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The number of words in the new book is not enough to read. The author probably did not save the manuscript. This needs to be corrected. This is a big taboo for novice writers. The writing style of the novel is still readable, the content is feasible and not too white, and the sentences are somewhat smooth. Although many details are not described, we readers can just make up for it. A slightly faster pace is not a big deal for a refreshing novel. I hope to see the new book in the future, come on!!! Give me a five-star review, don't be proud! I've tasted it, I can take a look at it, and it's quite smooth to listen to the book! It's not a brainless novel, there's quite a lot of foreshadowing. I like Li Mengran's chapter and Liu Ruyan's chapter. I love to read it. It's a good point to cover it. I just need to wipe it less next time. I went in last time and let my fellow Taoists see it. Unexpectedly, the author also wrote about Sister Bei Yu in "Winter". Fortunately, it didn't cover Sister Yu's deeds, it was just a joke. Apart from some typos, overall it's OK. After watching it for so long, I originally wanted to give it three and a half stars, but Tietie works so hard every day, with 4,000+ newbie updates per day, so I want to add an encouragement point anyway. Rounding it all off – five stars! Update me quickly!!! [Angry][angry][angry] Updated to 200,000 words, kick me, keep it for now!

The only thing I want to see is the protagonist turning Tiezhu into the protagonist's husband [Adoration] What a great relationship, it's not impossible to be a husband

For the time being, it looks pretty good. The behind-the-scenes + clone stream is relatively well written. No cp is very suitable for me

I'm sad that Chen Yi died. I don't want to read it. Although I won't continue reading it, I still hope that the author can continue to write well.