Dashan**********

I just started writing a novel, and the football article had to fit in with the timeline at that time, and a lot of information had to be analyzed, so the pace at the beginning will be slower, so please forgive me. Thirty chapters or so ago, the protagonist will be relatively depressed and his character will be relatively dull, because a child from the mountains has traveled across the ocean, and everything he faces is unfamiliar. He can only be cautious, careful, and risk his life to fight for an opportunity. But no matter how difficult it is, you will keep walking. Only after you have gone through it will flowers bloom from these thorns, the scenery and people on the road will gradually become clearer, the sea will be wider and the fish will jump, and the young man will also gain his friendship, love and dreams along the way. -------------------------------------------------- Many years later Ricardo: Zhang is a person who carries everything on his back and keeps moving forward Kaka: Zhang is the messenger of God. He came down to our house with the light that day. Lucas: Zhang is the best player I have ever seen, only a little bit worse than me. Ronaldo: You ask me who is the best player in the world? That must be me... And Zhang

The author writes really well. Although some people say that the emotional scene at the beginning is a bit redundant, I personally think it is the setbacks that will inevitably be encountered on the way to growth. The description is delicate and the growth process of Zhang San is very detailed. Author, you are not only writing about football itself, but also about the glorious journey of a young man who is not deeply involved in the world. Come on, I hope you can write better!

After reading the first 7 chapters, it was okay, but I can see that the author is very pursuing the artistry of the novel, and some plots are slightly exaggerated.

A rare book to read

The author writes very well. The protagonist relies entirely on his own efforts, step by step, keep up the good work✊

I would like to ask the author if this book has been significantly revised?

Well written, I like it very much

If you lie on the firewood and taste your courage, three thousand Yue armor can swallow up Wu. If you are determined, things will come true.

It's great. Although it was painful at first, it got over after a while.

The setting of the novel is very good. It is not a systematic novel that is popular nowadays. The protagonist grows up step by step on his own. This is very good.

It's worth watching. There is no system, and it's not the kind of game where you just win casually. There are losses and wins, that's real football.

A very close to real life and very inspirational book

Good description, very immersive

I didn't expect it to be so beautiful

A very good football article [like]

Very nice hahaha

Big cheers for the author

Although I just read it, the emotional characters are well written.

A book worth reading. A novice football fan read it all night long [laughing and crying]

I was fascinated by it, not bad, but too little. I finished it in a few times.

Is it the first person in the back?

How could it be possible to come here at just 5 o'clock? This is beautiful, I'm not going to lie to you.

Well written, the plot is emotional and touching!