Crayon Shin-chan: At Elementary School, I Meet Takopi

Good looking, recommended. 😘 Before I clicked in, I saw an interesting comment. "The two people on the cover sleeping hugging each other are no less than the Trisolarans surrendering to humans." Watch, watch. I think this is obviously the MVP scene after the protagonist is cured. Laugh XD

The plot is well written, it should make up for regrets, it is more daily and warm, I personally like this kind of story better, Xiaoxin is not very OOC, and the character description is more detailed. 🥺 It's so sweet. When I was watching the video, I wanted to find a sweeter fanfic. This book is more in line with my expectations. I feel that this book will do better in the future. I hope the author can stick to it. Personally, I feel that the plot will be more compact. Regarding things like kendo, you can write or pretend to be cool, but you must not write too much. You must distinguish the priority of fan fiction. I read a novel before, and the original score was quite high, about eight to nine points. However, most of the comics and fan fiction were about kendo. Why are you so awesome?

A very good book and a very good story. It portrays Marina and Shizuka very well. It also tells the reasons why these two children became gods and helped them grow. I haven't seen such a good book in a long time. I burst into tears.

Shen Nong has tested the poison, and the mild poison is acceptable. The two female protagonists are pure magic pills in the original work. There is no good fault and nothing to clean up. They may have been directly corrected due to censorship factors. Generally speaking, apart from the original work, it is a relatively good world view, the author's writing style is also good, and the Crayon Shin-chan elements that I like are really good. I have just finished reading this daily light novel. I feel that it is a little less interesting and everything goes smoothly. The two girls have become harems. It is a good way to relieve boredom. It is very enjoyable to read regardless of the flaws.

I feel that the author is quite familiar with Crayon Shin-chan's style. When I read the novel, I felt like I had watched an episode of Crayon Shin-chan. However, Octopus P's role is a bit less, but it's okay so far, so update me quickly, you bastard!

I'll give it five stars for the time being. It's very tolerant for this type of novel. It's a reborn child + two heroines. I'd like to give you some advice. Don't let the hero and heroine get too close or confess their feelings before going to college. The story of Crayon Shin-chan and Octopus is now almost over. The focus can be given to Crayon Shin-chan. Of course, the core is rebirth of love, but how to write it after that still follows the author's ideas. So far, the pace is okay, but the pace has been a bit rushed recently. You can consider introducing some Crayon Shin-chan movie versions, or the author can read some love novels about reborn children and two childhood sweethearts. Finally, I would like to emphasize that the protagonist cannot establish a relationship with the heroine before college, and cannot have close contact with each other openly. This is my personal suggestion. It is really important. Alas, we have come this far.

It's the only Octopus P fic among Western Persimmons that I feel I can watch. The background blends well with the world of Crayon Shin-chan, and I highly recommend it.

In fact, I don't particularly like watching Octopus Phi, this kind of campus bullying anime. After all, it is really too cruel, and I am not particularly able to accept the harm of these children. Therefore, this book can really see the protagonist working hard to save these people. Coupled with the well-designed plot of Crayon Shin-chan, this dark world is forcibly opened up to a warm blue sky. Crayon Shin-chan The appearance of is definitely the magic touch of this book. No one can bring you endless happiness like Crayon Shin-chan. He is a very lovable and mischievous child, but he is really addictive. It is a bit like Doraemon. Girls may think of Chibi Maruko-chan, but for boys, I really think that Crayon Shin-chan and Doraemon can bring endless happiness to people.

It's a very interesting book. I thought the rating and physical test would be embarrassing and purely YY, but surprisingly it was pretty good. The author can wait for the plot of Octopus Pi to be completed, then add some plots from Crayon Shin-chan movies to experience with Octopus Pi and reverse some tragedies. This should be interesting.

Very beautiful, highly recommended. The author cleverly combines Crayon Shin-chan and Octopus Pi. The love and death between the two heroines and the male protagonist in the book is also very good. The overall writing style is very smooth and has no poisonous points. At least I don't think I see any poisonous points. I highly recommend this book. It can be said that this is the most beautiful short text I have ever read. The author's imagination is also very good. I personally guarantee that this book is very good! ! !