Octopus**********

Good looking, recommended. [Blowing kiss] Before I clicked in, I saw an interesting comment. "The two people on the cover sleeping hugging each other are no less than the Trisolarans surrendering to humans." Watch, watch. I think this is obviously the MVP scene after the protagonist is cured. Laugh XD

The plot is well written, it should make up for regrets, it is more daily and warm, I personally like this kind of story better, Xiaoxin is not very OOC, and the character description is more detailed. [Almost crying] It's so sweet. When I was watching the video, I wanted to find a sweeter fanfic. This book is more in line with my expectations. I feel that this book will do better in the future. I hope the author can stick to it. Personally, I feel that the plot will be more compact. Regarding things like kendo, you can write or pretend to be cool, but you must not write too much. You must distinguish the priority of fan fiction. I read a novel before, and the original score was quite high, about eight to nine points. However, most of the comics and fan fiction were about kendo. Why are you so awesome?

A very good book and a very good story. It portrays Marina and Shizuka very well. It also tells the reasons why these two children became gods and helped them grow. I haven't seen such a good book in a long time. I burst into tears.

Shen Nong has tested the poison, and the mild poison is acceptable. The two female protagonists are pure magic pills in the original work. There is no good fault and nothing to clean up. They may have been directly corrected due to censorship factors. Generally speaking, apart from the original work, it is a relatively good world view, the author's writing style is also good, and the Crayon Shin-chan elements that I like are really good. I have just finished reading this daily light novel. I feel that it is a little less interesting and everything goes smoothly. The two girls have become harems. It is a good way to relieve boredom. It is very enjoyable to read regardless of the flaws.

I feel that the author is quite familiar with Crayon Shin-chan's style. When I read the novel, I felt like I had watched an episode of Crayon Shin-chan. However, Octopus P's role is a bit less, but it's okay so far, so update me quickly, you bastard!

I'll give it five stars for the time being. It's very tolerant for this type of novel. It's a reborn child + two heroines. I'd like to give you some advice. Don't let the hero and heroine get too close or confess their feelings before going to college. The story of Crayon Shin-chan and Octopus is now almost over. The focus can be given to Crayon Shin-chan. Of course, the core is rebirth of love, but how to write it after that still follows the author's ideas. So far, the pace is okay, but the pace has been a bit rushed recently. You can consider introducing some Crayon Shin-chan movie versions, or the author can read some love novels about reborn children and two childhood sweethearts. Finally, I would like to emphasize that the protagonist cannot establish a relationship with the heroine before college, and cannot have close contact with each other openly. This is my personal suggestion. It is really important. Alas, we have come this far.

It's the only Octopus P fic among Western Persimmons that I feel I can watch. The background blends well with the world of Crayon Shin-chan, and I highly recommend it.

In fact, I don't particularly like watching Octopus Phi, this kind of campus bullying anime. After all, it is really too cruel, and I am not particularly able to accept the harm of these children. Therefore, this book can really see the protagonist working hard to save these people. Coupled with the well-designed plot of Crayon Shin-chan, this dark world is forcibly opened up to a warm blue sky. Crayon Shin-chan The appearance of is definitely the magic touch of this book. No one can bring you endless happiness like Crayon Shin-chan. He is a very lovable and mischievous child, but he is really addictive. It is a bit like Doraemon. Girls may think of Chibi Maruko-chan, but for boys, I really think that Crayon Shin-chan and Doraemon can bring endless happiness to people.

It's a very interesting book. I thought the rating and physical test would be embarrassing and purely YY, but surprisingly it was pretty good. The author can wait for the plot of Octopus Pi to be completed, then add some plots from Crayon Shin-chan movies to experience with Octopus Pi and reverse some tragedies. This should be interesting.

Personally speaking, I actually feel good about it. The protagonist has a Japanese-style Asashi feel, but not completely Asashi. Personally, I feel pretty good, but I kind of want to see the shameless scene [smile][smile][smile]

Very beautiful, highly recommended. The author cleverly combines Crayon Shin-chan and Octopus Pi. The love and death between the two heroines and the male protagonist in the book is also very good. The overall writing style is very smooth and has no poisonous points. At least I don't think I see any poisonous points. I highly recommend this book. It can be said that this is the most beautiful short text I have ever read. The author's imagination is also very good. I personally guarantee that this book is very good! ! !

Oh my god, it healed me to death. I just finished watching the original sin animation of Octopus. I thought that I would not have deep feelings after reading the comic. Unexpectedly, it still shocked my soul. It is no less than when I read the comic. I just need such a healing thing to make up for my injured soul. Author, you write well, you write really well [Like]

It must be praised. I was so uncomfortable watching the ending of the Octopus anime. This one is a novel combination of Crayon Shin-chan, and it is also a daily article. It is very good, but it is too short, with only more than 60 chapters. The author needs to update it quickly.

Nice! Especially after I read the Octopus Sin comics, I came to the conclusion that this book is really good. The content is about daily life but the writing is very warm, especially the interaction between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists. In addition, the male protagonist also gave him a twist on some heartbreaking scenes from the original film. Like the tree in the octopus skin. The superposition of two daily dramas creates a magical state in this novel. Highly recommended.

