the original work, but the protagonist could be made more mature. This would be considered a cool novel. When will the replacement come in?
Some paragraphs are a bit long, which affects the perception, but this is a new book with great potential. Good luck to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]
The writing is smooth, the writing style is free and easy, and the storyline is exciting and compact👍
The story is very exciting, the content feels quite daily, and the plot goes by very slowly.
Not bad, support it with four stars
Not bad, I'll give you four, I'm afraid you'll get bloated with one more.
A Certain Magical Index is awesome
Courage is the hymn of mankind. I like this golden spirit