Western Fantasy: Redemption from the Start, Raising Believers in the Wasteland

The subject matter is good, like the body-stealing style from long ago, coupled with the current mainstream, the plot is quite interesting, but it always feels weird to mix in modern technology, and the world view is not so pure. There is still room for improvement in the writing. This sentence-by-sentence writing method makes people feel like they are reading poetry, which is inevitably a bit weird. The early development was a bit slow, but there should be a period of rapid development for Colin's Mission. I'm really looking forward to the next plot.

It's okay. The other day in the comment section, it was mentioned that the avatar is poisonous. Actually, I think it's okay. It's not just about using the avatar to fall in love. Moreover, the protagonist does need to do it himself to detect intelligence and assassinations. The protagonist's casting range is only so wide, and there must be some way to influence further places.

Tomato Novels is one of the few novels that is not offensive to women. The writing style is still very good and not sexist. Some novels are full of malicious sexism that is really hard to read. I hope the author will continue writing.

It's okay, I just hope you don't mess up the plot of the protagonist's incarnation

The description of combat power is a bit stretched, but the overall worldview is good and worth a look.

It looks good. At first I thought the world view was very small and consisted of humans and undead. Later I found out that there are other races, but I haven't written about them yet. It's really good-looking. The author will update soon!

It's okay. I can watch it, but it feels like the world is a bit small.

It's a pretty good novel, but the main character goes out to wander a little less often. When reading this book, you only look at the behind-the-scenes, group portraits, the protagonist's territory, and the development of his subordinates. No one wants to see the protagonist going out on his own.

The writing is very good. At least I can read it. I hope the author will stop being a eunuch.

There's not much to say, just a little bit