After Traveling Through the Book, the Protagonist Feels Something Is Wrong with Him

There are a bit too many modifiers in the first few pictures. I think they could be a little less. These modifiers are more like a pile of words. Not only do they not make the article read more smoothly, but they also make the article read with a weird feeling and a flashy feeling, like watching the author show off his skills. But it is undeniable that the subject matter of this article is quite novel and the description is okay.

That is, the protagonist is a beta in the early stage and later differentiates into an omega. There is a secondary differentiation content, and then the personality changes of the protagonist in the early and late stages may make some readers feel that there is a cliff-like change.

There are some minefields, don't expand on them, there are spoilers. All content described in the full article, whether it is opinions, suggestions, analysis or other forms of expression, is solely based on my own knowledge reserves, experience accumulation, way of thinking and specific observation perspectives. It does not represent the position of any organization, group or other individual, nor should it be understood as a universally applicable or authoritative conclusion. It is for reference and discussion only. There are my thunder points, uncleanness, and Shou's two bodies are not his (I know it is through the book). Although I love Shou's soul, I still feel a little bit uncomfortable.

This novel is richly written, the author describes the scenes with an immersive feeling, and the storyline is eye-catching. This novel is a good choice if you need to accumulate vocabulary. You can accumulate it while reading the novel.

⚠️⚠️⚠️There is a b to o conversion, but it is not mentioned in the introduction. The point is a personal issue. The author's writing is smooth and the details are well described.

B turn o [laughing] You tricked me into coming here to kill you. Wasn't the introduction written as a beta? [Crying] The more I write from now on, the more I feel like it's not two strong characters. The first few chapters are really well written.

It's great to watch, Ye Shili and Jiang Jinyue are so sweet, and the writing style is very good. The pictures written give people an immersive feeling, as if they are actually there. It is a pure sweet story, there is no misunderstanding, and the protagonist's mouth is not in vain. Those who like sweet stories with two male protagonists can feel free to invest, and you will not lose money (◍•ᴗ•◍)

Likes to be receptive The character set has collapsed too much.

It's good to watch, but the ending feels too fast. They should have a lot of things happening, but he is absolute. I stayed up late until the end. The protagonist's emotional changes are very smooth. I like [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's really good! I haven't read such a relevant novel in a long time [Shy] Teacher, come on! [The Bird Eater Masterpiece] I really like to wear the text and say it's wonderful. I plan to read the teacher's update at the same time as the previously completed book. [Full] And it's very sweet! The cookie is my favorite [when I'm full], the protagonist also has a mouth, it's so cool.

I beg you all to take a look. This writing style is extraordinary. I like it so much. Please update it soon. . .

It's so beautiful. It's really beautiful. The author must make more updates ヽ(爱´∀｀爱)ノ

It's nice to look at. I feel like I'm trying to be stupid in the back, but it's really nice to look at.

It's very beautiful, and both of them are good little babies, and the author is also a good little baby [blowing kiss]

Read this novel! I will definitely think that this author is very cultured, really everyone should give it a try [face covering] It's so advanced, it's absolutely advanced.

Nice! The author should be careful not to use too many adjectives.

I sincerely recommend this book. I am very satisfied with this book so far. The author has clear ideas. The characterization is perfect. Come on!

It's really sweet. I hope you won't abuse it. Can the author please update it more? It's not enough (ಥ_ಥ) [Blow kiss]

Super pretty! ! ! ! Very, very well written! If you like this genre, I highly recommend checking it out! ! ! Beautiful, really beautiful, sweet text [love] [full]

Come on, author, you are great! Come on!

But then again, people like me who are not very good at writing adjectives can find a lot of material in it. If your brain is stuck, it's not a bad idea to come here [Thinking]

Who knows? After all the hard work, I finally found a well-written article and a plot that I like. I love the author so much [blowing kiss]

It's okay, the plot and characters are pretty good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very well written

Straight men don't do anything lightly. Love watching [laughing]

The author cheers, cheers, cheers

There are so few people with such good writing skills. This character is so touching.

There was a feeling of being overwhelmed, but finally relieved.

Cool! Not a word needs to be said. "ψ(｀∇´)ψ