It's a great novel. Xiaoxin's character is also very restored. I just want to know how to write the movie version and the ghost story in the future. I think I should rely on the secret book given by the kendo master. Reading the description can help me to exercise my spirit.

I love watching it. The male protagonist is a succubus and the two female protagonists are pretty good [laughs]

I'll give it four stars first, mainly because Xiaoxin's writing is really about daily light-hearted writing. To write Xiaoxin well, you really need to have a deep understanding of the interesting things in life, which the author lacks. But it's understandable. On the other hand, the romantic comedy of Octopus Pi can be said to be very interesting, even surpassing the fun of Xiaoxin. Finally, I would like to remind you that just a few Crayon Shin-chan characters are included. If you add them all in, you will lose the romantic comedy that the author is best at. For example, the Saji family is obviously a character that fills in family affection and warmth and only appears in the later stages. I personally think that it is completely unnecessary to add it to the book. This is probably the only bad thing I think, that Xiaoxin's characters are complicated and messy, so consider it as appropriate. Four stars because a romantic comedy is interesting enough to give it four stars

The author describes this book very well. Opening a small book and having a relaxing daily life is in line with the style of the book I want to read. It can be regarded as a novel that slightly makes up for regrets. Personally, it feels a bit like an urban rebirth article. But if you don't like it, it's because you're young and it's a bit ambiguous, so you don't have to read it, but there's not much space. I personally recommend the author. , Well, try not to write ambiguous things when you are young, and then start writing when you are older. I have read a lot of novels about being reborn as a child or traveling back in time, and many of them have been blocked in this way. But there are indeed readers who like this.

Look! The protagonist's succubus physique is max. A relaxing daily novel about healing and salvation! Recommended [blowing kiss]

After reading the original novel, I felt a great sense of fragmentation when I read this one. The school violence caused by the upbringing of two little girls due to their original family, plus a god-man octopus providing some props. I can only say that, contrary to God, the novel has already completed half of the HD ending by controlling the octopus. Currently, it is a five-star review. You can taste it. What's more, the author is simply a superman. From time to time, he will hold back his loud words and surprise the readers.

The writing is not bad, and the author is more relaxed about testimonials, many paragraphs of comments are hidden😰

Overall, it looks pretty good. The two works are well integrated and there are no blockages. The character design of the protagonist is also very good. There is no problem with Xiaoxin. On the contrary, the writing is quite good. As for the other animation, although I have read his original comic, I still don't want to make too much of an evaluation. Anyway, I'll give it a try in the future [face covering]

The unripe fairy grass that was cut in half was destroyed by demons during its growth period and turned into a vulgar object. The characters in the book are all very well created, very much like anime, and they feel very restored. It's really amazing. Although the direction of the love line has been explained at the beginning, it always feels like a big harem is to be opened. Although the orthopedic new son is the definite ending, the teacher, aunt and other sisters... It is difficult to say. The feeling of daily style is too strong, but the daily style is more suitable for leisure viewing. If you pursue it too much, you will feel that some storylines are lacking in content, but it is already over, there is nothing more to say. Still looking forward to when I can come back and watch Cao Pi's session😭😭😭😭

It's pretty good, but it's a pity that it's discontinued. It's logical and not mindless. I'm quite looking forward to it. It's just that I haven't read it in a while. I recommend watching it. This is my opinion on this novel. The structure of this novel is rigorous and clear. From the introduction at the beginning, to the progression in the middle, and to the sublimation at the end, it is all done in one go, with a strong sense of logic. The author's ability to control the novel is very good. The connections between each paragraph are natural and the key points are highlighted, allowing readers to easily follow his train of thought. At the same time, the author's selection of content is also very novel, showing his observation and creativity.

It's well written and very interesting, but I want to see the Hatto Shura field become a river of blood.

It feels so good. I haven't read Crayon Shin-chan for a long time. Octopus. Uh, what's the Q or P? Forget it, it's not very important. It's the first time I've read a fanfic. I don't know how many days have passed since the summer vacation. I finished it in one day today. Okay, I won't say any more. I'm going to read other novels and wait for it to be updated.

I love watching it. Although I haven't watched Octopus, it doesn't stop me from finding it good to watch. In addition, Crayon Shin-chan's image and comedy are just right. I suggest you open up other theatrical versions of the movie so that you can write more.

It's very sophisticated, not like a novice. The plot and emotional lines are handled much better than many best-sellers. It's quite comfortable to read.

The early theme was probably the octopus cracking rescue flow. The writing was very vivid, especially for Xiaoxin. The author must have done a lot of research. Although there are some modern jokes coming out of Xiaoxin's mouth, they are not very inconsistent. Now the overall atmosphere and rhythm are still very comfortable. But when I think that the main body of this Shura field is a group of primary school students, I feel very awkward! It is a light-hearted and enjoyable book, very good.

The characters in the book are not OOC, the content is substantial, the pace is moderate, and it is entertaining. It is the only novel about Octopus that you can read on Tomato (I really like the sinister Shizuka in the book!!!). I just hope that the author will not run away midway. I will keep following it.